theoneperson Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 http://hokulo.deviantart.com/art/red-demon-39550112 [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9609/294199e.jpg[/img] Once per turn, flip a coin. Apply the appropriate effect depending on the result, Heads: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Tails: Increase this card's ATK by 500. (UPDATED) (again)(again) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 ocg errors... to OP..you must balance it... the pic is bad... overall:for a first card it's jot so bad...5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vineco Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 I give it a mega no no. >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theoneperson Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 hey yall come back and look XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 [align=center]Obsidian Rating (OCG Fix)Once per turn, flip a coin. Apply the appropriate effect depending on the result. This effect cannot be used again until your 3rd Standby Phase after activation.Heads: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.Tails: Increase this card's ATK by 500. (Grading)Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 0/2 Total - 4/8Grade - C- (Review)A burn monster? Honestly? Your OCG is a little off. Of course, that is to be expected of new card makers. Lucky for you young Card Maker, I am the OCG Teacher of YCM's Duel Academy. If you need ANY help with your cards at all, be it the effect, Stat balancing, or even the card's name, just send me a message and i'll be happy to help. The picture is hand drawn. Lovely. Yet blurry and the colors are to light. This card is Overpowered. You have a 2500 ATK Level 4 monster with absolutely no drawbacks. Either increase it's level to around 6 or 7 or lower it's ATK to about 1700 or 1800. Other than that, it's effect seems nice. Though maybe underpowered since it's only usable every 3 turns. Overall, a nice attempt for a first time card. I'll be happy to help you become better.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theoneperson Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 [align=center]Obsidian Rating (OCG Fix)Once per turn' date=' flip a coin. Apply the appropriate effect depending on the result. This effect cannot be used again until your 3rd Standby Phase after activation.Heads: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.Tails: Increase this card's ATK by 500. (Grading)Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 0/2 Total - 4/8Grade - C- (Review)A burn monster? Honestly? Your OCG is a little off. Of course, that is to be expected of new card makers. Lucky for you young Card Maker, I am the OCG Teacher of YCM's Duel Academy. If you need ANY help with your cards at all, be it the effect, Stat balancing, or even the card's name, just send me a message and i'll be happy to help. The picture is hand drawn. Lovely. Yet blurry and the colors are to light. This card is Overpowered. You have a 2500 ATK Level 4 monster with absolutely no drawbacks. Either increase it's level to around 6 or 7 or lower it's ATK to about 1700 or 1800. Other than that, it's effect seems nice. Though maybe underpowered since it's only usable every 3 turns. Overall, a nice attempt for a first time card. I'll be happy to help you become better.[/align'] Hey um can you check this out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Much better. (Grading)Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 2/2 Total - 6/8Grade - B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yangninja Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 The card is OK for the first; however it should only have 1 beneficial effect from the coin flip and 1 detrimental effect. That would balance it a LOT more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theoneperson Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 thx for the comments keep them comeing thanks all if you have any more grammer fixes or anything lese come and hlp k c ya l8ter XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LONEFIGHTER Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 You could make it: Once per turn, you can flip a coin.....(you can do it any turn) Heads: Inflict 1000 damage to opponent...Tails: Inflict 1000 damage to you... Just a thought. 6/10 for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theoneperson Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 ok there is once per turn come back and re rate plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Duelist Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 It should be more like this in my opinion: Once per turn, you can toss a coin: ● Heads: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.● Tails: Increase this card's ATK by 500. :O i would try making his attack 1400 so hes not over powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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