shadowarcdragon Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 ok, the 4 swordsmen. please rate, and dont hold back your thoughts, but if you're in a bad mood, dont rate. all images from google. wait. sorry about the no capitalizing. oh, jeez, i talk way too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowarcdragon Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 bump bump bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
40 Card Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 [align=center]OCG errors in there, but not a lot. The effects are kinda dull, make them better in the future. Here is my rating: Names: 7/10Pics: 8/10Effects: 7/10OPed or UPed: 9/10Overall: 31/40General: 8/10 Pretty good cards for your first. :)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altyrell Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 1st change the names a bit: (Swordsman is the term and despite the "man" part it is gender neutral) *Kai, the Swordsman of Fire*Soku, the Swordsman of Earth*Raina, the Swordsman of Water*Airro, the Swordsman of Wind--------------Kai - When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 500 damage to the opponent's life points as Battle (or Effect) Damage. Soku - When this card attacks a monster with an ATK of 1500 or less, destroy that monster before Damage Calculation. Raina - This card is unaffected by the effect's of your opponent's Spell Cards. Airro - When you declare an attack with this card, you can half the ATK and DEF of the targeted Monster. ^^^Fixed the OCG while keeping the integrity of your concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 There are some OCG errors and the effects are all quite simple. I'd expand them and make them work together more (considering they're a set). 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Raina should have a second effect to make it better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowarcdragon Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 the whole _____swordsman/woman looks cool. but the effects are simple.maybe a six samurai style effect.by the way that^ was my post. apology for double posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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