Third card, not sure the ocg is right and it is a bad pic but the idea is still there

[UltimateSynchron]

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by its own effect. When this card is summoned, pay life points equal to this card’s level X 400, if you do not, destroy it during the end phase. Increase the level of this card by 1 for each “Level Counter” on it. This card’s Original attack is equal it’s Level X 450. When this card is summoned, put one “Level Counter” on it for each card tributed or removed from play to summon it (MAX 11.) You can remove one “Level Counter” from this card to inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent’s life points. You can special summon this card from your hand or deck by tributing any number of card’s on your side of the field. You can special this card from your graveyard by removing from play any amount of cards in your graveyard.

[yangninja]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Hand or Deck by tributing any number of card’s on your side of the field.

[UltimateSynchron]

no because then i couldnt use its effect to summon it from the graveyard.

[Max Darkness]

I think this is overpowered at the moment. For example, you can get 8 "Level Counters", reduce your ATK to zero and inflict 4000 points of Direct Damage!

There are also numerous OCG errors:

i) 'normal summoned or set...special summoned" = "Normal Summoned or Set...Special Summoned"

ii) 'life points' = 'Life Points'

iii) 'attack' = 'ATK'

iv) 'one' = '1'

v) You should probably put a limit of how many level counters you can remove per turn (say 2?), because at the moment it seems you could obliterate your opponent.

vi) 'tributing' = 'Tributing'

vii) 'card's' = 'cards'

ix) '...special...' = '...Special Summon...'

x) 'graveyard' = 'Graveyard'

 

Work on this.

 

Rating: 6/10

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^ It's all explained right here. 6/10