Doom_Shaman Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 ok how on earth do i phrase that effect with correct ocg n grammer??? i really need help. also what do you think of the idea??? his effect is supposed to help my demon kings set but its versatle so itll help synchros as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kroama Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Im not too good, but i think you're right.Once per turn you can pay Life Points in increments of 100 (Max 10). Special Summon 1 "Malicious Fiend Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ?/ATK 0/DEF 0) where the level is equal to every 100 Life Points paid. I dunno if my capitalization is correct... only thing wrong with yours i think is that you spelt increment and whos(e) wrong IMO you should totally make him a level 4 tuner with really low stats xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 thnx :D idk if ima make him a lv 4 or not yet. he has to be uniform with the other generals whom i have yer to finish effects 4 look at my demon kings set and youll get what im going for can i get a 2nd i wanna be sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despair From The Dark Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Hmm.. that's a toughie. How's this sound: Once per turn, you can pay up to 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Malicious Fiend Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ?/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your side of the field. Increase the Level of the "Malicious Fiend Token" by 1 for every 100 Life Points paid to Special Summon it. Well, that's my attempt. For the most part, it's hard to be certain. Seeing as it's an effect I haven't seen before. Hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 ok thnx. anyone else??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Hmm.. that's a toughie. How's this sound: Once per turn' date=' you can pay up to 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Malicious Fiend Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ?/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your side of the field. Increase the Level of the "Malicious Fiend Token" by 1 for every 100 Life Points paid to Special Summon it. Well, that's my attempt. For the most part, it's hard to be certain. Seeing as it's an effect I haven't seen before. Hope that helps.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 soo....... ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despair From The Dark Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Yay, you picked the one 1 wrote! Although I did get part of the idea from the wording Kroama's version. I think that works, but you should also see what more experienced card makers think as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 What exactly are "Increments"? 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 OCG fix Once per turn, you can pay up to 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Malicious Fiend Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level ?/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your field. Increase the Level of the "Malicious Fiend Token" by 1 for every 100 Life Points paid to Special Summon it. Cards effect is kinda short, could do with something better or extra. I'm guessing these tokens would be used for Synchro's. Effect is good but not keen on the "Malicious Fiend" name, that card is kinda taken. I dont like the pic, its not really card worthy, but if it said alot about the card, it would suit, but for me its just the pic gratz on your effort. After fix: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 ok thnx. ima go with marvels any ideas for the token name??? also this is the 2nd of the 3 generals go to my demon kings set if you dont get their effects usefulness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despair From The Dark Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Yah, Marvel changed "to your field." which does sound better. Also, Olivier. Did you mean: "increase this cards Level by 1." Also, I don't think increase is capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 the token's name could be fiend soldier or dark fiend, not so sure, 7/10 BTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 thnx guys :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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