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[bigbat97]

[[/font]Hey i hope you guys like my cards!!!!

 

 

[Doom_Shaman]

i HATE to be critical, but i just have to :(

 

no divine monsters

 

neither of them have atk or def points. and its mot explained how to get any

 

yalda doesnt have a type.

 

one card cannot damage another. do you mean destroy???

 

it was a good try tho

[Infinitus]

Look, this is the realistic card section. These aren't realistic. These belong in the Any Other card section. If you want to post in the realistic, then they need to be like real cards. Simple :D enjoy the forum!

[Baroque in Paradise]

Ugh.

 

I apologize, but that is the first thing that comes to mind here.

 

If you MUST make a Divine-Beast (or any card for that matter) with variable stats, then please detail HOW its stats are determined and HOW MUCH it gets through said determinant (e.g., Slifer the Sky Dragon's effect details how it gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each card in its controller's hand, i.e. the 'X' in its 'X000' ATK and DEF is equal to the number of cards in its controller's hand).

 

Second point of note, if you MUST insist on this madness, then here's a way to re-word Yelada's effect so that it doesn't incite Grammar Nazis:

 

'This card is unaffected by the effects of "Rai, Dragon of Darkness". This card cannot be destroyed or removed from the field except by battle with a "Rai, Dragon of Darkness".'

 

The reason I worded it like that is because it best-captures the spirit of your original effect while still obeying proper syntax (what people around here seem to call 'OCG').

 

Try not to take offense to this post, and instead use it as aid -- it's my intent.