Symbiote Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Most of the Halo cards I've seen fail. No offense to the creators though. But it's true. Anyway, hope you like the "Halo Chronicles" set. Think of this as my "returning set". Although I doubt anyone noticed I was gone...All pics are from Google, Deviantart, or Halopedia (the free Halo wiki!).[align=center]Other Awesome Threads[/align] If you have a question as to why I made anything that uses plasma as it's weapon LIGHT attribute, (Wraith, Plasma Cannon, etc.), it's because to me, plasma is more like energy, and energy is closer to LIGHT than DARK (or anything else). [spoiler=Spartan 117, Master Chief]You can pay 600 Life Points to select 1 "Covenant" monster your opponent controls. Your opponent cannot activate Spell Cards as long as the selected card is face-up on the field. When the selected card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell Card, remove it from play. For each card removed from play by this effect, you can add 1 "Halo Weapon" Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. This card is unaffected by the effects of "Covenant" monsters. [spoiler=Vehicle- Warthog]Select up to 3 monsters you control. The selected cards are treated as Equip Spell Cards and equipped to this card. If they have an effect, it is not activated. The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the number of monsters equipped to this card X 500. If a third card is selected, increase the ATK of this card by 500. This card's ATK cannot be more than 2000. When this card is destroyed, the equipped cards are destroyed. When your opponent Special Summons a monster, flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, do nothing. If you call it wrong, this card is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. All cards equipped to this card are returned to the owner's hand. [spoiler=Covenant- Grunt Minor] [spoiler=Covenant- Grunt Major] [spoiler=Covenant- Grunt Heavy] [spoiler=Covenant- Grunt Spec. Ops.] [spoiler=Halo Weapon- Plasma Grenade]It still doesn't seem right to me... [spoiler=Halo Weapon- Plasma Pistol] [spoiler=Covenant- Elite Minor] [spoiler=Covenant- Elite Major] [spoiler=Halo Weapon- Plasma Cannon] [spoiler=Vehicle- Wraith Tank] [spoiler=Covenant- Elite Honor Guard] [spoiler=Covenant- Drone] [spoiler=Halo Weapon- Needler] [spoiler=Covenant- Jackal] [spoiler=Covenant- Jackal Sniper] [spoiler=Covenant- Elite Ranger] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Want me to make a booster for your ''returning set''? just 2 points. BTW nice card. Not to shabby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Solly Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 if it is a set why is it just a card? 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 as a halo card maker myself, this is extremely good! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Want me to make a booster for your ''returning set''? just 2 points. BTW nice card. Not to shabbyYeah man that would be awesome! as a halo card maker myself' date=' this is extremely good! 9/10[/quote'] Thanks. if it is a set why is it just a card? 5/10 Maybe I haven't made the others yet. I look for good pics and think out my effects, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 A Halo Set that doesn't fail very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 A Halo Set that doesn't fail very nice. Hah thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Well done. Not many people can pull off a good Halo card... Good work! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Well done. Not many people can pull off a good Halo card... Good work! 9/10 Thanks brah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Real nice Symbiote! Once I think about it you have been gone for a while! Nice not to see a noob Halo Set :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 nice halo cardsi liked8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Vehicle - Warthog <-- Forgot a space I thinks if not w/e ^^Anyways like the new card xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Real nice Symbiote! Once I think about it you have been gone for a while! Nice not to see a noob Halo Set :) 8/10 Thanks man. And thanks for noticing :) nice halo cardsi liked8/10 Thanks dude. Vehicle - Warthog <-- Forgot a space I thinks if not w/e ^^Anyways like the new card xP No, it's right. I think... oh well. If it's not, it's just a name. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RedRecker Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Nice cards. Although, I think Master Chief is a bit powerful for his number of Level Stars at the moment. Just, considering the effect and his ATK and DEF, I would have thought he would be a 2 Tribute monster. Up to you though. I like the Warthog as well. The idea of equipping the 3 monsters is very original in my opinion. Although, I am slightly puzzled over the last bit with:"When your opponent Special Summons a monster, flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, do nothing. If you call it wrong, this card is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. All cards equipped to this card are returned to the owner's hand."Does this activate while it is on the field? If so, I didn't think you could Special Summon a monster to your opponent's side of the field from your side of the field. Switch control, yes, but Special Summon? If you could explain that bit to me better it might make more sense. Thank you and good luck with the rest of the set, it looks great so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Nice cards. Although' date=' I think Master Chief is a bit powerful for his number of Level Stars at the moment. Just, considering the effect and his ATK and DEF, I would have thought he would be a 2 Tribute monster. Up to you though. I like the Warthog as well. The idea of equipping the 3 monsters is very original in my opinion. Although, I am slightly puzzled over the last bit with:"When your opponent Special Summons a monster, flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, do nothing. If you call it wrong, this card is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. All cards equipped to this card are returned to the owner's hand."Does this activate while it is on the field? If so, I didn't think you could Special Summon a monster to your opponent's side of the field from your side of the field. Switch control, yes, but Special Summon? If you could explain that bit to me better it might make more sense. Thank you and good luck with the rest of the set, it looks great so far.[/quote'] This is a comment I've been waiting for...Thanks for the suggestion on the chief.About the warthog though, the effect your confused about, that refers from being able to hijack vehicles on Halo 2 & 3. Thanks for pointing that out though. I was pretty sure it was wrong, and I didn't know how to word the switching control part.Thanks again though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Cyrus-The-Virus:. Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 best halo cards i've ever seen 9.5/10i see almost no ocd problems and i like the creativity :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 best halo cards i've ever seen 9.5/10i see almost no ocd problems and i like the creativity :) Thanks man. I agree about the "best halo cards" part... no offense to anyone and I don't mean to brag... But it's kinda true.Update--- I've added 3 Grunts today- Minor, Major, and Heavy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkippyBaker Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 i love these cards dude, keep em coming, and dont forget to make an elite councilor card, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Just had a look at the new Grunt cards. They all seem fine to me. The OCG is clean and I won't fuss too much over pictures being from the game as I'm sure fan-art of a grunt would be hard to come by. Stats and effects are fine, they don't seem overpowered to me at the moment and I suppose it is only natural that grunts should be a bit weak. Only thing I would pick at here is in the effect of the Grunt Major. I'm not sure if you want to make the special summoning effect compulsory, meaning every time a grunt minor destroys a monster you HAVE to special summon one of the majors. If that wasn't your idea then all you would have to do is add "You can" to the beginning of that sentence. If that was the idea, then by all means ignore this last bit. Good cards again and I'll keep thinking of a way to word that warthog effect for you. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 i love these cards dude' date=' keep em coming, and dont forget to make an elite councilor card, 10/10[/quote'] Thanks dude. Don't worry, I'l have everything. Eventually... Just had a look at the new Grunt cards. They all seem fine to me. The OCG is clean and I won't fuss too much over pictures being from the game as I'm sure fan-art of a grunt would be hard to come by. Stats and effects are fine' date=' they don't seem overpowered to me at the moment and I suppose it is only natural that grunts should be a bit weak. Only thing I would pick at here is in the effect of the Grunt Major. I'm not sure if you want to make the special summoning effect compulsory, meaning every time a grunt minor destroys a monster you HAVE to special summon one of the majors. If that wasn't your idea then all you would have to do is add "You can" to the beginning of that sentence. If that was the idea, then by all means ignore this last bit. Good cards again and I'll keep thinking of a way to word that warthog effect for you. Keep it up.[/quote'] Again, thanks very much. That really helps. I guess I wasn't paying attention when I typed that... Thanks again. I'll have it fixed soon.Update--- Thanks to RedRecker, I've fixed the effect on Grunt Major. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 I've added--- Grunt Spec. Ops., Plasma Grenade, Plasma Pistol, and a banner today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 Had a look at your new cards and again I'll say the OCG is very good as well as the effects. I really like the way you have done the plasma grenade and gotten the whole either destroying the enemy but also having a risk of destroying yourself part. Only a couple of minor things to pick at again.Grunt Spec. Ops. - Nothing really wrong with it I just had an idea I'd like to share. With the effect that Special Summons the Grunt Minor, I was thinking why not also allow it to Special Summon from the Graveyard as well. I figured, the Grunt Minor is not that strong and one might not always have one in their hand either. That change is really up to your preference but I just thought it might make the effect pack a little more punch.Plasma Grenade - It all reads fine until the last bit where you mention the opponent not declarng an attack. As you have placed an effect there I would recommend adding to the first part of the effect something to do with your opponent's next Battle Phase, just to make it read a little easier. So, in other words, perhaps have it as:"During your opponent's next Battle Phase, if your opponent declares an attack with the equipped monster, flip a coin and call it." and the rest follows as normal. (Something else i noticed just then, it should be equipped monster, not equipped card). I have a feeling this problem is just the English language being a pain. I knew what you were talking about but unless you really state when the effect is taking place it isn't being made exactly clear.Plasma Pistol is fine. No worries there. Though, I'd have thought it would be an Equip Spell. But nevermind that, it works well as it is.Well, seeing as I have posted about each of your cards made thus far, I am wondering if you would like me to come back regularly to check on your new cards? If so, just drop me a PM whenever you have posted some new cards and I'll get right on it as soon as I am next online. Good luck with the card making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Had a look at your new cards and again I'll say the OCG is very good as well as the effects. I really like the way you have done the plasma grenade and gotten the whole either destroying the enemy but also having a risk of destroying yourself part. Only a couple of minor things to pick at again.Grunt Spec. Ops. - Nothing really wrong with it I just had an idea I'd like to share. With the effect that Special Summons the Grunt Minor' date=' I was thinking why not also allow it to Special Summon from the Graveyard as well. I figured, the Grunt Minor is not that strong and one might not always have one in their hand either. That change is really up to your preference but I just thought it might make the effect pack a little more punch.Plasma Grenade - It all reads fine until the last bit where you mention the opponent not declarng an attack. As you have placed an effect there I would recommend adding to the first part of the effect something to do with your opponent's next Battle Phase, just to make it read a little easier. So, in other words, perhaps have it as:"During your opponent's next Battle Phase, if your opponent declares an attack with the equipped monster, flip a coin and call it." and the rest follows as normal. (Something else i noticed just then, it should be equipped monster, not equipped card). I have a feeling this problem is just the English language being a pain. I knew what you were talking about but unless you really state when the effect is taking place it isn't being made exactly clear.Plasma Pistol is fine. No worries there. Though, I'd have thought it would be an Equip Spell. But nevermind that, it works well as it is.Well, seeing as I have posted about each of your cards made thus far, I am wondering if you would like me to come back regularly to check on your new cards? If so, just drop me a PM whenever you have posted some new cards and I'll get right on it as soon as I am next online. Good luck with the card making.[/quote'] Thanks Red, you've been a great help to me so far, and I appreciate it. I'd love to have to come check them every update. And thanks again. About the Plasma Grenade, I was worried about that. I was hoping someone would help me with it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burnburn Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Dude I Like the Master Chief Card the best 9/10Please save a Life Click here http://dragcave.net/user/burnburn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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