Lightsworn card and a Lightsworn signer dragon

[dimitri]

hope there good

now comment ok

 

 

[Max Darkness]

Rather good, but I think I see some OCG errors:

 

"Melit": I'm not really sure what the first sentence of the effect means, but a similar effect could be;

"When this card is Summoned, and there is a "Lightsworn" monster on your side of the field, Special Summon any "Lightsworn" monster from your Deck in Attack Position. During your End Phase, discard the top 2 cards from your Deck."

Also, reduce Melit's DEF, its too high for a Lv.1...in fact, make this card a Lv.3 or 4; it's too powerful for a Lv.1.

 

"Valo":

When this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, Special Summon it in face-up Defence Position. During your End Phase, discard the top card from your Deck."

 

"Lightsworn Dragon":

1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more "Lightsworn" non-Tuner monsters

(The effect's first sentence makes no sense...this is my variant)

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when a "Lightsworn" monster is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it during your End Phase. During your End Phase, discard the top 4 cards from your Deck.

 

Also, it looks like on "Lightsworn Dragon" that the d in Dragon (in the type section) isn't capitalised. (See my sig for comparison).

 

 

Hope this helps.

[Namo™]

Nice cards for a noob so 8/10