EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 I wanted to make a new themed Structure Deck, and I realized that the "Thunder" type has potential for cool monsters with cool effects, so I started. The deck will focus on Tributing monsters to use various effects, while keeping a new Field Spell "Arcane City of the Storm" to Special Summon the Tributed monsters back to the field for a final blow. [spoiler=Credits!]EliteKill - Everythign except the pictures effect of "Storm of Destruction".computerwhiz98 - Holofied "Thunder Lord Nugkus"Xander Royce - Effect for "Storm of Destruction"Ubisoft - Pictures for "Arcane City of the Storm", "Thunder Brawler Kanf", "Thunder Defender Korg", "Thunder Knight Tork", "Thunder Priest Rakab"Google Images - Pictures for "Ancient Thunder Beast - Zekar", "Call for the Thunder", "Chain Lightning", "Electrical Empowering", "Rage of Nugkus", "Reign of the Thunder Lord", "Thunder Lord Nugkus", "Thunder Samurai" and "Thunder Shield". [spoiler=Complete Structure Deck Card List]Monsters ( 18 )Thunder Lord Nagkus x1Thunder Defender Korg x3Thunder Priest Rakab x3Thunder Knight Tork x2Thunder Brawler Kanf x1Thunder Samurai x1Ancient Thunder Beast - Zekar x1Zaborg the Thunder Monarch x1Thunder King Rai-Oh* x3Sanga of the Thunder x1The Calculator x1 Spells ( 13 )Arcane Cirty of the Storm x3Call for the Thunder x2Chain Lightning x2Electric EmpoweringRage of NagkusRiegn of the Thunder LordMonster RebornScapegoatTerraforming Traps ( 7 )Thunder Shield x3Storm of DestructionThunder of Ruler x2Torrential Tribute *New Lore to match Deck's theme* [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Summoned when "Arcane City of the Storm" is on your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, tribute 1 Thunder-Type monster on your side of the field to destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field. If you use this effect, play 700 Life Points during your End Phase. [spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains face up on the field, increase the ATK of all Thunder-Type monsters on your side of the field by 500. Each time a Thunder-Type monster on your side of the field is Tributed for an effect, pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon the Tributed monster to your side of the field during your End Phase. [spoiler=effect]This card can only be Summoned when "Arcane City of the Storm" is on your side of the field. This card ATK cannot change. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Tribute this face-up card to increase the ATK of all Thunder-Type monsters on your side of the field by 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 7/10 Thanks. Can you elaborate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunako Kirishiki Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 on your side of the field = you control. <3 the set, there's never been a thunder structure deck, they were all ignored >.>. Rating :8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Thanks. I fixed th effects, and now I'm making more cards.Added 4 more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Can I please get more criticism? I really want to get better, but it's hard with only 2 ratings.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedGai675 Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 you should make thunder servants or thunder tokenspretty good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Here's a tip, don't triple post, kay? Some card's seem kinda, over the top. Particularly Chain Energy. You should change effect of "Storm of Destruction" too. I suggest something like this: "Tribute 1 Thunder-Type monster. Negate the activation of a Spell or a Trap Card and destroy it. During this turn, your opponent cannot activate any other Spell or Trap Cards." And make it a Counter Trap? Why I suggested that is even when a Spell/Trap card is activated, but then destroyed, it's effect still activates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 on your side of the field = you controltribute = TributeThunder type = Thunder-Type I'd do more but im tired, sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 counters are a fun ability. you should give a card counters and put an effect with it. the deck is good so far. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Thank the Lord, somebody has finally revived Thunder-type monsters, so that they may not be condemned to the dark corner of Card Games where Fish-type monsters have travelled to so many a time...You have used a variety of Thunder card pictures (which you have yet to give credit to) and they work for the card in all cases. The cards themselves show good potential. Originality is lacking somewhat, as this reminds me of Pandemonium, and how monsters revolve around Pandemonium. You have made fairly overpowered cards, and have tried to even the costs, doing a good job. However, my main concern is 'Electric Empowering'. In my eyes, it is overpowered, however I'm sure some would disagree. However I'm sure practically none would agree when I say Chain Lightning is overpowered.OCG is practically perfect, the one error I can see is in 'Thunder Lord Nagkus', where you have missed out the hyphen in Thunder-type. Then again, I have not looked too deeply for OCG errors. Generally, a nice set, full of potential. You are indeed a decent cardmaker, and I hope to see more cards of your style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Thanks for the replies. I changed the effects of "Storm of Destruction" and "Electrical Empowering", added a modified Thunder King Rai-Oh, added holofied Thunder Lord Nagkus ( credit to computerwhiz98 ) and the card list for the Structure Deck. Can you comment about the list? Now I'm making the credits. *EDIT: Alright, I think I finished this. Most of the pics were from Google Images, so I don't have anyone else to give credit to... I requested a Structure Deck Box in a shop and when I get it I'll post this is "Finished Sets"* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteKill Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 This can be locked, I opened a topic in the "Finished Sets" subforum. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-123467.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregran Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 on your side of the field = you control. <3 the set' date=' there's never been a thunder structure deck, they were all ignored >.>. Rating :8/10[/quote'] mmmmm.dont triple post again. i dont think it will be neutral. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Omg!! u stole my pic!! That "Ancient Thunder Beast - Zekar" is the same as my "Storm Dragon - Zeus" (see my thread "Storm Dragons"). Nah jks. Awesome structure deck so far!Pics - 4 / 5OCG - 4 / 5Originality - 4.3 / 5 Overall - 4.1 / 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Thunder King Rai-Oh is the picture of an actual card. Rate 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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