!£$Return Of Serenade!$£! Extreme Warrior Card

[Tormented]

Yo Guys im back for a lil while and i made a card so tell me what you guys think ill accept negative and Obviusly Positive lol

 

Name: Extreme Warrior

Card Type: Monster/Effect

Attribute: Light

Level: 7

Card Rarity: Rare

Picture Url: http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/628/extremewarrior.jpg

Set ID: 19911-EN349

Type: Warrior

Description: When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned successfully, select 1 face-up monster on the field. As long as the monster remains face-up on the field, decrease its ATK by 800 points. When a Normal Spell Card is activated, negate the effect by paying 1000 Life Points. The effect of an Effect Monster that this monster destroys as a result of battle is negated.

Atk/Def: 2600/2200

Creator: Esper

Year: 2009

Serial Number: 72391406

[Lilrow]

I think the ocg would be better as:

When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned successfully, select 1 face-up monster on the field. As long as the monster remains face-up on the field, decrease the selected monster's ATK by 800 points. When a Normal Spell Card is activated, you negate the effect by paying 1000 Life Points. The effect of an Effect Monster that this monster destroys as a result of battle is negated.

 

It's a bit overpowered, and the name is generic, so those could be changed.

 

7/10

[Windowlicker]

OCG is perfect.

Picture is very good.

Name is clichéd/used.

8.5/10

[TheDisasterPokemon10]

sweet effects

cool pic

overused name though

8/10

[Tormented]

Thanks Guyz