shatteredfox Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 I'm going to avoid a long description this time, enjoy and please critique(especially about the OCG, don't care how much of hardass you are about it.) this card cannot be Normal Summoned' date=' Special Summoned or Set Summoned. This card can be summoned by tributing one "Diana, Herald of the Beginning." and 1 monster 5 Stars or higher. When this card destroys a monster Your Opponent Controls. You can inflict 800 Damage to both player's Life Points.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Your OCG is OK, but you have minor+moderate errors. The pics are good too, effects are ... meh. lol, good start :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shatteredfox Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Your OCG is OK' date=' but you have minor+moderate errors. The pics are good too, effects are ... meh. lol, good start :)[/quote'] fast reply O.O!? Anyways wanted to ask, what are some of the errors? Or do you know any sticky, post, or site. That has OCG wording and such. I found one thread "OCG Grammar Thread" but it's very incomplete, and assumes you know a good amount of OCG already lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 good cards for a 1 level member of course have OCG errorsbut for the pics and effects 9/10 and a + rep for you i liked your cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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