drawman3354 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 So this is my first set of cards based off of a story I am writing. All art is credited to Deviantart and Lineage II concept art, and some artists are specifically referenced in the parenthesis in the bottom right corner next to M. Voidwalker, my pen-name. All criticism, feedback, praise, hatred, etc is welcome. I did my best to refine the OCG, but point out anything I missed! Hope you all enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omenhiikoyashi Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Well you asked for criticism and here it is.... First off you can't have fake types like: Dream, Nightmare, Chaos, and Doppleganger. Second a few OCG errors but nothing really that dosen't get the point across. Other than that I'd give you a 9.3/10 great pics btw my favorite is the Killipede (love the flavor text for it) and Ariana Oblivion (For it's Unique style of effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drawman3354 Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Cool, thanks! I figured I was making up some new types, but I tried to make cards that worked with them specifically within the expansion to give it a feel of connection. Glad you liked em though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PremierAameer Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 There is nothing wrong with making a new Type (Why do think the Card Maker allows you to do so?). However, I wouldn't advise you introduce so many at 1 time. Also I would suggest that you entertain the idea of using Subtypes and Archetypes instead. Subtypes are similar to Types. A monster can have both a Type and Subtype. Some examples of Subtypes are Spirit, Gemini and Tuner Monsters. A Subtype allows a set of monsters their own distinct special ability without creating an entire new species.ie. you could try Fairy/Dream, Fiend/Doppleganger etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 This goes in finished sets and Few OCG, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PremierAameer Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Continuing on..An Archetype is a term added to a monster's name. It allows you to create a set of monsters from all kinds of Types, Attributes and Subtypes (it goes both ways). Some examples of Archetypes are Elemental Hero, Archfiend, Dark Scorpion, Gravekeeper's, Crystal Beast and Volcanic (+ so much more) Archetypes are considerably less confusing than Subtypes. Well, congratulations on your first set. The cards have been well designed and well written. If you want TCG style OCG corrections I will be happy to assist you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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