Zeaux Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 [align=center]Diabolic Beast [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot attack an Attack Position monster. During battle between this card and a face-up Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, remove this card from play and inflict 500 damage to your opponent during the End Phase. Hope you like it.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 come on coment!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Your OCG needs workThe name, Attribute, Type, and Pic match at least.ATK and DEF seems to match because normally wolf-like beasts don't have good defensive abilities Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 i like this card...its pretty balanced...the pics is nice...overall...9/10:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despair From The Dark Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Out of curiosity, is Piercing Damage correct OCG now a days? I haven't bought new packs in so long, I wouldn't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon95702 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 please stop posting stuff unless you've changed it:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Out of curiosity' date=' is Piercing Damage correct OCG now a days? I haven't bought new packs in so long, I wouldn't know.[/quote'] yes Piercing damage is correct Thanx all for the coments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 it looks all well put together. nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Thanx :Dplz more coments!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Like the way you've tried to balance it. Pretty good, except for a minor error: If this card attack = If this card attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 thanx again Spire :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exowolf Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 THAT CARD IS AWSOME, 10/10 :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Very good card overall, but one thought: Is "...face-up Defense Position..." supposed to read "...a monster in face-up Defence Position..." ? I'm not too sure, but that sounds right...9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 sorry i will fix it and thanx for the rate :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 hmm..i cannot see any OCG errors...only the Piercing Damage..i think that isnt anymore in use..overall its a good card...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 no Piercing damage can is correct go to the OCG thread and you will see itanyway thanx!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Fix: This card cannot attack an Attack Position monster. During battle between this card and a face-up Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, remove this card from play and inflict 500 damage to your opponent during the End Phase.____________________________________________ Seems ok in balance, considering it's inability to attack Attack Position monsters. Pic seems to fit. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 thanx :Di put this ability cuz his ATK is too higher to level 4 monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 BUMPlol old card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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