Guest JoshIcy Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 [align=center]Program used: GIMPTime: 1hr 30min# of Layers: 20 or so (unsure)Status: IncompleteYeah... Not sure where to go from here. But I am impressed with the result.CnC?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 More colour blending on the focal, like a gradient... And blend it into the BG maybe. Im no expert, but it would look better IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 I don't think I can do much CnC here. D: Just a smidge oversharp'd, but I like sharp too. ^_^more blending? Still nice though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Nothing's sharpened :shock:And if you want, I'll give you the .xcf when its done... Also, try and remember. This is a comic/manga style sig.And blend... What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 I realized it was comic/manga style. >_> Sure nothing's sharpened? :shock: The render looks like you at least sharpened it a little bit. Blend, good point. No blending needed, my bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Sorry but I really am not liking this, the paper crunch is EWW, the blending is horrible, and wtf is with those wavy black things? Otherwise it's okay I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Paper was to make it feel like something was there... I'll probably remove it later though. Just a filler until I get the tools. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 I have no place to cnc if it isn't done.Tho, remove the paper texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 More colour blending on the focal' date=' like a gradient... And blend it into the BG maybe. Im no expert, but it would look better IMO.[/quote'] Are you kidding?This is manga style, it's supposed to be B&W.Meh, Add something more to the BG, a wireframe or so =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Remove paper texture...Add to the BG, then add like seta said, a wireframe or something.But that render is awesome, this tag has goof potential.I look forward to the finished version :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 More colour blending on the focal' date=' like a gradient... And blend it into the BG maybe. Im no expert, but it would look better IMO.[/quote'] Are you kidding?This is manga style, it's supposed to be B&W.Meh, Add something more to the BG, a wireframe or so =/Yes but there is using B/W and there is totally screwing it up. The B/W hasn't been used properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 hmm.lose the paper and get a wireframe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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