Ceranthor Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Here are some more cards that I made, also based on Greek myth. Enjoy and COMMENT. I like criticism, it helps me improve. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of " Neptune the Sea King" or " Pericles, Knight of Sparta. If this card is succesfully Special Summoned, you may remove two LIGHT monsters and one EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play to destroy every Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. ATK 3000/ DEF 1900 ATK 1400/ DEF 1200 ATK 1700/ DEF 1200 ATK 1500/ DEF 1000 Image credit goes to deviantART and http://images.google.com/imgres? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Don't you mean knight of Macedon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceranthor Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Don't you mean knight of Macedon? No, in old Greek its Makedon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 You may want to learn the new OCG. Otherwise, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Don't you mean knight of Macedon? No' date=' in old Greek its Makedon.[/quote'] Well at least you are a noob who makes good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceranthor Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Haha, thanks( I think). Anything I need to fix? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 That is a compliment >_> I feel generous tonight. Also OCG errors:your side of the field = your control or for opponent = Opponent controls For numbers use the numerical symbol 1,2,3,4,5 etc. may = can sacrifice = Tribute deck = Deck every = each Remember to put " " around names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceranthor Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Didn't I? Thanks for the others though; I'll try and fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 The "I think" part confused me. Also capitalize Life Points, they seem balanced so far as I can see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceranthor Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Ohh damn that is right, I forgot to put the quotations. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 You may look at your card 'Knight of Sparta: Pericles' in the OCG, because it requires a non-existing card (the name is wrong). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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