Doom_Shaman Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 (updated) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Levia-Dragon - Daedalus" after you have activated its effect. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any monster card that is Normal Summoned, Set or Special Summoned is returned to its controller's hand during the End Phase of the turn in which it was Summoned, except this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xyz_ember Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 I like it :) It is hard to summon but it's effect is well worth it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knightmare Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 cool, like the effect too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 A very good idea, although pretty overpowered for a Lv.8. Considering its effect, I'd make it a Lv.9.Also, Sea Serpents seem to have very low DEF; "Daedalus" has 1500 and is a Lv.7, so you might want to decrease the DEF to around 1800 and increase the ATK a little to 3400.Another change might to change the name to simply "Hurricane Serpent - (name)" to fit in with "Daedalus'" lineage.As for the effect, there are only a few OCG errors:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Levia-Dragon - Daedalus" after you have activated its effect. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any monster card that is Normal Summoned, Set or Special Summoned is returned to its controller's hand during the End Phase of the turn in which it was Summoned, except this card." Rating: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 thnx for the rates and comments guys n special thnx to max darkness for advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 You're welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rios Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 RIOS LIKEY. Just a teeeeeeeny weeeeeny weeeeeeny tad bit overpowered. 9.5/10 is the rating I'm giving you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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