donnie567 Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 introduction the stick kingdom was safe from evil until, one day, the tyrant general of shadowstick commanded his army to drestroy all buildings, kill the king, and rule the entire kingdom of stickovia. then, a hero rose up from the castle and killed every solder of the tyrant general. then, he destroyed the tyrant general, who was never seen again... ...or was he? the story of stick hero! episode 1: the adventure begins! NOTE: YOU ALL REMEMBER THE NEVER ENDING STORY RIGHT?SO I NEED ACTION PARTS FOR THIS STORY! 1. I LIKE A GOOD BATTLE SCENE, SO DO YOUR BEST TO MAKE UP A GOOD "BAD GUY". MAKE SURE IT AIN'T A GOOD GUY. 2. AND MAKE SURE THE BAD GUYS ARE ALL STICK FIGURES. ADD WEAPONS, ARMORS, AND MAYBE A FEW BOSS NAMES FOR THE BOSSES 3. I NEED ONLY ACTION WITH A FEW "NO BAD GUY" SCENES. MAYBE A LITTLE ROMANCE SOMEWHERE ALONG THE WAY. AND A TEENCEY WEENCEY BIT OF COLLAMITY, MISSHAP, AND PERRILPUT IT ALL TOGETHER AND YOU HAVE A SPICEY ACTION STORY SANDWICH 4. IF I LIKE IT I'LL MAKE YOU A CONTESTANT FOR THE DONBOT 44 VIEDEO AWARDS SO MAKE IT GOOD IF YOU WANNA AWARD. I,LL START. the king was on his throne( as usual ) when the spy came in. spy: sir, enemy is coming again.king: WHAT!?!? well don't just stand there, get em'!spy: sir, i'm just a spy. besides,we're all outta solders.king: WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?spy: wait, ain't that stick hero down there?king: why it is! go get em'! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 SH: (scoffs) this'll be too easy. SLASH!SH: no sweat. whaaaa!enemy1: where do ya think you're goin'?enemy2: you're not goin' anywhere! thats where you're not goin'enemy3: don't listen to him he always says that.enemy1: ahh! shut up!enemy3: you better watch you're mouth! all he enemies got in an arguement giving our hero time to escape to the castle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 ...or does he? (indestinct angry chattering) SLASH! SLASH! SLASH!(chattering stops) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 wrong section -fan-fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 ooooooooooooooohhhh!(talking to self: darn it! i was wrong again!!!!!)wait, it said "any fan fiction related to yu-gi-oh!".so i'm staying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Moved from General. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Okay, first off, please tell me what capital letters are for? Time for a review. introduction the stick kingdom was safe from evil until' date=' one day, the tyrant general of shadowstick commanded his army to drestroy all buildings, kill the king, and rule the entire kingdom of stickovia.Woah woah WOAH WOAH WOOOAH WOOOOOAH. This sentence is TOO FRIGGIN' LONG AND STUFFED LIKE A...um, guy who ate a lot. I guess. I won't tell you how desperately I want you to use capital letters, but this is already making no sense at all. I don't want to read this. then, a hero rose up from the castle and killed every solder of the tyrant general. then, he destroyed the tyrant general, who was never seen again...So was the army SOOOO sucky that one guy could kill them? We got NO description of what they did, how they treated victims, how the final battle was like, how the hero came to be so Texas Tough...WHYZORZ?!?! ...or was he? the story of stick hero! episode 1: the adventure begins! NOTE: YOU ALL REMEMBER THE NEVER ENDING STORY RIGHT?SO I NEED ACTION PARTS FOR THIS STORY!Oh, crappity crap! Too MANY capitals!! WHAT IS UP WIT CHOO?!?! I see how this was...uh, "meant" to be a roleplay kinda thing, but since you didn't have sign-up sheets, you're just asking people to write this crap-fish FOR YOU. That's not cool.1. I LIKE A GOOD BATTLE SCENE, SO DO YOUR BEST TO MAKE UP A GOOD "BAD GUY". MAKE SURE IT AIN'T A GOOD GUY. 2. AND MAKE SURE THE BAD GUYS ARE ALL STICK FIGURES. ADD WEAPONS, ARMORS, AND MAYBE A FEW BOSS NAMES FOR THE BOSSESBosses? Is this a video game, a story, a tv show, a drug trip? I CAN'T COMPREHEND THIS PILE OF GIRAFFE CARCASSES!! 3. I NEED ONLY ACTION WITH A FEW "NO BAD GUY" SCENES. MAYBE A LITTLE ROMANCE SOMEWHERE ALONG THE WAY. AND A TEENCEY WEENCEY BIT OF COLLAMITY, MISSHAP, AND PERRILPUT IT ALL TOGETHER AND YOU HAVE A SPICEY ACTION STORY SANDWICHThis sentence has so many spelling errors that it IS funny. Probably the only funny part of the entire series.4. IF I LIKE IT I'LL MAKE YOU A CONTESTANT FOR THE DONBOT 44 VIEDEO AWARDS SO MAKE IT GOOD IF YOU WANNA AWARD.I don't WANT your awards! WAAAH!!I,LL START. the king was on his throne( as usual ) when the spy came in. spy: sir, enemy is coming again.king: WHAT!?!? well don't just stand there, get em'!spy: sir, i'm just a spy. besides,we're all outta solders.king: WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?spy: wait, ain't that stick hero down there?king: why it is! go get em'!Oh, shiznit. This is in script format?! I hate this story. What does the room look like? Is it just a white void with a chair? And why isn't anybody else in there? And these characters have no personality. They're just as flat as stick figures. I HATE THIS SOO MUCH. No sense, no effort, no future, no plot(it's so bad that it doesn't count), no good things to point out. If you're going to do anything, put real energy into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 hey! the "Woah woah WOAH WOAH WOOOAH WOOOOOAH part is my line!and one more thing i want to say, >( WHAT THE HECK DID YOU SAY THAT FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????FINE, I'LL MOVE! BUT IF I GET BANNED, YOU'LL BE SORRY YOU EVER MET ME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 hey! the "Woah woah WOAH WOAH WOOOAH WOOOOOAH part is my line!and one more thing i want to say' date=' >( WHAT THE HECK DID YOU SAY THAT FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????[hr']FINE, I'LL MOVE! BUT IF I GET BANNED, YOU'LL BE SORRY YOU EVER MET ME!Why are you talking about moving? I just said that it looked like an RP instead of a real story because of you asking people to write so many things for you!! And I noticed that you still haven't been practicing correct capitalization... But anyways, I don't want you to hate me, since then I'll hate you, and we'll get into flaming wars. You can either make some sort of reply like this or ignore what I'd said. But I meant everything I said, however extreme it was, and I'm sorry if it hurt. Just do whatever you want. Have a cookie.[spoiler=Cookie.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 look! this is a rare card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Um... yay spam? Anyway, Bob's Bobbing Adventures of Bob >> this. Stop writing and spamming here, now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 THAT'S IT! LOCK THIS RACKIN' FRACKIN' THREAD! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!IF YOU GUYS ARE GONNA COMPLAIN ABOUT IT SO MUCH, THEN I'M MAKING A NEW THREAD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Please don't. We'd appreciate it so much more if you lent yourself to General. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnie567 Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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