Duplicitous Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 alot of ocg errors, no original effects that witch is OP over all 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 alot of ocg errors' date=' no original effects that witch is OP over all 3/10.[/quote']OCG errors where??? 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 I can see alot of OCG errorsDwarf Shield Breaker:'While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot set monsters.'King Party:'Increase your Life Points by 1000'Orck Guerreiro:'This card gains 500 Attack and Defense Points for every Dark monster on the field.'Goblin:'This card gains 500 Attack Points for every Goblin type monster on the field.'Ice Wizard:'This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell and Trap cards.'Witch:'When this card is face-up on the field, your opponent can't activate Spell and Trap cards.'Archer:'This card can attack your opponent directly.'All together 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 defend = Defence life points = Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Also Orck Guerreiro is OPed. Change it's attack points to 1500 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Oh, sheet i will need to update them i will fix that thank you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 not a problem dude were all here to help each other and enjoy this great game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 One more advice: For some cards (Like Archer, Witch and Goblin) try to give some more creative names. These seem bland. Oh, and there is an already existing card (Dian Keto the Cure Master) which has exactly the same effect as your King Party card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 No problem. If you need anymore help, just ask me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 [align=center][/align]My Official Rating Errors:1st Card:o You spelled opponent wrong.o It's Defense not Defend.o Correct OCG:"When this card is on the field, your opponent cannot Set monsters."o 6/10->Kinda OP 2nd Card:o Do not write "points".o 5/10->A Copy of Dian Keto the Cure Master 3rd Card:o Do not write "points".o Correct OCG:"Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for every DARK monster on the field."o 7/10 4th Card:o Do not write "points".o Correct OCG:"Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for every "Goblin" monster on the field."o 7/10 5th Card:o Correct OCG:"This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards."o 8/10 6th Card:o Correct OCG:"When this card is on the field, your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap Cards."o 4/10->Kind of OP 7th Card:o You spelled opponent wrong.o Correct OCG:"This card can attack your opponent directlyo 8/10 General Advice: o Some images are kinda bad. o Put a little more effort on the cards' effects. o Ask advice for OCG. o Never Give Up and Make More Cards. My Overall Rating: 6.43/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Can somebody please comment on my Judgement of the Archfiend card? I haven't had a comment in AGES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Give my a link so i will post it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Ok Assassin (Hero) here it is!http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-119725.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Ok i have posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 o Some images are kinda bad. o Put a little more effort on the cards' effects. o Ask advice for OCG. o Never Give Up and Make More Cards.[/i] My Overall Rating: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yung slick Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 What are ocg errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 What are ocg errors? wrong section... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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