~Yu-Gi-Oh! Breaking Existence::Chpt.2 up!!

[BulletMan]

Welcome to Yu-Gi-Oh! Breaking Existence.

 

 

This is my story.

 

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[spoiler=Chapter 1: A Waiting Genesis]

It was night outside. The stars and moon were the only sign of light. The clouds were moving silently through the air.

 

Down below, a road there was. It was a guide through the forest it went through.

 

No sounds were present. But once in a while, you could hear the faint wind. Maybe even some cars when they passed the deserted road.

 

The time was 11:35. It was nearly midnight. And at this time, many are sleeping. But those who live in the city ahead might be off partying…

 

 

Through the thick brush of trees came a roaring noise. What kind of animal could make such a noise? While we ponder its identity, another source of light shines. It begins to move through the trees as swift as a mountain lion. More roars plow on.

 

A closer look shows the answer to our question. It is not an animal; a vehicle. A motorcycle. It had only one big wheel, was a perfect red color, and had a pair of lights to show its way. But its most important feature was who was riding it.

 

He was wearing a helmet; his head ducked down to the handle bars due to the acceleration he was going at. He passes a sign which read: 30 MPH. He was going at 50. He didn’t care. Nobody was going to stop him in this deserted place.

 

He was wearing a dark-blue coat and a black shirt underneath. The pants were a grey color. His coat was dancing in the wind. He moved on.

 

Following the trail to somewhere, his next stop was a city by the name of Micro City. His destination was nearing as the stars began fading. A bright glow was over the horizon.

 

As the driver of this odd vehicle exited the forest, the glowing Micro City appeared! He jammed the brakes which caused him to skid and turn; a burnout. He stopped to look.

 

“Micro City”, he murmured. “It’s been a while.”

 

He rode on into the blinding light of Micro City, down a hill, straight down a road, and pass a sign containing ,”Welcome to Micro City!” Who was this mysterious night rider? But you will know his name in time. He is a duelist…

 

And his name is Greg Ranson.

 

 

He drove on. He was now in the city, where the skyscrapers from the ground seem to go forever into the night sky. The people were still buzzing the busy streets that still had many cars passing the time.

 

Greg accelerated through the streets of cars, still following the signs and traffic lights here. He stopped at a traffic light when it turned red.

 

He turned his head around to gain view of this city.

 

On the side walk, a guy was looking at his bike. But so were many others, as his bike was one of the only two U-Wheels in the world. He turned his back to see the light turn green.

 

His bike roared and once again, headed deeper into the city.

 

12:15 AM. Greg turned off the engine of his U-Wheel. He was at a motel in the deep parts of Micro City. As he stepped off, he took his helmet off and placed it on his bike where it tangled around the handles so that it would stay. He then got the keys and stuck them in his dark-grey pants.

 

His hair was now revealed. It was a dark-brown color. He placed dark sun glasses over his eyes. You might say that he was blind, but his vision was accurate enough that if he owned a gun, he could shoot down the barrel of a tank 1.5 miles away.

 

His dark-blue coat kept him warm. The collar kept his mouth hidden. All that was really shown on his face was his nose and ears. He got a sack and strapped it to his back. He walked toward the entrance of the motel.

 

He entered the world of light. The inside of this place smelled refreshing. He gave a moment to breath in the fine air. All around were chairs of a scarlet color, white painted walls with pictures hanging from it, and in front of him was the counter with a women standing in it.

 

He walked to the counter. His hands were in his coat pockets, and his sack on his back.

 

He then stopped and the women smiled at him. “Hello. Fine evening we’re having aren’t we?”

 

He tilted his head so that the women could see his eyes. “Certainly is. I would like a room for the night, please.”

 

“We can do that. Are you staying just for the night or more?”

 

“Just the night”, he replied.

 

“Very well. You room is 296. It’s on the fourth floor. You will only have to pay in the morning. Hope your stay is a good one!”

 

“I appreciate your kindness. Thank you.”

 

He walked with the card to the elevator. He pressed the button that said “4”.

 

 

Greg slid the card through the door. It unlocked. He through his sack on his bed and he closed the door. Then opened the sack.

 

What was inside was his clothes, blanket, and…a Duel Disk. Not to mention, a Deck.

 

He grabbed the Duel Disk and placed the Deck inside. He attached it to his arm. Then exited his room and locked it.

 

After getting out of the motel, a restaurant known as “Home-Made” was next to it. He faced its direction. He could see the neon lights on it shine “OPEN” in red. The smells from the place were the smells of steak being grilled right now. It was hard to resist it. But the very reason he came to Micro City was this very eating inhabitance.

 

Greg came in front of the door. It had a sign. It wrote: ages 21 and above only for those who dare. He might have come here a long time ago if it weren’t for his age. But now, he was 21.

 

He entered the building. The room was filled with tables and chairs. At the counter were booths with red leather. Many people were inside including waitresses.

 

He walked to the counter. Not many noticed him. But a man was next to the booth he just sat himself in. Greg got the attention of the waiter.

 

“Can I help you?”

 

“I would love some steak. Your finest,” he answered.

 

“Righto.”

 

Then, Greg gained the attention of the man next to him.

 

“Are you sure you want to hang in a place like this kid? Not many handle a place kinda like this.”The man was bald, big, and wore chains and a blue leather clothing.

 

Greg tilted his head. “I think you are mista-“

 

“Shut-Up!!”

 

The man stood up, knocking the booth over. Everyone in the establishment looked. The man through his bulky fists at Greg.

 

But why would you think Greg was so confident? Was he a young and cocky rookie?

 

…No…

 

After turning the age of 18, he joined the Police Duel Squad!

 

Greg grabbed both of his wrists. Then, he let go of one and punched him into the stomach. Man man yelped. Then Greg headbutted him into the head.

 

The man went back a few steps. Then opened his eyes. Now he was mad. But instead of attacking he said,"Maybe I'll just steal your bike!"

 

He ran out. Greg reacted to this. "Oh no you don't."

 

"Wait! Stop!", the waiter cried, "That isn't any ordinary guy. He's Steel Burn Brandon."

 

"Uh, say that agian?"

 

"He's a duelist around these parts. The best in Micro City. If you can beat him in a brawl, you can't beat him in a duel."

 

"I see a challenge here. Very well, where does he live?"

 

Everybody stood still. It was an akward silence. Until a women in the back stood.

 

"I'll take you there", she said.

 

"Lets go", was what Greg replied.

 

Greg left with her. They exited out the door. Then the waiter said as they left,"What about your steak?"

 

 

 

Greg was there in no time. The women parted, only saying,"Good luck. You'll need it."

 

Greg went inside. The place was unclean and looks like it had rusted for a while. Inside, pieces of metal layed on the floor. Junk was about; rusted cards, tires, parts from planes even. It was a junkyard shop.

 

He entered a room. Brandon was weilding on his U-Wheel. He was adding parts to it. Like if it was his own.

 

Greg came up to him. Brandon was shocked. "How did you get here? I don't get many visitors. Get."

 

"Give me back my U-Wheel."

 

"Aww! A U-Wheel. Sounds fancy. I think I'll-"

 

"NOW!"

 

"Geez son take it easy. If you want it, we can-"

 

"Duel for it."

 

"You took the words right out of my mouth."

 

 

 

1:05 AM. The duel was set for out side. Fences surrounded the place. Inside, junk and rusty cars layed about. The only source of light was a street light that came from the roads.

 

One one side was Greg. The other, Brandon. Both had their Duel Disks.

 

Brandon: LP 8000, hand 5

Greg: LP 8000, hand 5.

 

Brandon greedily started first."I draw!"

 

Brandon: hand, 6.

 

"First, I Set 1 monster." A card appeared face-down so no one could see it."Then I'll set a another card". Another card face-down in the Spell/Trap Card Zone appeared."I end."

 

Brandon: hand, 4.

 

Greg was up."Okay", he drew one card.

 

Greg: hand, 6.

 

"I Normal Summon Bullet Dragon!"

[spoiler=AMRE 004 Bullet Dragon]

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Bullet" moster from your Deck with 1500 or less ATK, to your field. By Summoning it in Defense Position, place 1 Bullet Counter to that monster.

 

Light flashed and revealed a monster. A green cybernetic dragon appeared on the screen. It was flowing with energy.

 

"Now Bullet Dragon! Attack his face-down!" The Dragons arms came together, creating a green ball of swirling energy. It flung it at the face-down.

 

"I activate Waboku!" Brandon's face-down revealed its self.

[spoiler=Waboku]

 

 

"Now you can't hurt my monster! So relax and enjoy what happens."

 

The face-down monster was revealed to be: [spoiler=Iron Blacksmith Kotetsu]

The moster was then blown by the green ball of energy. After the blow, he was left standing better as ever. The monster had black hair and was begining to make a sword.

 

"Now because he has been flipped face-up, I gain an Equip Spell card from my Deck!" He selected from his Deck a card and added it to his hand.

 

Brandon: hand, 5.

 

Greg wasn't impressed."I set 1 card face-down and end my turn."

 

The duel was all in Brandon's favor. And he liked that.

 

"Draw!"

 

Brandon: hand, 6.

 

"I activate Reinforcements!"

[spoiler=Reinforcements of the Army]

 

He added a monster from his Deck to his hand, replacing the card he just activated.

 

"Now let me show you the card I just added. I Summon Armed Samurai - Ben Kai!"

[spoiler=Armed Samurai - Ben Kai]

A flash came and passed, it uncovered a man wearing a white hood and armor. He carried weapons.

 

"Now I equip two of these to him!"

[spoiler=Axe of Despair]

 

 

All of a sudden, Ben Kai was holding two axes.

 

"I switch Kotetsu to Attack.Now Ben Kai, attack Bullet Dragon!"

 

The warrior flew at the dragon slicing it in half when returning to the earth. Then Greg said,"You have activated Bullet Dragons effect. When destroyed, I can Summon another Bullet from my Deck!"

 

Greg: LP, 6900

 

He searches through his Deck and Summons a monster. "I Summon Bullet Blocker!"

[spoiler=Bullet Blocker][spoiler=AMRE 001 Bullet Blocker]

Once per turn, place 1 Bullet Counter on a "Bullet" monster you control. You can select any Bullet Counters on your side of the field and move them to appropriate card(s) you control. During the Damage Step, by removing 1 Bullet Counter from this card, all battle damage that involves this card is doubled. You can only use this effect once per turn.

 

A flash again occurs. A monster comes about. It was big and looked like it was built to withstood things no creature could ever survive...

 

"Now if I place him in Defense, he gains 1 Bullet Counter!" The monster brought out a bullet and placed it in a hole on its body.

 

Brandon wasn't at all worried. "Ha! If you think that thing is going to survive, your wrong! Ben Kai can attack another time for each equip he has! Now go forth!"

 

The samurai once again leaped, but this time, Greg answered,"I activate Bullet Shatter![spoiler=Bullet Shatter]

Remove 1 Bullet Counter from a "Bullet" monster you control. It cannot be selected as an attack target this turn.

 

"I remove the very Bullet Counter Blocker had and he will not die this turn."

 

The monster launched a bullet at the samurai and it fell back down.

 

Brandon didn't care. He had a lead.

 

"I set one card and end."

 

So far Brandon has: LP 8000, hand 3.

Greg: LP 6900, hand 4.

 

Greg:"I draw!..First, I activate Bullet Reload.

[spoiler=Bullet Reload]

Add 1 Level 4 or lower "Bullet" monster from your Deck, to your hand. Then add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck.

 

"I can now add a Bullet to my hand from my Deck." He added a card that replaced the card he just used. "Now I activate Bullet Draw!

[spoiler=Bullet Draw]

Draw 2 cards. Then add 1 "Bullet" monster from your hand to your Deck. If you cannot, discard your entire hand.

 

"Now I draw two and add a Bullet to my Deck!" After drawing two cards, he put one card back.

 

"I Summon Bullet Trooper!"

[spoiler=Bullet Trooper]

Once per turn, place 1 Bullet Counter on a "Bullet" monster you control. You can select any Bullet Counters on your side of the field and move them to appropriate card(s) you control. Once per turn, by removing 2 Bullet Counters from this card, destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

A red machine with many cannons on top its head was seen after a passing of light.

 

"And by using its effect, it gains 1 Bullet Counter! And Blocker too."

 

Both monsters loaded ammon into their main weapons.

 

"Now Bullet Trooper, move one Bullet-"

 

"Not so fast! I activate Threatning Roar!

[spoiler=Threatning Roar]

The Trooper stopped its actions after a blasting sound wave blew it back.

 

"Well, I wasn't going to attack, but was using Troopers main effect. I move one Bullet Counter from Blocker to Trooper!" A bullet was sent from one monster to the other. The machine placed another bullet in its weapon.

 

"Now Bullet Trooper, destroy his Axe!"

 

The monster sprung two rockets from its back. Then burts into the air. A jet pack. It then fired two shots at the Axe. One Axe from Ben Kai disapeared, the samurai looked around curiously, wondering where it went.

 

"Now I set two cards and end."

 

Greg: hand, 2.

 

Brandon drew. He grinned greedily.

 

"Your dead now! I activate another Axe!"

 

Ben Kai's Axe reapeared. He was happy.

 

"Then I activate Fusion Sword!"

[spoiler=Fusion Sword Murasame Blade]

The Samurai's hand became a sword, and it held both Axes with the other hand.

 

"Now attack Bullet Trooper!" The weird warrior now sliced the chunck of metal to pieces.

 

Greg: LP 5200.

 

Greg wasn't shocked, for he expected this. "I activate Rebel Yell!"

[spoiler=Rebel Yell]

When a "Bullet" monster you control is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bullet" monster with 1500 or less ATK, from your Deck.

 

A screech was heard. Another Bullet arosed.

 

"I Summon Bullet Synchron!"

[spoiler=Bullet Synchron]

Once per turn, place 1 Bullet Counter on a "Bullet" monster you control. You can select any number of Bullet Counters on your side of the field and move them to appropriate card(s) you control. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Bullet Counter from this card to negate the attack.

 

A flash came, passed, and a little bulky robot took its place.

 

Brandon answered,"Useless! Ben Kai can still-"

 

"I activate Bullet Mimic."

[spoiler=Bullet Mimic]

Only activate while you control a "Bullet" monster. Select 1 Normal Trap card from your opponens Graveyard. This cards effect becomes that Trap cards effect.

 

A minature robot replaced the set card. Then it went to Brandon's Graveyard and grabbed one of his cards.

 

"What the-"

 

"I copy your Threatning Roar and use its effect against you."

 

A roar was heard. It stopped the samurai in its tracks.

 

Brandon was uneasy. "You got one last turn of pissing me off. Then I promise your dead!"

 

"Not unless I come to get you first."

 

"Grr. I end."

 

"And I draw!"

 

Greg: hand, 3.

 

"This is it. I Summon Bullet Man!"

[spoiler=AMRE 000 Bullet Man]

Once per turn, place 1 Bullet Counter on a "Bullet" monster you control. You can select any number of Bullet Counters on your side of the field and move them to appropriate card(s) you control. When this card declares an attack, remove 1 Bullet Counter from this card. When this card attacks a monster whose ATK is higher than this card's ATK, you can remove 1 Bullet Counter from this card to destroy the attacked monster instead (damage calculation is still applied).

 

Another flash another monster. This one looked tough, was built like a soldier and was ready to fight.

 

"Now everybody gains one Bullet Counter!" All of them loaded up their personal weapons. "Now I move all Bullet Counters to Bullet Man!" All were shifted to him.

 

"And now I synch Bullet Synchron and Blocker..." The Synchron was soon surrounded ny glowing rings. The rings shifted to Blocker. The two flashed and disapeared. What took their place...

 

"I Summon Bullet Gear!"

[spoiler=AMRE 011 Bullet Gear]

"Bullet Synchron" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Bullet" monsters

Once per turn, place 1 Bullet Counter on a "Bullet" monster you control. If you control a "Bullet" monster with a Level equal to or less than the amount of Bullet Counters on this card, you can Tribute that monster and remove Bullet Counters equal to that monsters Level. If you do this, this card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monsters DEF and this card gains its effects until the End Phase of this turn.

 

A huge mechanical warrior came with heavy guns beamed out. It seem to glow.

 

"I now activate Bullet Rebirth!"

[spoiler=AMRE 008 Bullet Rebirth]

Discard 1 "Bullet" monster from your hand. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lwer "Bullet" monster from your Graveyard.

 

Greg discarded one card (a Bullet) and Summoned:

"I reborn Bullet Blocker!"

 

Another flash (narrator: God, how many flashes are there!?) ended up being Blocker, back in, well, spared parts?

 

"This is the end Brandon."

 

"How is it? You can't possibly win this turn."

 

"Watch me win. Blocker and Gear gain one Bullet Counter each! And with that, I move Blockers bullet And one of Bullet Man's aswell to Gear."

 

They both gathered and Blocker gave Gear one Bullet Counter.

 

"Now, I activate from the Graveyard, Bullet Miners effect!"

 

"Wait! When did you get that in your Graveyard?"

 

"Remember Bullet Rebirth? I guess not. Anyways, I use Bullet Miners effect!"

[spoiler=AMRE 012 Bullet Miner]

If this card is in your Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to remove it from play and add 2 Bullet Counters to "Bullet" monster(s) you control. You can activate this effect during either players turn.

 

"I now place two Bullet Counters on Bullet Gear and activate his own effect. I remove four Bullet Counters from him and Tribute Blocker!"

 

Blocker gone within seconds without a trace. Then, Bullet Gear turned red.

 

"Now Bullet Gear gains 2200 ATK! Bullet Man, I remove one Bullet Counter from you so you may attack Ben Kai!"

 

The machine blew a few shots. The Brandon said,"Your monster has lower attack! Your plan so far sucks!"

 

"His effect. If I remove a Bullet Counter from him, he can destroy monsters even with higher ATK than him."

 

Ben Kai felt a blast to the stomach and blew up. After being such a challenge, it fell to Bullet Man.

 

"Now Bullet Gear! Attack Kotetsu!"

 

"No! I forgot to switch him to Defense!"

 

"That's why cocky immature guys like you are never going to win against me."

 

"Well, even so, your monster doesn't have enough ATK to finish me now!"

 

"I might want to mention that Gear also gains Blockers effect. And since he now has it, during battle, if I remove one Bullet Counter from him, I can double the damage!"

 

"Wait, what!?"

 

"You do the math genius."

 

The giant red machine bursted to life. It bolted itself toward the little Kotetsu. After a giant explosin to its meaningless life, Brandon's LP was reduced to 0. He fell.

 

"Damn. I lost."

 

Greg: LP 3800, hand 0.

Brandon: LP 0, hand 1.

 

Greg came to him and said standing,"Not as challenging as everybody said. If you were the best in those parts, then who could beat me. I suppose this place does not have the duelist I'm looking for. I'll take my U-Wheel back now."

 

He went back to his U-Wheel and scrapped the new parts Brandon added. He put his helmet on and went back for some sleep. In the morning, he would leave Micro City, the city of his mysterious past...

 

 

To be continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2: Evil Enters...]

 

The sky was a light blue. The clouds were nowhere to be found. This was surely a different place than Micro City, which Greg had just visited lately.

 

He had driven a few miles from Micro City. It was the late morning and noon would soon near. The trip was a peaceful one.

 

Greg Ranson, he thought. A duelist on a mission bigger than life. He was expecting to find some quite powerful duelists in Micro City, which he had spent most of his childhood at.

 

And all he found were duelists who thieved on others. They ran in fear. The ones who were the fear, only weak and greedy were they. He never thought that in one of the largest cities on the continent, not one was a descent duelist.

 

Sure, that duel with Brandon last night was close, but he was lucky. He got a good hand, and Greg, not so much. What made Brandon lose was that Greg knew what fear was. Not to mention Brandon was cocky…

 

(KID: …And that Greg is the main character!) (NARRATOR: That may be. But even the best struggle…)

 

Chapter 2: Evil Enters…

 

 

Racing down the highway, Greg had been driving for about five hours straight. Time: 11:05. He was still and hungry.

 

Guurrrgg; went his stomach. After just being still, riding for hours, and being hungry, he decided that the next stop he would pull over. That took another hopeless hour.

 

He finally saw a standard restaurant coming up ahead. “Life!” he said after so many hours. His U-Wheel made a sharp turn into the road that led to, “Life!” he moaned again.

 

 

The U-Wheel was parked in an almost empty parking lot. Only a few other cars, including a limo, were there. He stuffed the keys in his pocket.

 

The restaurant was in fact, a diner. The smells of the place toggled his mind. Since smells were the most attached sense to memory, the diner brought happy memories of his childhood. A short flashback;

 

The time he spent with his parents, friends, new ones too. But then a wide gap happened. After that, he was different. What do we not know? The truth is startling.

 

After his little flash back he walked to the door which told, “Welcome”. He opened the door. A bell followed the creek of the door with a rang. The creek told him that this place was old.

 

Being a descent day, a jacket was not required. As he sat down at a table, he sat the coat, a dark-blue color and what symbolizes who he is, next to him. His helmet on top of that.

 

Soon, a waiter came by to order. All Greg wanted was a coffee and a meal of flapjacks with butter and syrup to top it. A well done meal it was. He leaned in his chair quietly. Very quiet. He could hear what the people behind were saying.

 

“When will the operation begin?”

 

“Later this evening when nobody can see us.” Two of them were sitting in the middle of the rather clean and white diner. They were talking, so Greg assumed that they had already ate. They were there when he arrived.

 

They continued talking and he continued listening.

 

“What time is it?” This one had a girl’s voice, so it was a she.

 

The other was a boy.”You never could tell time, even when there was a clock above MY head.”

 

That was a fact. Greg could see the clock hanging up on the wall. It was-

 

“12:35.Wait! We’re going to need to go and help ship the cargo!”

 

“My god, you suck. Alright. I’m driving!” The two kept blabbering out the door.

 

Greg did wonder what they were doing. Oh well. All he could do was wonder where they went.

 

The air had been suck out of the room. No excitement at all. Why bother here now? Greg was satisfied with the meal and needed to carry on to the next town.

 

After leaving a tip on the table, he got his coat and helmet. He inserted his arms through his coats sleeves and PRESTO! It was back on. As he was about to take his glasses off and put on his helmet, he saw what was left behind by the two mysterious duo…

 

A card. Not a duel monster but ones personal card. He picked it up and examined it. It wrote:

CORE INDUSTRIES

…

The flashback from earlier, it came back. After the gap was terror unlike any other. Why did things become this way? The vision became like if it were from out of the news…

 

…Eleven years ago in a large city known as Rising a fire broke out. The fire was done on purpose by a gang of thieves. It consumed many blocks of homes. The smoke could be seen from miles.

 

After such an incident, only twenty were wounded were wounded. But four were dead.

 

The fire was started by the gang for they were bored, and their shipment of drugs was on a delay.

 

Greg Ranson was the only survivor of the Ranson family. His father, mother, sister, and younger brother died in the flames. He was injured in the terrorist attack, losing much blood. On his way to recovery it was announced he would be put in an orphanage in Micro City.

 

“That is our latest update on the CORE inc. terrorist attack”…

 

 

The heat from Greg rose in his body. He became more emotional than usual. Oh, he knew what this meant. This was the very reason why when he got out of that orphanage he joined a PDF. So he may train himself to protect himself and bring the ones who harmed his community to justice.

 

He left the diner with the card in his pocket, his helmet on, and his destination was to the nearest bay.

 

 

10:20 PM. The scenery had changed. A bay area filled with cargo, cranes, ships, and who knows what else. A perfect place to have a secret meeting.

 

Here was Greg out and about the darkness in the cargo bay. Like a ninja, he hid in the shadows without any noise to make his presence exist. He crept on through the dark and silent bay.

 

He was wondering where these two from the diner earlier were at.

Greg talking to himself, “If I were going to hold a special piece of cargo to ship here from CORE inc. where would I put it?”

 

Behind him, a cargo ship with the words CORE INC. was there. He slowly turned around to see the ship. He face palmed himself silly.

 

Walking along the ship he came to a board where it led to an entrance to the ship. He went onboard.

 

It was not a fancy ship. Full of darkness, he couldn’t see anything a few rooms later. He wandered around the place only relying on his sense of hearing, feeling, and smelling.

 

 

10:40 PM. Greg entered a room where a meeting was held. Not wanting to be noticed, he looked around. He eventually found a vent that was big enough for him to fit through.

 

Soon enough he was over the group who were exchanging words. He could see them through another vent, close to where a light was held.

 

“Mr. Core,” was the words that came out of a boy. More than that, it was the one from the diner. Not to mention the girl from then was next to him.”When will the truck arrive?”

 

The boy wore a jacket that was a grey color and a black shirt underneath. He wore jeans. The same with the girl. His hair was orange and greasy, while the girl had weird hair. Hers was violet with pink and green streaks that went down it. It stuck out and it looked like an alien bush was on top of her head.

 

After a moment, another large man appeared from the darkness. “At exactly midnight, we need to get that device out of here. It weighs over a ton and we are the only ones who can ship it. If anybody else finds this device or our plot, eliminate them.”

 

This man wore a suit, not gang related clothing. He had black hair and a bearded only about an inch thick. Greg knew when the boy said,”Mr. Core” that he was talking to the leader of CORE Inc.

 

The one who burned his home, family, memory, and almost Greg. He knew nothing about Greg or his existence. His power exceeded many others in the world. He was rich, powerful, greedy. He could get away with anything…

 

…But Greg…

 

As they were talking the girl looked up to see the place and saw Greg. Greg knew what that meant.

 

“Look! Up there!”

 

Boy:”It’s a bird?”

 

Girl:”A plane?”

 

Mr. Core:”No! It’s…”

 

As soon as they were done talking, Greg slammed the vent. This caused it to split, just where Greg could put his hands on it. He held on and swung across the room. The three below watched with their jaws open. Greg flew out the window.

 

“Get him!!” demanded Mr. Core.

 

 

Greg had run far away, to a corner at the loading bay. The boy and girl had caught up. Greg knew he was going to duel against two people.

“You go first Xena!” yelled the boy. “Then I’ll go if you lose!”

 

“Fine Skull.”

 

Weird names thought Greg. But no matter, it was night with barely any visible light. The area was surrounded by water except for one side. Crates covered the place. One of them that was nearby had CORE Inc. in scripted on it.

 

Both standing on one side, Greg and Xena had Duel Disks.

 

“I’ll go first.” announced Greg.

 

Greg: 8000 LP, hand 6

Xena: 8000 LP, hand 5

 

After a quick analysis, he said, “I Set one monster and 1 card face-down!” Two cards appear to life face-down so no one can see them. “That is all.”

 

“That’s all? You must be joking. At the rate your going, I will have already won! But however, draw!” She gave a good look at her cards. “I Summon Alien Kid!”

[spoiler=Alien Kid]

 

A flash occurred and soon an adolescent green alien was around. He carried a fazer.

 

“Now Alien Kid, attack his face-down!” The creature aimed its weapon at the card. It was revealed as “Bullet Dragon”. It was blasted to bits.

[spoiler=Bullet Dragon]

 

“I use Bullet Dragon’s effect and activate my face-down; Rebel Yell! They both will get me a monster, so I will Summon Bullet Blocker and Bullet Synchron! I will Summon Blocker to Defense so he will gain 1 Bullet Counter!”[spoiler=Rebel Yell]

[spoiler=Bullet Blocker]

[spoiler=Bullet Synchron]

 

 

Two bright lights made way to a bulky and a small robot. One loaded a bullet to its primary weapon.

 

“I activate from my hand, Mysterious Triangle! This will let me destroy 1 monster you control with an A-Counter!”[spoiler=Mysterious Triangle]

 

“What? None of my monsters have an A-Counter-“

 

“Wrong. My Alien Kid gives one A-Counter to a monster that was Special Summoned. Just now, you have just Summoned two monsters. So I will get rid of your Blocker.”True, on the monsters were some type of a tumor. How could machines get sick?

 

After a mysterious power occurred, Blocker was sent to the Graveyard. “And now, with Mysterious Triangles effect, I Summon Alien Hypno!”[spoiler=Alien Hypno]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/94/AlienHypnoGLAS-EN-C-1E.jpg

 

 

A weird large headed alien in a tube arrived. It was in Attack.

 

“Now Alien Hypno, attack Bullet Synchron!” A sonic blast, dust rose, and after it fell, no longer was there a Bullet Synchron.

 

Greg was concerned. “That plan didn’t work? I’ll have to try harder.”

 

“My Hypno is destroyed during the End Phase. Oh well. I’ll set two cards then!”

 

Two new face-down cards were shown.

 

Greg: 7700 LP, hand 4

Xena: 8000 LP, hand 2

 

Xena ended and Greg began. “Draw and I Summon Bullet Man!”[spoiler=Bullet Man]

 

A green soldier like robot came. It was armed and had immense strength.

 

“Then I activate Bullet Rebirth! By discarding this card, I Summon Bullet Trooper!” A red robot with weapons on top appeared.[spoiler=Bullet Rebirth]

[spoiler=Bullet Trooper]

 

 

“Then I activate the Ammo Rebellion! This will allow me to add a Bullet Counter to it by paying 500 Life Points. So I’ll pay.”[spoiler=the Ammo Rebelion]

 

 

Greg: 7200 LP, hand 1

 

“Now my monsters, gain Bullet Counters. Two to Trooper, one to Bullet Man.”

 

All the machines that Greg controlled inserted bullets to their main weapons. Trooper grabbed one from four knights who carried a bullet (the Ammo Rebellion).

 

“I remove two Bullet Counters from Trooper and will destroy one of your face-downs with his effect. Now, I choose the one to the left. Destroy it!”

 

The mighty robot went flying into the air and shot the face-down.

 

Xena spoke.”I chain to your Trooper. The card you destroyed was “A” Cell Scatter Burst. By Tributing my Alien Kid, I will add A-Counters to your monsters equal to its Level!”[spoiler=A Cell Scatter Burst]

 

The kid exploded and out of that came raining alien used creatures. Two attached to Bullet Man and two to Trooper.

 

“Okay..I will simply remove one Bullet Counter from Bullet Man so he can attack you since I have no more obstacles. Now attack!”

 

The green machine fired, dealing damage to the girl. She wasn’t threatened at all.

 

“Are you done yet? I’m still here. And I have a duel to win.”

 

“I end.”

 

“Not a man of many words are you? What’s your problem?”

 

“Just go. I thought you were in a hurry.”

 

“Of course.”

 

Greg: 7200 LP

Xena: 6100 LP

 

“I draw one, add it to my hand, then gaze upon my trump card. I Summon Alien Ammonite!”[spoiler=Alien Ammonite]

 

 

A weird squid-snail type creature with teeth was alive. Its tentacles reached out. “I will use its effect and Summon Alien Kid! But don’t worry; they won’t be here for long. I will perform a Synchro Summon!”

 

The two monsters formed rings around each. Then a brilliant flash of light revealed a new more gruesome monster.

 

“I Summon Cosmic Fortress Gol’gar!!” The huge monster had tentacles and was a castle of death. It shot a glare at Greg as it hovered over the ground. [spoiler=Gol'gar]

 

“If you think I’m done there, you’re wrong! I activate my other face-down, the one you were unfortunate to not destroy. I activate Mass Hypnosis!" [spoiler=Mass Hypnosis]

 

 

A beam of light came to Greg’s two monsters. Hypnotized by its mesmerizing light, they switched to Xena’s side of the field.

 

“Now then, all you my new monsters attack that guys pathetic existence!”

 

The alien super floating castle of doom shot lasers at Greg, while his Bullets shot at him. This caused great pain to Greg as his Life Points were reduced to:

 

Greg: 1100 LP

 

“See? You were a fool to come here and spy. You won’t lose just a game here. As soon as I’m done with you, we’re going to toss you over to drown!”

 

“You see when you mess with us, you’ll that you never should have.” said Skull.

 

“When did you come in Skull? Where were you?”

 

“I was trying to find the crate we’re shipping. As I was, Mr. Core came and told me to find it soon. Or else.”

“I’ll come and help you in a moment. This guy only has one more turn till he dies. And then we can go without anybody, except us, knowing what’s going on.”

 

Greg spoke with a more angered voice, “I’m not letting you get away with this. I am going to deliver the message about what you plan on my home town!”

 

“Oh! I got his attention now Skull. And who the hell says you’re going to do that with one card and very little LP?”

 

“Me...Are you done with your turn?”

 

“I set one in your face-down. Then I will use Gol’gar’s effect to return all face-up Spells and Traps to add two A-Counters to Gol’gar.” After both face-up cards (Mass Hypnosis and the Ammo Rebellion) were returned, both of Greg’s monsters returned.

 

“And since Hypnosis was destroyed, your monsters are returned to you. But now I will activate Gol’gar’s main effect. Once per turn, by removing two A-Counters, I will destroy one of your monsters. So I remove two and destroy Bullet Man!”

 

Gol’gar gave a roar. And after that, shot a laser right at Bullet Man, demolishing him in seconds.

 

“I end.”

 

Greg took his glasses off. He stuffed them in his coat pocket. Then he began to have a flicker in his eye, a flicker of hope. Even though he was losing, he can win.

 

“Now I draw!” After gazing at the card he drew, he was ready. He grinned and gave a better attitude.

 

“Time to rock your world!”

 

Greg: hand, 3.

“I activate Bullet Draw! This will let me gain two, and then send one Bullet back to my Deck. [spoiler=Bullet Draw]

 

[spoiler=Bullet Sniper]

 

 

“Then I’ll activate Bullet Sniper’s effect. By revealing him in my hand, I get one Bullet Counter on one of my monsters. I will place it on Trooper! Not to mention he gains 1 from his own effect.

 

“I activate Sniper’s effect. By revealing him until the End Phase and removing one Bullet Counter from a monster, I can destroy one monster you control!”

 

“Wait a minute. My Gol-“

 

“Bang.” A tiny black robot popped on to Greg’s shoulders, locking in on Gol’gar. With a single blast from David, Goliath fell to the ground. The giant alien flew to the Graveyard after its destruction.

 

“That’s not all either. I discard one Bullet from my hand and Summon; Bullet Magician!” [spoiler=Bullet Magician]

 

 

A magical power rose, and bloomed to become a robotic sorcerer. It had a mask and power of many colors surrounded it.

 

“When Magician is Summoned, I can gather two Bullet Counters and place them on cards I control; such as Trooper.”Trooper got another two bullets for its primary weapon.

 

“Now because of Sniper, Trooper can’t attack. But Magician will! Now go forth!”

 

The root mage shot a powerful beam at Xena. This caused her to, again, lose Life Points.

 

Xena: 3800 LP

 

“I’m not losing, to you!” proclaimed Xena. “I’ll finish you!”

 

“Anyways, I end and will have my Magician be removed with another Bullet in my Grave.”The mage rose and teleported out of sight.”Then I will set one card and officially end my turn.”

 

Greg: 1100 LP, hand 1.

Xena: 3800 LP, hand 3.

 

“I just drew it Skull! The card to win!”

 

“That’s great! Now finish him!” Skull replied.

 

“Alright. I remove two A-Counters from your Trooper to Summon Alien Overlord!” [spoiler=Alien Overlord]

 

 

A red lizard with six arms showed. It was ready for a fight, with its 2200 ATK.

 

“Now I Summon Alien Warrior!” [spoiler=Alien Warrior]

 

 

Another alien appeared. This one wore skull like armor and had enormous talons.

 

“Now attack for game my creatures of space!”

 

“Not unless I activate this card. Bullet Shatter!” shouted Greg. “By removing one Bullet Counter from him, He cannot be attacked.” [spoiler=Bullet Shatter]

 

 

“What?!”

 

The monsters stopped as a bullet broke to pieces. It shot out toward them, causing them to go back.

 

“Impossible!”

 

A noise started to happen. The two were too busy to notice. But Skull was looking about.

 

“My turn. I draw one. And now I will activate Magicians final trick for the night. I can get back him or another monster. So say hello to Bullet Synchron!”

 

A magical flash of colors. Bursting out was you know who.

 

“I activate Monster Reborn! Allowing me to Summon back a certain someone. Say hello to Bullet Blocker.” [spoiler=Monster Reborn]

 

 

Greg was on a roll. Blocker was back for sweet, sweet revenge.

 

“Now, I shift all and all new Bullet Counters to Bullet Blocker. And for the best trick; I Synch Synchron and Trooper!”

 

The two monsters formed rings. The rings glowed to life. After a bang came:

 

“Come forth, Bullet Gear!” [spoiler=Bullet Gear]

 

 

A red giant robot of immense structure arose.

 

“I place one Bullet Counter on him. And then, I activate Sniper again. By removing one bullet from Blocker, I will destroy your Overlord.”

 

“Not again…”

 

Another orange shot destroyed Xena’s monster. It was sent to the Grave afterwards.

 

“Then, I place four of my total Bullet Counters on Gear.”

 

“Why do that?”Xena asked.

 

“Cause with his effect, I will Tribute Bullet Blocker. This will allow him to gain 2200 ATK and his effect. And his effect doubles the damage of a battle by removing one Bullet Counter!”

 

“No! Wait…He only has 0 Bullet-“

 

“Sniper.”

 

“Oh…I’m-“

 

The monster grew red after the Tribute of Bullet Blocker. It had immense power now; 4700 ATK!

 

The noise grew louder. You may be wondering, what noise? You’ll find out.

 

“Xena! I found the crate!”

 

“You did?”

 

“The machine is reacting to the duel!”

 

“Oh no! Stop man-“

 

“Attack!”

 

The giant raging robot combined its arms to form an even bigger gun. It shot a giant red orb of energy, as big as Alien Warrior! It hurdled and crushed it to oblivion. Xena also felt the impact. She flew and her LP reached 0.

 

Out of nowhere, the crate burst with an explosion of fire. It released smoke and caused the other crates to catch on fire.

 

“Xena! You did this! And because of the duel energy you released, the weapon has now released destruction!” Explained Skull.

 

Greg was just finished with the duel and just caught Skull’s words.”What are you talking about? What the hell is going on?”

 

“Forget you! I got to get Xena out of here.”

 

He leap to Xena and picked her up. He held her in his arms. She was unconscious from the blast, and as soon as he left, the smoke and fire began spreading.

 

 

11:40 PM. Greg was in danger. Some of the crates have fallen over, he could not pass them. Many other dangers were present besides the fire. Some of the crates might hold something. Such as TNT…

 

In a certain area as Greg ran about trying to find a way, a box wrote: Dynamite.

 

The boxes had not caught on fire yet. But many boxes close were being consumed by the fire.

 

Greg had no choice. There was one way out and that was the water. But if he did, his cards might get wet. So he quickly grabbed them out of his Duel Disk. Then set them in his pocket and zipped them in.

 

He took a deep breath. Then he plunged into the dark waters. As soon as he dived in, the Dynamite set off.

 

The explosion hurdled crates into the water, some almost hit Greg. Lucky he was a skilled and born with the ability to swim. As he grazed like that of a shark through the waters, he reached land in safety.

 

As he looked back at the fire, he saw the strange device that released a blast when he dueled. It was through duel energy. What was that?

 

As soon as he began to turn around, a truck horned. He looked, but nothing was there. Then he looked back at the bay and saw one. He could see people coming out, which they most likely belonged to CORE Inc. It was then he noticed that they hauled the strange device into the truck, and left.

 

Greg had a wild night. He picked up important information while barely escaping with his life. He knew that there was a possibility that they might come to stop him now. He just proved he was now a threat to CORE Inc, what he had wanted to do.

 

 

But he was still not powerful enough to alone, defeat the evil organization. It was up to him to do it, and he needed to gather a force. The next town, which would only take him about half a day, was his next target.

 

And hopefully, he would get someone more powerful than him who was willing to help.

 

 

He got back to his U-Wheel and turned on the engine. He packed everything up, got his helmet out and looked out onto the road. The road that would take him to his next ally…

 

 

To be continued…

 

 

 

 

 

Hope everyone likes it!:)

[Pokemon95702]

So this the fanfic you've been talking about, interesting, I can't wait till you post more. you do good with suspense in your story.8)

[Devine Dread]

... Wow... That is... Awsome!!!! Well, I am sure you will do more.

[Wanderley]

That is an awsome start^^

i will read more

[.:Traceur:.]

this fic is awesome...i can't wait the chapter...

the intro is good...

i wish you luck with this fic...

:D

[ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ]

Dude!!!!! I can't wait for the 1st Chapter, the ending of the intro persuades me to read more and that's what I want to do :lol: .

[BulletMan]

Chapter 1 up! :)

[Aelsthla-Mental]

It was a guide through the forest it went through.

 

Sounds somewhat redundant. Perhaps just "It was a guide through the forest."

 

But anyway, I'm interested to see where this goes.

 

Wish you luck!

[Kursedfire]

gr8t!

cant wait for the next one

[.:Traceur:.]

the 1st chapter is awesome...

it's really exciting...

like real Yugioh...

i love it...

the bullet monsters are awesome....

^^

[bury the year]

Your sentences are interesting at the beginning (in the good way) but slowly lose description as you continue throughout the story. Remember, description helps us envision just what we're talking about. ;D

[BulletMan]

Thanks. I will take note that I should do my rate at writing slower. I did this in a day. If I had done bits of this in a week, it would be much better. I'll do that for the next chapter. :)

[Wanderley]

awsome......

nothing more to say ;-)

[BulletMan]

The second chapter is coming either Saturday or Sunday! :)

[OMGAKITTY]

Down below, a road there was. It was a guide through the forest it went through.

 

 

What are you, yoda? This single line is bothering the crap out of me XD

 

"Below, there was a road running through the forest."

 

 

This may just be me personally, but I kind of feel your sentences are too short/don't flow that well. I keep pausing at the periods, and it kind of breaks up the action more than I think you want it to.

 

example:

The time was 11:35. It was nearly midnight. And at this time, many are sleeping. But those who live in the city ahead might be off partying…

 

When I read it, it felt like "The time was 11:35 [pause]. It was nearly midnight [pause]. And at this time, many are sleeping [pause]."

 

I felt like I was a robot trying to tell a story >_>

 

Where you could have wrote:

"It was 11:35, nearly midnight. At this time, many are sleeping, but those who live in the city ahead might be off partying..."

 

And I'm not sure how I feel about all the second person inserts...I think they take away from the narrative.

 

And you keep switching tenses, which makes the narrative confusing and sound...wrong, at points.

 

"Who was this mysterious night rider? But you will know his name in time. He is a duelist…"

 

Stick to either present or past tense.

 

After getting out of the motel, a restaurant known as “Home-Made” was next to it. He faced its direction. He could see the neon lights on it shine “OPEN” in red. The smells from the place were the smells of steak being grilled right now. It was hard to resist it. But the very reason he came to Micro City was this very eating inhabitance.

 

There's a bit of redundancy here, and some awkward writing in general. (bolded)

 

"After getting out of the motel, he glanced to the [left/right] and spotted a restaurant known as "Home-Made". He could see the neon lights spelling "OPEN" in red. The smell of grilling steak wafted out from the restaurant. This establishment was the very reason he had come to Micro City."

 

Ok, what? This whole "Brandon" sequence confuses the crap out of me. It seems like Brandon jumps up and goes berserk for absolutely no reason. Greg provokes him in now way. And then this line just sounds stupid:

 

Then opened his eyes. Now he was mad. But instead of attacking he said,"Maybe I'll just steal your bike!"

 

He ran out. Greg reacted to this. "Oh no you don't."

 

"Wait! Stop!", the waiter cried, "That isn't any ordinary guy. He's Steel Burn Brandon."

 

"Uh, say that agian?"

 

"He's a duelist around these parts. The best in Micro City. If you can beat him in a brawl, you can't beat him in a duel."

 

Usually, when a guy smaller than you socks you in the stomach, you don't sound like a 12 year old and say "I'm gonna steal your bike! nya nya!"

And how he would, since he doesn't have a key, is beyond me.

 

then, "If you can beat him in a brawl, you can't beat him in a duel."

What? If you can beat him up, why do you even need to duel?

Oh, and you changed the waitress to a waiter halfway through.

And why is this place 21+? It serves steak....unless its actually a bar (which it really isn't implied anywhere that it is), there really isn't any reason.

 

Not a bad storyline so far, you just need to work on your writing style a bit, and pay attention to the details.

[BulletMan]

I will take the advice OMGAKITTY. And I do promise that the second chapter will be better! :)

[BulletMan]

I must say, I like chapter 2 better than the 1st chapter. The first was like nothing to lose. But I tried hard to pull off chapter 2. So everybody look!

[BulletMan]

BUMP

[ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ]

Cool, it's better than the first chapter as you say 8).

[BulletMan]

Thanks and BUMP! :)