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LiAM Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Bad cards are bad. Learn OCG Learn correct grammar Find pics that aren't stretched or blurry. Sorry, gratz on your effort, but these lack all qualities of a Yugioh card. PM me if you want more help. I appear to be busy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 ya i guess i agree if you can give me some help plz i need it i have only been here for 2 days. and thanks for the point on the grammer i dint relize that when i was typing, i prob have grammer problems in this reply to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Focus on the grammar. You need to learn not to make OCG errors. Learn proper dueling tearms. Example: for Scar LV7 you wrote "When this card is summoned to the graveyard you can then summon Ultimate Scar." First of all a monster cannot be summoned to the graveyard. Only summoned to the field. So you should have written something like this: "When this card is removed from the field" or "When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle" or this "When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard" Okay... the next part. You can't just "summon Ultimate Scar" First of all when writing a card's name in another card's text you must always quote that card's name. Second you have to say something like this: "you can special summon 1 "Ultimate Scar" from your hand or deck to the field." These are the kinds of specific, proper OCG terms everyone should be using. By the way, I applaud your effort and liked the pictures. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 thanks i didn't notice that when i typed it. im working on a second set now so plz tell me if i did better on that one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 ok i will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 I just posted it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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