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My edited set Dark Magic so comment agian and tell me what you think


cmc1234

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Still bad OCG. Eg. Don't put "This card may...." or anything like that. The correct term is "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by..." or "This card can only be Special Summoned by...." There are a lot more OCG errors.

 

P.S. Its not "sacrificing", the correct term is "tribute/tributing"

 

5/10 because you fixed some.

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But he is doing alot better give him a little time and the may not thing is my fault i was trying to type in a bookish manor so the may no thing is my fault :( but anyways he is getting alot better just going to take awhile im thinking 7/10 like other just give him time my friend he will adventually get the hang of it and he didnt fix all of them but at least a few

 

Also cmc you dont have to post a new thread but all in do time :)

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