Land of the Dream - 7/?? - Post a Good Review and Advice to receive +rep!

[Corinthian]

[align=center]Hello, and I thank you for coming to my thread.

 

This thread is dedicated to a new set of mine, which is entitled, Land of the Dream. The Land of the Dream contains "Dream" monsters, and other support cards for them.

 

Now what are Dream monsters? They are an archtype that focus on drawing and placing Dream Counters on other cards on the field so they can become stronger. You see, their ATK become stronger for each other Dream monster in your hand. Now, enough talk, on with the cards!

 

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This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name in your hand x450. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to select 1 card in your opponent's hand. If that card is a monster, Special Summon it to your opponent's side of the field and place 1 Dream Counter on it. If not, your opponent draws 1 card. Then add 1 monster with "Dream" in it's name from your Deck to your hand.

 

 

 

 

 

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This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name in your hand x200. Once per turn, place 1 Dream Counter on a card on the field. Any monster with a Dream Counter cannot attack this card. Remove 3 Dream Counters from the field to return this card to your hand and draw 1 card.

 

 

 

 

 

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This card cannot be destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls as long as there are 3 Dream Counters on the field. Once per turn, select 1 monster in your hand and add 2 cards with the same name of that monster from your Deck to your hand. If you cannot, your opponent draws 1 card. If you have no monsters in your hand at the End Phase, return this card to your Deck and draw 1 card.

 

 

 

 

 

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This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name in your hand x300. When this card is Summoned, place 2 Dream Counters on any card on the field. Once per turn, you can remove 2 Dream Counters from the field to decrease the Level of 1 monster in your hand or on your side of the field by 1.

 

 

 

 

 

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Pay 1000 Life Points. Select 1 Level 3 or lower monster with "Dream" in its name from your hand. Special Summon as many monsters from your hand with the same name as the selected monster and place 1 Dream Counter on each of them and up to three other cards on the field. For each monster Special Summoned by this effect, your opponent draws 1 card.

 

 

 

 

 

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This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name in your hand x300. If there is at least 1 Dream Counter on the field, increase the attack of this card by 300. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to place 1 Dream Counter on a card on the field. Once per duel, you can return this card to your hand to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

 

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name in your hand x400 and the number of Dream Counters on the field x100. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, add 2 monsters with "Dream" in their name from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, you can choose 1 card in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Remove it from play at the End Phase.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Image credit is on the respective card.

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[jabber2033]

On your Monster cards

 

"This card's attack is equal to the number of cards with "Dream" in their name x ???"

 

should be:

 

"The ATK of this card becomes equal to a number(200, 300, ect) x the number of "Dream" Monsters in your Hand."

 

The other OCG errors are so minor I can't be bothered to go through and find them all. Also, I think your Synchro monster is over-leveled. Make it 5-6 stars. Finally, put the image credits at the end of the post, not on the cards themselves. It takes away the realism.

 

Cool cards otherwise! 8/10!

[Corinthian]

Thanks! +Rep to you!

[Ghost Ryder]

OCG Seems solid with minor errors.

The pictures are in good condition.

And yeah, I agree with jabber there, don't try to include the credit on the cards because it spoils the realism of the card.

8/10, effects just need to be a bit longer for a 9/10.

Pretty good!