Omit Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Welcome! I am starting my set here! The name: Benthic Environment!!!All the mighty beasts of unexplored ocean, from the Mariana trench to the Mid-ocean Rift. Effect: This card can be treated as a DARK monster. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or lower "Benthic" monsters. Once per turn, you can place 2 Glow Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put 1 Glow Counter on it. Once per turn, you can remove 5 Glow Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Glow Token" (Sea Serpent-Type/WATER/3 Star/ATK 700/DEF 700). When a "Glow Token" is destroyed, the controller of that Token gains 800 Life Points. Effect: This card can only be activated if you control one or more "Benthic" monsters. Pay 2000 Life Points. Toss 3 Coins. Select 1 monster your opponent controls. The maximum level of the monster you can select equals the amount of Heads x4. At the end of the turn this card is activated, remove this card and the selected monster from play. Effect: Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to put 1 Summon Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Summon Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 6 or Lower DARK monster(excluding "Benthic" monsters.) OR remove 1 counter to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Benthic" monster. Effect: When this card is summoned, you can view the top card of your opponent's deck. You can pay 1000 Life Points to select one card in your opponent's hand and place it beneath the top card in their deck. Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that it was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, you can increase the ATK of 1 WATER Dragon-Type monster you control by 100. Effect: This card can only be summoned by Tributing 4 "Benthic" monsters. This card can attack once, plus once more for every Level 6 or higher "Benthic"monster you control. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon three level 4 or lower "Benthic" monsters to the field in face-up Defense Position. Effect: This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 3 "Benthic" monsters. This card can also be treated as a DARK monster. This card gains 200 ATK for each DARK monster you control(excluding "Benthic" monsters), and 300 ATK for each Benthic Monster you control. Effect: This card can only be activated if you control 2 or more Warrior-Type monsters. Pay an amount of Life Points. Select 1 Dragon-Type monster. The selected monster loses 200 ATK each turn until that card's ATK has decreased by the amount of Life Points paid. If this card is destroyed, the selected monster is also destroyed. Effect: FLIP: Take control of one level 5 or lower monster your opponent controls OR pay 2000 Life Points and take control of 1 level 7 or lower monster your opponent controls. At the end of the turn you took control of the card, the card is returned to your opponent's field. Effect: This card can also be treated as a DARK Sea Serpent-Type monster. As long as this card remains Face-up on the field, all Rock-Type monsters you control gain 200 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle by a Rock-Type monster. I figured that having a lot of cards that can't be summoned would kill a deck, so here's a level 4. Effect: Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every Insect-Type monster it destroys. If this card is destroyed by battle with an Insect-Type monster, inflict 400 Points of damage to both you and your opponent's Life Points. First Trap Card! : DEffect: Increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters you control by 200. Your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each Spellcaster-Type monster they control. Effect: When this card is Summoned, place on it 1 Burn Counter. Once per turn, place on Burn Counter on this card. Once per turn, you can select a monster. Remove Burn Counters equal to the level of the selected monster from this card and destroy the selected monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 nice ^^ I like em, a couple ocg errors but other than that so far they seem pretty balanced ^^ the set gets an 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinra Tensei(*_*) Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 EPIC.Pictures are great, very suiting.OCG seems correct(ish). I haven't checked thoroughly.You get a 9.5/10Well Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 If you were a 6-star, this wont be good.BUT: you are a one-star member, so this set is awesome! Youve got future, keep it up! 9.5/9.9 (if you were 6-star, it might be 7.48/9.9) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Thanks for the ratings! ^^ I should have some other cards up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Awesome cards!!! Luminos: Token effects?! And your first card? PWN.Portal: Quite the risk, but you can dominate by saving your butt by even the slightest amount of LP.Dragon Magician: Counters, monsters from your set, and the card's Att mentioned in the effect. Thumbs up!Optic: Woah. Get a good LP restore and you could shut down the hand.Spirit: Nice effect, old-school spirit rules.Hadal Hydra: OWN.Trench demon: Nice effect and picture. The pics are also amazing! 10/10.IF you see a pic, you can still use it. People won't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Thanks, Assegai! Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysmith124 Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 i like the cards. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Thanks!!! Please, harsh raters, come! I wish to improve to a point that even those who will give these 1's give them 10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Wow. Sorry no one is viewing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daisuke28 Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 I Liked them a lot =D! Very nice OCG! 9/10! PD: Sorry! I missedclick on the pole =S... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 It's okay about the pole. I wish more people would come... T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 The effects seem ok, maybe slightly overpowered or underpowered in different aspects. The pics could be better, maybe try croping the words out of them I only saw one that had it, thought their may be more. Their are some OCG errors but I'm heading for bed so I'll try and fix tommaro. Meh could be better - 6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Sadistic Siren is nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 WOW, Pictures are amazing, OCG Is nothing but perfect, names are cool, and you are a one star member! 11/10 man :)keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 11/10? Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 this card are very good...the pics are awesome...the effects are good...the RP will be good..i wish you luck...overall:9/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Thanks! When I set the RP up, you are invited! I will post the prologue as a fan-fic first, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I've liked watching you make cards! Seamount Serpent. Up on your oceanography aren't you? You have officially been subscribed, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Subscribed? Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omit Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 If you want to join the RP when I make it, you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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