Axel Bind Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 hope you like these cards 8)8)8)8) theres anotherone to more coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 There are a lot of OCG errors, and your Synchro card makes no sense whatsoever. Awaken of The Demons:i) Change name to "Awakening The Demons"ii) Since this makes no sense as a Synchro Card, change to a Spell Card with this effect:"Tribute 1 "Demon Warrior" on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 Level 7 or higher "Demon" monster from your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled." Eyes of The Demon:i) Do not capitalise every letter!ii) Change name to "Demon Eyes"iii) Change to a Spell Cars with this effect:"Send 3 face-up non-DARK monsters on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard." Please work on these first before making any more in this set.Rating: 1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Bind Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 sorry i do suck at this dont be hard on meis this better and: ans can you pm me if somthing is wrong and tell me how to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murch Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 You could've just made the syncro monster an effect monster, though it was OP. sum preetty gewd cards. not that original, though. Needs a lv 8 demon monster made to make sense. 7.2/10GET CRACKIN' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Bind Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 DELIVERY BING BING BING:! (thanks for the help Max Darkness 1 rep going to you) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.