etzerzame Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Commander Blaze! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoah Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Not bad... Not bad at all. Although, I think you could re-word your effect slightly. Fire is not a type it is an attribute. Try: "This monster can not be attacked by any FIRE monsters."Also, put water into caps too. Than it will be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Not bad... Not bad at all. Although' date=' I think you could re-word your effect slightly. Fire is not a type it is an attribute. Try: "This monster can not be attacked by any FIRE monsters."Also, put water into caps too. Than it will be perfect.[/quote'] This idea could be rendered so: "This card cannot be attacked by any FIRE Attribute monsters. If a WATER Attribute monster with a lower ATK than this card attacks this card, it is automatically destroyed." The effect is rather plain, so I give you a 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
etzerzame Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Check out commander blaze! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denegoth Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I think Fire and Water should be FIRE and WATER, unless I'm remembering it wrong. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 I think Fire and Water should be FIRE and WATER' date=' unless I'm remembering it wrong.[/quote'] No that's correct Make the changes everyone else has suggested And, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingsleyduel Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 7/10 nice job:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 not fire type monsters, just say fire monsters same goes with water type monsters, remove the type 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDExcelion311 Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 could change effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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