Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 [align=center]I want to put this card on my new set http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118190.html so i need to know if it's good or noif have any OCg error plz tell me [spoiler=Effect]This card is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Spell Cards. Every time a Spell Card is activated, increase both player's Life Points by 500. During your Standby Phase, you can pay 800 Life Points to add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. Synchro Prodigious Demon [spoiler=Effect]1 "Prodigious Demon" monster Tuner + Prodigious Demon - HarlinAs long you control a face-up Spell Card, This card is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to draw 2 cards. If you draw a "Prodigious Demon" monster, Special Summon it. A monster Soecial Summoned by that effect, is destroyed during the End Phase. I'am not sure about the OCG cuz i dont like syncrho monsters sp plz help me [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 OCG FIX - This card is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Spell Cards. Every time a Spell Card is activated, increase both player's Life Points by 500its ok u could add something to make the effect more interesting but good card overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Yeah, OCG is good, but expand more on the effect, it seems kinda boring. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 what i can add to this card? I am out of ideas today XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 maybe you can add like an effect by paying life points because it already helps increase life pointsim not sure just an idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 You spelled "Prodigious" wrong. You make much better cards. This one is ok. :(Cm'on it can be longer... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 well a good ideamaybe :By payng 800 Life Points, add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand"what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Wait; a LIGHT Fiend-Type monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 yeah i thinked about it toobut it's effect is increse LP so i thinked a Ligth attribute is good or maybe i change the type of this card what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Spell Card= Spell Cards Each time= Whenever (I think) Too simple, work hard on your cards. If you are going to post these cards, you need to put your heart into it! (not literally) :D, good pic. So overall, I'd have to say a 7.3/10. Not bad! Not bad! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 ok wait a minute i will change it effect rigth now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 It's good to see you like improving your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Thanx marvel EDITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 How about; as an addition By Tributing this face-up Defence Position card, Special Summon 1 "Prodigious Demon" from your hand in face-up Attack Position. Could work, this will help link it to your set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 alright more interesting but its kinda OP'd now because you can keep paying 800 life points and add Spell Cards until you dont want too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 yeah but you lose 300 LP it' not much but i think it's alrigth nowand Marvel thanx for the advice i wil try to fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 alright more interesting but its kinda OP'd now because you can keep paying 800 life points and add Spell Cards until you dont want too No, because it's during your Standby. Which means, it is once per turn. It even has to be on the field a turn BEFORE you can activate the spell card. Now I bump my score to 8.5/10. MUCH better. As for the other card, perfect OCG, non blurry pic, also it has a relative effect to the other cards. Since it also requires Harlin, it is similar to Harlin. Great Job with that one! 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 i like 'em, but you need to make more. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 WOW really thanx!!!!!and legendhiro i am making a set of it it's on my sig go rate plz!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 1st card is okay, second card is OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 the unaffected part is a bit much, but as a whole they aren't too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 i will try to fix itany rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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