Lucisti Virus

[740kt]

I play this game called Pardus, and that's where these come from. Can anyone tell me if the OCG is correct and if they're too overpowered?

 

Lucisti Virus

Level 4

400/50

Fiend/Union

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your opponent's monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, gain control of that monster, and its name is treated as "Infected". If this card is equipped to a monster, and you control two of your opponent's monsters, you may Tribute both of them to Special Summon 1 "Rive Crystal" or "Lucidi Squad" from your hand or Deck.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time.)

 

Pardus Core

Field Spell

The only monsters that can be Summoned on the field are Machine, Rock, Thunder, and Fiend-Type Monsters and monsters with "Mutated", or "Infected" in their name. Machine-Type monsters lose 100 DEF points per turn and are destroyed after five turns on the field.

 

Lucidi Squad

Level 6

2500/1400

Fiend/Effect

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned through the effect of "Lucisti Virus".

 

Rive Crystal

Level 7

2500/2300

Rock/Effect

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Lucisti Virus". If it is played on "Pardus Core", it gains 400 ATK and DEF points. After this card has been on the field for 3 turns, you may summon "Ancient Crystal".

 

Ancient Crystal

Level 8

2700/2500

Rock/Effect

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Rive Crystal". If it is played on "Pardus Core", it gains 500 ATK and DEF points.

 

Infected Creature

Level 9

3200/1800

Fusion/Effect

Any two "Infected" monsters

This monster can only be summoned by Fusion Summon. When you declare an attack, flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, attack normally. If not, destroy this card and Special Summon "Lucisti Virus" from the Graveyard.

[Bringerofcake]

I like the idea. They're not overtly OP'd, but the Virus should be a Union monster. Otherwise, it's WAY too easy to get either card out. But on OCG, not much to edit, really. Just be more specific (where are you summoning from? Hand, Graveyard, Deck?) Be sure to say "Special Summon" when it's going to happen. Other than that, good work!

[740kt]

I like the idea. They're not overtly OP'd' date=' but the Virus should be a Union monster. Otherwise, it's WAY too easy to get either card out. But on OCG, not much to edit, really. Just be more specific (where are you summoning from? Hand, Graveyard, Deck?) Be sure to say "Special Summon" when it's going to happen. Other than that, good work!

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I believe I've fixed the OCG, but I don't know too much about Union monsters. Can you or someone else explain about them?

[Bringerofcake]

Better yet, I'll give you an explanation AND the OCG text, formatted to your monster's effect:

 

"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your opponent's monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, gain control of that monster, and its name is treated as "Infected". If this card is equipped to a monster, and you control two of your opponent's monsters, you may Tribute both of them to Special Summon 1 "Rive Crystal" or "Lucidi Squad" from your hand or Deck.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time.)

 

Essentially, Union monsters equip themselves to appropriate targets, and do stuff while equipped. They usually also have the effect " If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.", but I figured that a virus doesn't work like that.

[740kt]

Thanks.

[B3lly N3rd]

you see..these would go really great...as actual cards

[740kt]

When I find pics, should I post these cards in Realistic, Pop Culture, or Any Other Cards? They come from a game, but it's not very popular.

[Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer]

You said "Machine" twice in Pardus Core. Also, it's "summoned," not "played."

[740kt]

Sorry. I fixed it now.

[Bringerofcake]

I'd say either Pop culture or Any Other Cards. While it's not very notorious, it's still a game, and therefore part of Pop Culture. AOC is just that, which is a reason to put them there.