Reitako Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Well, hello to everyone. I found this maker and i totally love it! :) ...so, there my first Cards. (Actually i create cards in german, so that's why there is an ENG-EDIT.) Pic's © by Reitako Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Actually, there are several problems with these cards:-They are not supposed to be Equip Cards.-You added flavor-like text which is not supposed to be on them.-OCG is kinda off, but this can be corrected:Decoded Inscription: Activate this effect if there is at least 1 DARK monster on the field. Destroy a Spell or Trap Card on the field.Symbol of Player: Activate this effect when a monster you control would be destroyed. Special Summon this monster on the field and halve the ATK and DEF of the summoned monster.(may be somewhat off, I'm not perfect in OCG, but it may give a base idea what's wrong)The first card is somewhat like Mystical Space Typhoon for DARK decks. Not that bad, but not that original either.The second card ... well, it may have some combos with cards which are not used for their ATK and DEF, but for their effects. Kinda hard to judge.In total, I give you 6.5/10. After correcting the mistakes in OCG, it can be 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reitako Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Okay, that was hard, but thanks for it, i'll correct it. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 One is a trap card and you should have a monster 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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