MystyFiedBlaze Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 First of all I want to say one thing: I'm not English, I'm German... so it is hard for me to translate the effects of the monster I created into the english OCG, so please help me, rate them or correct the grammar if you want. I've created a few cards now, and I hope I can translate them, so that you can also rate them ^^ And here are they, hope you like them:Images belongs to rpgamer.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 nice cards not much OCG i can see i like them 8/10 ill give you 9.5/10 if you fix up the spelling and the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Tons of OCG. Not like what Aydane said. I like the thought of the Knights of the Round Table however. They could be better, and effects are almost evened out... I'd sadly only give you a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Many OCG errors don't make vanillas and king arthur is male 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 same here 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Many OCG errors don't make vanillas and king arthur is male 6/10 1. Yes, Vanillas suck to hell.2. That is a male. =/ It just doesn't look like it cause the chest kind of pushes out, compared to the rest of the body. It just means he's bulky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 yer i just found more OCG er... soz but 6.5/10 this time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystyFiedBlaze Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Well, I don't say it's wrong that the picture of Arthur is a little bit tricky, but I also don't say that your are right. You can look at the picture of it in two different ways. that was also the reason why I took the picture. About the OCG errors: Like I wrote before, it is hard for me translate effect into the English OCG. So it would be nice if you can help me or give me an advice how I should change the card texts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 I understand. And I will be glad to help. Send me cards 1 by 1 through PM if you'd like, and I will point out each detail, so you can fix it up, repost it, then send me the next to be fixed. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 huh?? what happened? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Seriously, how could you think Arthur was a woman?? (the person who wrote that it was a woman not you mysty). I get annoyed with people looking just at the chest area to define if its a man or woman in the picture, the face tells all I say. More than once I've sen people post like merman cards and it's a woman on the pic, they thought it was a man because they couldn't see the boobs -_- Look at the face, it is very easy to tell if it's a man or woman in most cases. Especially when it comes to some warrior cards use this since the armor can somtimes make the whole area look flat even if it's a woman. OT: I like the cards, although I see a lot of minor (maybe some major) OCG errors. Although I can understand why since english isn't your first language. I have the same problems sometimes, I'm from Sweden so English is not my first language either. Although I imagine you have a harder time since you can't look at your cards for help either (the cards are in geran, right?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Heh...I've been using the Knights of the Round for my theme as well (the thread is in my signature). Interesting you used Gawain since he was a traitor to the Knights of the Round, if I recall correctly. Considering Arthur is the leader of the Knights of the Round I would have made him the ace card of the deck giving him a higher level, stronger stats, and a better effect but that's just my opinion. Anyways, the effects are...okay at best. Simplistic effects are okay but they should really have more synergies with each other to help give you an advantage when you are using them in a duel. As they are right now you will be hard pressed to win with these cards. I won't comment on the OCG errors as each card will need to be fully rewritten to fix tlhe issues with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 I'm very surprised no one's mentioned this but several of those pics are from Fire Emblem. Doesn't bother me, but someone may complain about it. Just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystyFiedBlaze Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 @Killey: No, not Gawain was the traitor, it was Modred. I did a little research before I created the cards. About Arthur, well you may be right that he is a little bit weak on its own... but I think he is fine the way he is. @Lord Smeagle:Your right, that's why I said the Image belongs to rpgamer.comAlso I looked at other Card that were created here and can say there are also Pictures of Game Characters, Animes or something like that, that I know... but well, this a Card Creator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 So, are you going to make a Mordred? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Cant wait for the other Knights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.