Kei-kun Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 I am trying to come up with possible better effects with the cards I've created and even new names and such. Any help with this is greatly appreciated: Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. Pay 1000 Life Points. Until the End Phase of this turn, increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every card in each player's hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 monster with less ATK than this card from the Graveyard. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. You can only activate this effect by discarding 5 cards from your hand. Change all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls to face-up Attack Position. Reduce the ATK of all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field by half until the End Phase. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Creation Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 8/ATK ?/DEF ?). Its ATK and DEF are each equal to that of the monster destroyed. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, Special Summon 1 monster in your Graveyard regardless of Summoning conditions. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases, discard all cards from each player's hand. Inflict 200 damage to each player's Life Points for every card discarded by this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, destroy all monsters on the field. The Envoy of Dawn I actually want to be a machine-type now, but I can't think of any good monsters that can take the form of it. I want to keep to the theme that the Light Envoys are based after real monsters and the Dark Envoys are not. Again, any help would be great, thanks ^^ All Pics rights go to:www.deviantart.comwww.photobucket.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 if you could post lores under em so i could read em id be happy to rate them :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great&PowerfulTrixie Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 yeah....even i cant read em..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 i like.. and yeah it is kinda hard to read... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great&PowerfulTrixie Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 all r op'd...seriously....but then again wat "envoy" monster aint... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Bump! Now I have lores for the cards so u can read em lol Sry about that ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Like someone said above me, OPed, like the other Envoys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Like someone said above me' date=' OPed, like the other Envoys.[/quote'] OPed? What's that mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Overpowered XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Ok. Yeah, op'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 well yea, that is the nature of the Envoys. Now, any help with the effects?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 i forgot i postwed here :P uep theyre op'd. but oh well. CED and BLS were 2 of the most op cards to date so it stands to reason these guys should be too. envoy of dawn - cool pic, gotta love that blue eyes. effect, eh i dont really feel it, im not gunna lie. the last 2 have effects that somewat go with the names. the first 2 dont tho :( id legit give dawn the effect of dusk. idk waht youd do with dusk... envoy of dusk - neglecting the advice i just gave id tone down his effect to discard 3 cards and drop the halve the atk thing it seems excessive for a 3000 atk monster. creation - amazing effect. id tweak it slightly so it gave atk by level of the monster or make it so they cant atk the turn their summoned or somthing envoy of destruction - id make hes effect, during each players standby phase discard every card in their opponents hand. idk the ocg to taht effect but yea, his effect as it stands, means you cannot play any cards after he hits the field its an amazing idea, and the cards look impressive, but the effects need work. 6/10 for now 9/10 for idea and idea potential (lets see fi you can fix em so thay hit that potential) ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I don't like the holo effects... =/ Erase the parts that cover the monster/ focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 i rate .......................? 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 i forgot i postwed here :P uep theyre op'd. but oh well. CED and BLS were 2 of the most op cards to date so it stands to reason these guys should be too. envoy of dawn - cool pic' date=' gotta love that blue eyes. effect, eh i dont really feel it, im not gunna lie. the last 2 have effects that somewat go with the names. the first 2 dont tho :( id legit give dawn the effect of dusk. idk waht youd do with dusk... envoy of dusk - neglecting the advice i just gave id tone down his effect to discard 3 cards and drop the halve the atk thing it seems excessive for a 3000 atk monster. creation - amazing effect. id tweak it slightly so it gave atk by level of the monster or make it so they cant atk the turn their summoned or somthing envoy of destruction - id make hes effect, during each players standby phase discard every card in their opponents hand. idk the ocg to taht effect but yea, his effect as it stands, means you cannot play any cards after he hits the field its an amazing idea, and the cards look impressive, but the effects need work. 6/10 for now 9/10 for idea and idea potential (lets see fi you can fix em so thay hit that potential) ;)[/quote'] Thanks for the look over of the cards. As far as the Dusk Envoy, are you suggesting for it to have the ability to just change all of your opponent's monsters to Attack position and that's all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 yes i am. the effect is streong enough without the atk to 0 or change em to defense and make defense 0 but either way, as i said id give dawn that ability Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 yes i am. the effect is streong enough without the atk to 0 or change em to defense and make defense 0 but either way' date=' as i said id give dawn that ability[/quote'] I see...well Idk wth I'm gonna do with Dusk now lol. Hmm, I'll think of something...btw I made up 2 new Envoys though they're still in the works. I'll post em when they're finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 cant wait :D well, dusk suggests things going away or being hidden, so a flip face down, or a return to hand effect or something of the like might work... idrk tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 buddy bump :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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