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Windowlicker Newbie

Windowlicker

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[align=center]blackmarauderholok.jpg

 

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Once per turn you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent.

 

 

Since this card's been holoed, it'll be quite hard to change mistakes.

 

Enjoi.

 

Unless they are funny, stupid comments result in neg reps.

 

EDIT: Picture & text has been slighty blurred thanks to image hosting :?[/align]

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Zeaux Newbie

Zeaux

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OCG fix

 

Once per turn pay 500 Life Points. If you cannot, destroy this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's control. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

 

good card balanced but i's not too original 8/10

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Leturn Master Newbie

Leturn Master

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"Zeaux" basically corrected the OCG (actually fixed part of it, and messed up another part), but if you don't change anything, this card seems to fit realistically into a card set from a 2004 or something (like a promo card in "Power of Chaos: Kaiba the Revenge").

 

Definitely deserving of a +Rep.

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rustyowl Newbie

rustyowl

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The pic is good, and the holo makes it only better. However, the OCG was edited, so I can't really judge that. The card's effect isn't the most original, as archfiends must pay life points as well. It is a bit OP'ed as well. So, I can give you a 7/10.

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Noble Legend Newbie

Noble Legend

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Meh. Boring...

Too many "triggers" in the effect.

 

Still haven't changed a bit Icy :P

This card seems balanced, but as Icy said, too many triggers in the effect. Also not very original - although I guess it is getting harder to make original cards each day. The picture and the holoing effect looks nice on the card, but a card with a pretty picture is useless if the card's effect cannot match up. Though I'm guessing this is said a thousand times and many people don't take it into consideration, I hope you do. Won't even go into OCG as it's changed so much since I've last made a clue, I'm still in the ancient days.

 

I'm not much of a fan of rating but it's a good card overall, but can be made better.

 

>>Noble

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.Gideon. Newbie

.Gideon.

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Sweet card, the pic is basically epic.

However It should be a Fiend or a Zombie,

 

 

Your OCG is old but I guess it's ok,

cannot be destroyed as a result of battle = by battle

on your opponent's side of the field= your opponent controls

800 points of damage = 800 damage

 

and one more thing, this card has some kind of Op'ness I think, just to fix that add "This card cannot be Special Summoned".

Since it's a Level 7 and cant be special summoned it will be very well balanced

 

 

8.5/10 very good keep it up

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Shocked Newbie

Shocked

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[align=center]OxygënHydrõ™ Rating

 

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Comments :

 

Good holo

Good pic

Good name

I don't like the effect

 

 

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OCG fix

 

Once per turn you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent.

 

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Pic : 10/10

Balance : 5/10

OCG : 7/10

 

Overall : 7.3/10

 

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My Rating

 

10/10 : EPIC !!!

9/10 : Almost Perfect, little more

8/10 : Great Work

7/10 : Good Enough

6/10 : Balancing Needed

5/10 : Need Remakes, Fixing, and Balancing

4/10 : Unacceptable

3/10 : Is this a card ??

2/10 : You burn my eyes !!

1/10 : Don't make this card again !!!

0/10 : I can't say anything, except EPIC FAIL

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Mizuku Kagirinai Newbie

Mizuku Kagirinai

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I can't say how utterly awesome this card really is. Infact, I LOVE it. Probably one of THE best cards I've seen on this forum, ever. Seriously, it has great art, a suitable effect, great OCG, holo'd text... What's not to like? Simply. The. Best.

 

I don't throw this around much at all, but this deserves a 10/10. I'd give higher if I could - really a great effort!

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