Kale Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 [align=center]At the end of the day i will give a +rep to the person that left the best comment*. [1] Dual Fortress - SynthesisField Spell Card When a Gemini Monster is Summoned, destroyed, or an Equip Spell Card is activated, place 1 Gemini Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Gemini Counters from this card to treat 1 Gemini Monster you control as an Effect Monster and have it gain its effect. You can send this face-up card with 3 or more Gemini Counters to the Graveyard to add 1 Equip Spell Card in your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. Art : Oboro, Palace in the Clouds by Rob Alexander on http://www.mtgstaples.com/2943/8401.html [2] Edie, Lightsworn SaviorLIGHT••Fairy/Tuner600/1300 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it and send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. You can send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that would destroy this card, and destroy that card. Render http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t1/photomonster_2007/Anime_angel2.png These are in my fan fic chapter 6, Verge, link in my sig**. i would like to know your opinion on the support, more about the field spell than the Lightsworn. The LS is just a common, run of the mill tuner monster that can protect itself with a mill effect, but the Field Spell is the real idea here. ;) please post your ideas***. *The best comment is an opinion, and therefore is judged by me and solely me. If you have a problem with my choice then that is a personal problem of differing opinions and should not be voiced. If you wish to get a +rep in the future then do your utmost to post more interesting ideas. **It is entirely your choice if you want to read my fan fic, and i am in no way forcing you to do so. i am advising you strongly to do so, as it gets good reviews from several active readers on this site. If you do, i thank you a lot. ***Posting your ideas does not include flaming, insulting, putting down, being irritating, or trying to be satirical. Please do your best to be chipper, or at least not very interesting if you cannot act happy. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sockpuppet Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 I think that the cards are both really good, even though Edie,Lightsworn Savior is hard to summon. I am a little confused by what equip cards have to do directly with Gemini monsters. Overall the cards are balanced and not OP'ed. The pictures are great and fit well with the name and effect. These cards are really, really, interesting, even though they have a few minor, easy to fix flaws in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 I think that the cards are both really good' date=' even though Edie,Lightsworn Savior is hard to summon. I am a little confused by what equip cards have to do directly with Gemini monsters. Overall the cards are balanced and not OP'ed. The pictures are great and fit well with the name and effect. These cards are really, really, interesting, even though they have a few minor, easy to fix flaws in the effect.[/quote'] Evoltector Chevalier would like to have a few words with you. ;) effect: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:● By sending 1 face-up Equip Spell Card you control to your Graveyard, destroy 1 card your opponent controls. thats what they have to do with Equips. ;) thank you for commenting, i appreciate it loads. ;) the lightsworn can be retrieved with lumina if you discard her for a cost of Solar Recharge or Beckoning Light or something like that. ;) its easy enough.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Well, your Field Spell is effective pretty quickly, but! What happens if you Summon a Gemini monster, but have no equip cards in your hand. Then, you're left with nothing but a Normal Monster who can't use his effect until the next turn because of Double Summon. I think you should probably do something about that. Edie is useful to Summon a lot of Lightsworms, and is possibly abused as a Sawrm engine. But, why make Edie a Tuner? Unless you're using her Tuner powers to Summon Light End Dragon, I really don't see why she needs her Tuner status. Both cards are great, and have some flaws as stated above this sentence. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Well' date=' your Field Spell is effective pretty quickly, but! What happens if you Summon a Gemini monster, but have no equip cards in your hand. Then, you're left with nothing but a Normal Monster who can't use his effect until the next turn because of Double Summon. I think you should probably do something about that. Edie is useful to Summon a lot of Lightsworms, and is possibly abused as a Sawrm engine. But, why make Edie a Tuner? Unless you're using her Tuner powers to Summon Light End Dragon, I really don't see why she needs her Tuner status. Both cards are great, and have some flaws as stated above this sentence. 7.5/10[/quote'] well, with the field spell it only lets you speed it up a little. ;) if you cant use the ability first turn, that makes it more balanced, dont you think? :D and i made her a tuner for upcoming support for Talia's deck. i have to have Synchros for her too! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Interesting. . . I hadn't thought about Talia having Synchros at all. But why change Talia's original Vacant Deck with Lighsworns? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Interesting. . . I hadn't thought about Talia having Synchros at all. But why change Talia's original Vacant Deck with Lighsworns? well, if you want the truth, i never liked the concept of the Vacant monsters. :| plus i forgot the link anyway.. XD i have a story for why she changed her deck. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 The tie between Gemini's and Equip Spell Cards probably has something to do with the new Structure Deck in Japan "Warrior's Strike" as it is a deck based around Gemini Warriors who have an effects that use Equip Spell Cards as a cost to some pretty powerful effects. I'm kind of iffy on that field spell. I like it as a support for Gemini monsters by making it easier to trigger their effects without 2nd summoning them, however, the trigger for the counters seems too easy. Personally, I like to keep the trigger effects simplistic. The destruction trigger makes it too easy to gain counters on the field on top of the other 2 conditions but Gemini's are so under supported in general that I'm not really certain if doing that is necessary. It also seems kind of waste of a field spell just to add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard given the current repitoire of Equip Spell Cards and tutor cards such as Power Tool Dragon and the OCG's Arms Hole. I'm sure you've made the effect specifically for a certain scenario in your fan fic but I think as a card in the game you wouldn't see many people doing this. You could push the usefulness of the fiel spell by making that last effect to Special Summon 1 Gemini monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard (or specify 1 destination) and have it be treated as an effect monster. Of course, if you did that you would need to up the counter requirements to something higher like 5-10. Could make some good use of this field spell with the new Equip that has Gemini's be treated as effect monsters. Definitely would make Phoenix Gearfied more playable. Sockpuppet: I don't think you play Lightsworns at all as Lightsworn monsters and support cards have effects that cause the player to discard cards from the top of their deck. As such this card has the same synergies as Wulf. Edie, Lightsworn Savior wouldn't be hard to get on the field at all. The trick is keeping it on the field long enough to be Synchro Summoned on your turn (unless you were using Urgent Tuning but what Lightsworn deck uses that). The protection from destruction effects keeps consistent with the theme and is good to ward off destruction cards but I kind of would have liked to have seen it with an effect like "If this card would be destroyed by battle you can send the top X card(s) of your Deck to the Graveyard instead." Be more practical in keeping it alive should it be discarded during the end phase for it's Special Summon Trigger. Maybe make it a once per turn thing to prevent high discards for easy JD drops but I digress. As it stands you will have to rely on Solar Recharge, Charge of the Light Brigade, or Foolish Burial to take advantage of the fact that it's a Tuner monster as I see it being easily attacked over rather than using destruction based cards. The picture for the LS card is a bit out of focus but good attention to detail in using the same triangular symbol and color scheme that other LS have in their backgrounds. Helps to make it look like an authentic LS card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Thank you Killey! you always impress me with your comments. ;) i knew that my LS monster was lackluster, but i made it for the sole idea of using it in the fan fic. :D i do realize that i would need to tweak it a bit for an irl card. ;) and the field spell i did that way specifically because this theme is so undersupported. with the counters filling the field so fast it makes some of these cards so much more playable, but it keeps it still able to be nice to your opponent. ;) and yes, it makes Phoenix more playable. :D thank you for stopping by! you are currently at #1 to get that +rep today. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAlpha Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 I love the field spell! With it there's a possibility that you won't have to wait till your next turn to activate a Gemini's effect and you would be able to summon a second Gemini!! Awesome Kale! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I love the field spell! With it there's a possibility that you won't have to wait till your next turn to activate a Gemini's effect and you would be able to summon a second Gemini!! Awesome Kale! thanks! :D i appreciate it a lot. ;) Killey gets the +rep prize. any other comments are appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Cool cards. Edie would get overused in a Lightsworn deck though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Cool cards. Edie would get overused in a Lightsworn deck though. 8/10 overused, yes. but overpowered is the question! :D thank you for the rating. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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