Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 [align=center]Its been far to long since I've made a card. I've been making great cards for months, probably half my time on Ycm, but it definitely shows that i need to upgrade to newer 5ds ocg. First time I've made a card with such an effect, if i fail this time, i won't be amazed and just restart. I'm hoping this card will start up a new Elven set. V.2 Thanks to Essence and Mirage V.3 A new twist...fail. Slightly disappointed in myself for not keeping fresh with ocg. Picture Credit: http://genzoman.deviantart.com/I would like to thank Genzoman, I've found he makes amazing pictures that work with my ideas well. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Well, no it does not. You are doing fine were you are. Maybe a little more work, and you will be fine ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Thank you. can't wait for mirage to see.....Mirage and DeMenTed always seem to find my flaws. can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Well, actually your flaw is the wording. "This card can only be equipped to an "Elvin" Monster. Select 1 monster on the field and half its ATK and add the same amount to the ATK of the equipped monster." Corrected ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Light Flash Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 That pic is awesome! ^_^ 9.555/10 IT'S OVER 9000 (not counting the decimal) XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Elven doesn't come up on spell check as wrong. Elvin doesn't either...makes me confused.....>< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 You called? The effect is okay, OCG correction right above. I love how this card is a little OP. It weakens a monster and makes a card you control stronger. Seems like a beat down style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Ill change it. Forgot to make it till the end phase, but i like this version more. Beat down pwns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Yea, but not the only way. You need to think of other way cards should work. What is the concept of the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Honestly, I don't think of that when i make singles. This wasn't meant to be in a set, but in the hopes to start the idea of a set. But in thinking of the concept. Attacking Life Points Directly [Elvin Archers]Draining and Increasing Attack or Defense. [ Inspired by this card] Also, V.2 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Seems like a beat stick theme, but I hope it is more then that. Also monster is lowercase after the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 sorry, just copied and pasted Essence's post. Forgot to read over his grammar Fixing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Essence is a female =.= Well also if you need any help you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Gender Fail. well, will do.I added an updated version.and gave another version a different twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 -bump- a bit early i know, but might not be on later tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xymma Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 great card, few ocg errors doesn't seem to bad, but a theme to go with it would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 preety good the 3 version and this pic is from genzomen from deviantart his pics is awesome!! i give you 9/10 i want to see the elvin set!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 genzo makes awesome pics. thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101rascalflatts Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 I dont get why you use the same pic and name for all your cards Cool 11/10 for pics :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 because they're all the same card, just better/updated version. that is why. Im guessing you didn't notice the little V.2 or V.3 things..... please don't rate for picture, not what i made nor what the section is for. but thank you anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Version 3 is pretty good' date=' and this pic is from [b']'genzomen'[/b] from deviantart His pics are awesome!! I give you 9/10 I want to see the elven set!!! This. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 -bump- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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