Harry Potter /Yugioh crossover.

[barryc100588]

I've seen Yugioh crossed with Digimon and Pokemon, so mine is YuGioh crossed with Harry Potter. The first two chapters are just deck lists, but I'd like to know if the decks are too powerful or too weak, or if they're just not turning out to be what they should have been. The Domino Trio's decks are first, their decks get the initial chapter. Their decks feature cards from the anime, like the Sacred Dragons and Knights.

 

[spoiler=Decklist 1]A/N: This is a Harry Potter/Yu-Gi-Oh Crossover. This chapter will just be an introduction. In the Yu-Gi-Oh timeline, this takes place during the Waking the Dragons arc. In Harry Potter, it takes place before, during, and after Harry's sixth year of Hogwarts. This chapter will just contain the different decks for or planned for each character.

 

Chapter 1: Introductions Part 1

 

Yugi's Deck:

 

Effect monsters:

Dark magician Girl

Kuriboh

Berfomet

Valkyrion the Magna Warrior

Beast of Gilfer

Catapult Turtle

Watapon

Big Shield Gardna

Breaker the Magical Warrior

Buster Blader

Electromagnetic Turtle

King's Knight

Kuriba

Kuribabylon

Kuribandit

Kuribe

Kuribi

Kuribu

Legendary Knight Critias

Legendary Knight Hermos

Legendary Knight Timaeus

Obnoxious Celtic Guard

Sangan

Ace Knight

Ten's Knight

Royal Flush Lord

 

 

Normal Monsters:

Gazelle the King of Mythical Beasts

Dark Magician

Alpha the Magnet Warrior

Beta the magnet Warrior

Gaia the Fierce Knight

Gamma the Magnet Warrior

Giant Soldier of Stone

Curse of Dragon

Jack's Knight

Queen's Knight

Summoned Skull

 

Ritual Monsters:

Black Luster Soldier

 

Fusion Monsters:

Amulet Dragon (Fusion of Eye of Timaeus and Dark Magician)

Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast (Fusion of Gazelle and Berfomet)

Dark Magician Girl the Dragon Knight (Fusion of Eye of Timaeus and Dark Magician Girl)

Dragon Master Knight (Fusion of Black Luster Soldier and Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon)

Gaia the Dragon Champion (Fusion of Gaia the Fierce Knight and Curse of Dragon)

Knight of destiny (Fusion of Legendary Knight Timaeus, Legendary Knight Critias, and Legendary Knight Hermos)

Royal Flush King (Fusion of Queen's Knight, King's Knight, Jack's Knight, Ace Knight, and Ten's Knight)

Royal Flush Dragon (Fusion of Eye of Timaeus and Royal Flush King)

 

Spell Cards:

The Eye of Timeaus

Altar of Restoration

Amazoness Spellcaster

Berserker Soul

Black Luster Ritual

Brave Attack

Card Destruction

Card of Sanctity

Dark Magic Curtain

De-Fusion

Diffusion Wave Motion

Excalibur

Fissure

Five Star Twilight

Goddess Bow (Played by removing one Claw of Hermos and one Queen's Knight from play.)

Graceful Charity

Hand Control

Legend of Heart (Pay 1000 Life Points and Tribute 1 monster. Remove from play 1 each of "The Eye of Timaeus", "The Claw of Hermos", and "The Fang of Critias" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard to Special Summon 1 each of "Legendary Knight Timaeus", "Legendary Knight Hermos", and "Legendary Knight Critias" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.)

Magic Formula

Magical Acadamy

Magical Hats

Magical Pidgeon

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Necromancy

Polymerization

Pot of Greed

Pump Up

Spider Web

Swords of Revealing Light

The Shallow Grave

Underworld Circle

Multiply

 

Trap Cards:

Ambush Shield

Attack Guidance Barrier

Collected Power

Dark renewal

Divine Wind

Dust Tornado

Meteorain

Mirror Force

Natural Selection

Reduction Barrier

Relay Soul

Rope of Life

Soul Rope

Soul Shield

Zero Gravity

Spirit of the Royal Flush

 

Jonouchi's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Battle Steer

Cyber-Tech Alligator

Garoozis

Red Eyes B. Dragon

Rude Kaiser

Alligator's Sword

Armored Lizard

Axe Raider

Battle Warrior

Baby Dragon

Rock Ogre Grotto #1

Skull Stalker

Swordsman of Landstar

The Furious Sea King

Tiger Axe

Claw Reacher

Glass Man

Hero of the East

Kagemusha of the Blue Flame

Kageningen

Knight of Landstar

Kojikocy

Leogun

Masaki the Legendary Swordsman

M-Warrior #1

M-Warrior #2

 

Effect Monsters:

Gearfried the Swordsmaster

Gilford the Lightning

Insect Queen

Jinzo

Maximum Six

Swamp Battleguard

Sword Hunter

The Fiend Megacyber

The legendary Fisherman

Blue Flame Swordsman

Red Eyes Black Metal Dragon

Brigadier of Landstar

Copycat

Cyber Harpie

Fiber Jar

Gearfried the Iron Knight

Goblin Attack Force

Grappler of Landstar

Hayabusa Knight

Little-Winguard

Mad Sword Beast

Marauding Captain

Meko Mane King

Panther Warrior

Parasite Paracide

Rocket Warrior

Sasuke Samurai

Time Wizard

Fusion Wizard (Flip a coin. One of the following effects activates based on the result:

 

Heads: Tribute "Fusion Wizard" and 1 or more monsters written on a Fusion Monster Card. Special Summon that Fusion Monster in face-up Attack or defense position. (This Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.)

 

Tails: Your opponent gains control of "Fusion Wizard". On their next Main Phase 1, they can Tribute "Fusion Wizard and 1 or more Monsters written on a Fusion Monster Card, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster in face-up Attack or Defense Position.

 

If this card is Destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, it is instead treated as an Equip Spell Card, and Equipped to a Fusion Monster that you control. The monster Equipped with this card gains 500 ATK and cannot switch sides. If there are no Fusion Monsters on your side of the field, this effect is negated. I created this card myself)

 

Ritual Monsters:

Fortress Whale

Knight of Dark Dragons

Lord of the Red

 

Fusion Monsters:

Alligator's Sword Dragon

Giltia the Dark Knight

B. Skull Dragon

Dark Flare Knight (Can only use in tag-team duels with Yugi, and maybe a character from Harry Potter)

Flame Swordsman

Thousand Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

The Claw of Hermos

Ace Sword

Arduous Risk

Attrition

Big Bang Dragon Blow

Block Attack

Burning Soul Sword

Dangerous Machine Type-6

Dark Dragon Ritual

Dragon Nails

Energy Drain

Foolish Burial

Giant Trunade

Graceful Dice

Gust Fan

Harpie's Feather Duster

Hinotama

Hyper Refresh

Knight's Title (Can only use in a Tag duel with Yugi, or possibly a Harry Potter Character)

Landstar Forces

Landstar Shot

Legendary Sword

Lightning Blade

Meteor of Destruction

Monster Reborn

Polymerization

Pot of Greed

Premature Burial

Question

Raigeki

Red Eyes Black Dragon Sword (Remove Claw of Hermos and Red Eyes B. Dragon from play. Equip only to a Warrior-Type Monster you control. The Equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and another 500 ATK for every Dragon-Type monster on the field.)

Red Eyes Transmigration

Release restraint

Rocket Hermos Cannon (Activate only from your hand or Deck by removing from play 1 "The Claw of Hermos" and 1 "Rocket Warrior" you control. Equip only to a monster with 1000 ATK or less. When the equipped monster attacks, destroy all monsters your opponent controls at the start of the Damage Step, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined original ATK of the destroyed monster(s).)

Roll of Fate

Roulette Spider

Salamandra

Scapegoat

Shield and Sword

Star Blaster

Sword of Tens

The Warrior Returning Alive

Time Magic Hammer (Activate only from your hand or Deck by removing from play 1 "The Claw of Hermos" and 1 "Time Wizard" you control. Roll 1 six-sided die for each of your opponent's monsters and remove those monsters from play at the beginning of your opponent's Standby Phases. During each of your opponent's next Standby Phases, Special Summon the monsters removed by this card's effect, starting with those whose result was 1. During the next Standby Phases, repeat with those whose result was 2. Continue this until your opponent's sixth Standby Phase after their monsters were removed from play.)

 

Trap Cards:

Aura Armor

Bottomless Trap Hole

Celebration of Creation

Chasm of Spikes

Compensation Mediation

Double Magical Arm Bind

Drop Off

Fairy Box

Gamble

Graverobber

Kunai With Chain

Magical Arm Shield

Metalmorph

Nutrient Z

Rare Metalmorph

Silver Dollar

Skull Dice

Take One Chance

Trap Hole

Vow of Tribe

 

Seto Kaiba's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Blue Eyes White Dragon x3

Gadget Soldier

Judge Man

Vorse Raider

X-Head Cannon

 

Effect Monsters:

Blade Knight

Different Dimension Dragon

Kaiser Glider

Kaiser Sea Horse

Pitch-Dark Dragon

Spear Dragon

Versago the Destroyer

Y-Dragon Head

Z-Metal Tank

 

Fusion Monsters:

Blue Eyes Tyrant Dragon (Blue Eyes White Dragon + Tyrant Burst Dragon)

Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon (Blue Eyes White Dragon + Blue Eyes White Dragon + Blue Eyes White Dragon)

Dragon Master Knight (Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon + Black Luster Soldier)

Doom Virus Dragon (Fang of Critias + Crush Card Virus)

Mirror Force Dragon ( Fang of Critias + Mirror Force)

Tyrant Burst Dragon (Tyrant Burst + Fang of Critias)

XYZ Dragon Cannon (X-Head Cannon + Y-Dragon Head + Z-Metal Tank. Without Polymerization.)

 

Ritual Monsters:

Paladin of White Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

A Wingbeat of Giant Dragon

Card of Demise

Charm of Lamentation

Cost Down

Monster Reborn

Polymerization

Pot of Greed

Reflect Energy

Shrink

Silent Doom

Soul Exchange

The Fang of Critias

White Dragon Ritual

 

Trap Cards:

Attack Guidance Barrier

Cloning

Crush Card

Magical Trick Mirror

Negate Attack

Ring of Destruction

Tyrant Wing

Wish of Final Effort

 

That's it.

 

A/N: Next Chapter will be Harry and Crew's Decks, namely Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley, and Hermione Granger. Now question. What theme should each member of the "Golden Trio" have for their decks, and what should their best monster be? I can't, and i mean can't update until I get ideas for each one. It's not that I won't, but that I'm drawing a blank and need help. Until then, barryc100588, signing out.

 

 

[spoiler=Decklist 2]A/N: Here's the layout for decks. I know I said I needed deck Ideas, but that's changed now. If you want to give me card ideas now or later, feel free to, but I'm not pressuring you to. Harry will have a Warrior Theme. Ron will have Cyber Dragons. Hermione will have Spellcasters.

 

Chapter 2: introductions, Part 2:

 

Harry Potter's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Elemental Hero Avian

Elemental Hero burstinatrix

Elemental Hero Clayman

Elemental Hero Sparkman

 

Effect Monsters:

Dark Catapulter

Elemental Hero Bladedge

Elemental Hero Bubbleman

Elemental Hero Clay Guardian

Elemental Hero Necroshade

Elemental Hero Neo Bubbleman

Elemental Hero Wildheart

Hero Kid x3

Winged Kuriboh

Winged Kuriboh LV10

Wroughtweiler

 

Ritual Monsters:

 

Fusion Monsters:

Elemental Hero Electrum

Elemental Hero Flame Wingman

Elemental Hero Mariner

Elemental Hero Mudballman

Elemental Hero Necroid Shaman

Elemental Hero Rampart Blaster

Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman

Elemental Hero Steam Healer

Elemental Hero Tempest

Elemental Hero Thunder Giant

Elemental Hero Wildedge

Elemental Hero Wild Wingman

 

Spell Cards:

Bubble Blaster

Bubble Illusion

Bubble Shuffle

Burial from a Different Dimension

Burst Impact

Burst Return

Clay Wrap

Courageous Charge!

Cyclone Boomerang

Dark Factory of Mass Production

De-Fusion

Double Spell

E - Emergency Call

Emergency Provisions

Fairy of the Spring

Feather Shot

Fusion Gate

Fusion Recovery

Fusion Sage

H - Heated Heart

HERO Flash!!

Hero Heart

Kishido Spirit

Light Laser

Metamorphosis

Miracle Fusion

Mirage of Nightmare

Monster Reborn

Monster Reincarnation

Mud Max

O - Oversoul

Polymerization x2

Pot of Greed

R - Righteous Justice

Silent Doom

Skyscraper

Spark Blaster

Special Hurricane

Spy Hero

Terraforming

The Flute of Summoning Kuriboh

The Warrior Returning Alive

Transcendent Wings

Wild Half

 

Trap Cards:

A Hero Emerges

Clay Charge

Cross Heart

Draining Shield

Edge Hammer

Elemental Burst

Feather Wind

Hero Barrier

Hero Ring

Hero Signal

Hero Spirit

Hero's Rule 1: Five Freedoms

Insurance

Invincible Hero

Miracle Kids

Mirror Force

Mirror Gate

Mispolymerization

Negate Attack

Solemn Judgment

Soul Union

Staunch Defender

Super Junior Confrontation

 

 

Ron Weasley's Deck:

 

Effect monsters:

Cyber Dragon x3

Barrier Dragon

Laser Dragon

Cyber Pheonix

Heavy Mech Support Platform

Proto-Cyber Dragon x3

The light - Hex Sealed Fusion

Shining Angel x3

 

Fusion Monsters:

Chimeratech Overdragon

Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

Cyber End Dragon x2

Cyber Twin Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

Double Summon

Gold Sarcophagus x2

Future Fusion

Heavy Storm

Giant Trunade

Limiter Removal

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Overload Fusion

Photon Generator Unit

Power Bond

Swords of Revealing Light

 

Trap Cards:

Magic Cylinder

Torrential Tribute

Sakuretsu Armor

Attack Reflector Unit

Ultimate Offering

Mirror Force

Draining Shield x3

Enchanted Javelin x3

DNA Surgery

Pole Position

 

 

 

Hermione's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Aqua Madoor

Neo Aqua Madoor

Neo the Magic Swordsman

Mystical Elf

Dark Magician x3

Gemini Elf

Lady of Faith

Left Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

 

Effect Monsters:

Old Vindictive Magician

Exodia the Forbidden One

Exodia Necross

Exodius the Ultimate Forbidden lord

Witch of the Black Forest

Sangan

Marshmallon

Destiny Hero - Defender

The Bistro Butcher

Chainsaw Insect

Morphing Jar

A cat of Ill Omen

Thunder Dragon x3

Jinzo

 

Spell Cards:

Contract with Exodia

Black Pendant

Premature Burial

Pot of Greed

Swords of revealing Light

Level Limit - Area B

Cup of Ace

Second Coin Toss

Infinite Cards

Graceful Charity

Amplifier

Monster Reincarnation

Dark factory of Mass Production

Pot of Avarice

Gold Sarcophagus x2

Monster Reborn

 

Trap cards:

Call of the Haunted

Shadow Spell

Enchanted Javelin x3

Draining Shield x3

Energy Drain

Magic Drain

Jar of Greed

Wall of Revealing light

Waboku

Appropriate

Gravity Bind

Solemn Wishes

Back-up Soldier

 

That's it.

 

A/N: That's it for introductions. Next Chapter we'll be in Domino City, and the one after will be Surrey and London. Now, I know that Ron's deck is exactly like Zane's deck. I planned it that way. That means that there will be many cards that premiered in GX appearing in this story. Anyway, R&R please.

 

[bury the year]

ITT: The deck lists are going to be longer than the actual chapters. Prove me wrong, and write something for it now. At least a prologue.

[barryc100588]

First, the first actual chapter is over 2K words. That was just over 1K. The next chapter is less than 1K. But sure. I'll try to write a prologue. Also, this fic will be rated PG-16 for language, frightening imagery, and cartoon violence.

 

[spoiler=Prologue]Undisclosed location, June 1, unknown year:

 

Tom Marvolo Riddle, more commonly known as Voldemort, was busy casting spells on a Duel Monsters card. His whole deck and Duel Disk off to the side. Contrary to popular belief, Voldemort is a duelist. A very good duelist. But his opponents could all walk away when they lost. This new card would change that.

 

"I need a card that can kill without killing. Something that can steal souls, and just leave the bodies in a catatonic state for an indefinite period of time."

 

He cast the final spell, and grabbed his duel disk, before slipping it on, and activating it.

 

"Now, to see how it works."

 

Voldemort knew that he couldn't lose his soul. To lose a soul, it has to be whole. He s,lipped the card into the Field card zone, and energy sparked as a weird ring with archaic runes around the perimeter appeared, an odd hexagram going through the middle. That same hexagram appeared on Voldemort's pale forehead.

 

"Yes... YES!! The power to control someone's fate. It's mine at last! Now, my servants won't have to die. They can duel for their souls instead! I'll have this card mass produced! All my servants will have one, but they can only use it on our enemies."

 

And mass produce it he did. That night, one of the death eaters approached the Bones residence, and cast anti-apparition wards, before blowing the door down. Madam bones grabbed her wand, but it was knocked out of her hand by a spell. "Madam Bones? We're here for you."

 

Madam Bones laughed." I won't go silently."

 

"We didn't expect you to. You'll be leaving without your soul."

 

"A duel is it? The whole ministry enjoys the game. I'm an expert."

 

She grabbed her duel disk, and slipped it on. It was of a newer model, the Monster and Spell/Trap card zones on one plate that extended and the Graveyard Zone would be revealed once it activated. The black light turned yellow, indicating Hufflepuff. (if I'm wrong, please tell me.) Her Fusion deck was above the regular deck, and the out of play zone was under the disk. "You want a duel you've got one!"

 

"Perfect!"

 

(Madam Bones: 8000, Death eater: 8000)

 

The duel occurred, and it seemed that madam Bones was winning. She hadn't lost a single point.

 

(madam Bones: 8000, Death eater: 5000)

 

"Now I play for keeps. I activate The Seal of Orichalcos!" The hexagram seal appeared, both on the ground and on the Death eater's forehead. Now I activate Temple of the Serpent King! I must sacrifice 12 stars worth of monsters, but it'll pay off, when I play The Legendary Basilisk! This card commands control of Reptiles, and gains 500 for each one on the field and in the graveyard. And there are a total of 6 Reptiles on the field and in the graveyard, so it gains an extra 3000 Attack points, making its Attack score 8000. You have that measly 3000 Attack point monster. Well, Basilisk, destroy her monster! Deadly Glare!"

 

The monster turned to stone, and the stone statue crumbled as Madam Bones felt the shock of losing 5000 Life points.

 

(M. Bones: 3000, D. Eater: 5000)

 

"It's your turn."

 

The head of law enforcement drew.

 

"I play a card face down, and end my turn. Do your worst."

 

"I will!"

 

He drew, and smiled.

 

"It's my Standby phase, and I discarded Sinister Serpent for the ritual. So, it comes back to my hand."

 

The card left his grave yard and he returned it to his hand.

 

"I'll Summon the guy in Attack mode."

 

It appeared. It looked like the Japanese cryptid, Tsuchinoko.

 

"Now, Basilisk, end the duel, Deadly Glare!"

 

The beast glared, and energy seemed to be shot out, striking Bones, as she grunted and her life points fell to 0.

 

"The cost of losing an Orichalcos duel is high. Now you lose your soul!

 

The seal closed around Madam bones, and as she screamed, the scene flowed upwards. When we see bones again, she flops on her knees, then her face, catatonic.

 

"That's one victim. Lucius, we received intelligence that there are a few powerful duelists in Japan. The Dark lord will want the whole world soon, so go check it out."

 

"Yes sir. My Sacred Beast deck will teach them."

 

Lucius leaves for Japan, the rest leave for their HQ.

 

And this is the prologue. Sorry for it being so long. It explains how Lucius got to Japan. Next chapter will be the Golden trio's deck list, then chapter 1.

 

[ExKirby]

I'd recommend putting all that in a spoiler box. Still, good story. Do you need any help?

[barryc100588]

One, that was the actual prologue, not some secret for a later time. Two, help is appreciated. I'm posting the deck lists of the Golden Trio now, so if you could look them over, and tell me what's wrong in their design and how you think it could be fixed. That's all for right now. When the next actual chapter appears, I'll let you know what you could do.

 

[spoiler=Decklist 2]A/N: Here's the layout for decks. I know I said I needed deck Ideas, but that's changed now. If you want to give me card ideas now or later, feel free to, but I'm not pressuring you to. Harry will have a Warrior Theme. Ron will have Cyber Dragons. Hermione will have Spellcasters.

 

Chapter 2: introductions, Part 2:

 

Harry Potter's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Ansatsu

Armaill

Axe Raider

Battle Warrior

Blade Skater x3

Dark Blade

Gaia the Fierce Knight x3

Warrior Dai Grepher x3

Queen's Knight

Jack's Knight

 

Effect Monsters:

The Six Samurai - Irou

The Six Samurai - Kamon

The Six Samurai - Nisashi

The Six Samurai - Yaichi

The Six Samurai - Yariza

The Six Samurai - Zanji

Etoile Cyber x3

Familiar Knight x3

Marauding Captain x3

King's Knight

Silent Swordsman LV3

Silent Swordsman LV 5

Silent Swordsman LV 7

Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight

Fusion Wizard (Flip a coin. One of the following effects activates based on the result:

 

Heads: Tribute "Fusion Wizard" and 1 or more monsters written on a Fusion Monster Card. Special Summon that Fusion Monster in face-up Attack or defense position. (This Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.)

 

Tails: Your opponent gains control of "Fusion Wizard". On their next Main Phase 1, they can Tribute "Fusion Wizard and 1 or more Monsters written on a Fusion Monster Card, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster in face-up Attack or Defense Position.

 

If this card is Destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, it is instead treated as an Equip Spell Card, and Equipped to a Fusion Monster that you control. The monster Equipped with this card gains 500 ATK and cannot switch sides. If there are no Fusion Monsters on your side of the field, this effect is negated. This is a card I created.)

 

Ritual Monsters:

Black luster Soldier

 

Fusion Monsters:

Cyber Blader

 

Spell Cards:

Ante

Bait Doll

Card Destruction

Cost Down x3

Nobleman of Crossout x3

Polymerization x3

Tremendous Fire

Banner of Courage

Mirage of Nightmare

Emergency Provisions

Second Coin Toss

Axe of Despair

Premature Burial

Black Luster Ritual

 

Trap Cards:

Backs to the Wall

Trap Hole

Bottomless Trap Hole

Call of the Haunted

Blind Destruction

Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell

Barrel Behind the Door

Hero's Rule 2

Negate Attack x3

Mirror Force

Magic Cylinder

Ring of Destruction

Trap Jammer

 

Ron Weasley's Deck:

 

Effect monsters:

Cyber Dragon x3

Barrier Dragon

Laser Dragon

Cyber Pheonix

Cyber Kirin

Heavy Mech Support Platform

Metalizing Parasite - Lunatite x3

Proto-Cyber Dragon

 

Normal Monsters:

Cyber Soldier of Darkworld

 

Fusion Monsters:

Chimeratech Overdragon

Cyber End Dragon x2

Cyber Twin Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

Battle Fusion

Card from a Different Dimension

Creature Swap

Cybernetic Fusion Support

De-Fusion x2

Different Dimension Capsule

Future Fusion

Limiter Removal

Machine Duplication

Overload Fusion

Photon Generator Unit

Polymerization

Pot of Greed

Power Bond

Premature Burial

Ruthless Denial

Time Fusion

Trap Booster

 

Trap Cards:

Attack Reflector Unit

Call of the Haunted

Damage Polarizer

Final Fusion

Lost Pride

Rare Metalmorph

Return Soul

Trap Jammer

 

Hermione's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Aqua Madoor

Neo Aqua Madoor

Neo the Magic Swordsman

Mystical Elf

Dark Magician x3

Gemini Elf

Lady of Faith

Left Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

 

Effect Monsters:

Old Vindictive Magician

Exodia the Forbidden One

Exodia Necross

Exodius the Ultimate Forbidden lord

Skilled Dark Magician

Silent Magician LV 4

Silent Magician LV 8

Sorcerer of Dark Magic

Dark Magician Girl

Time Wizard

Dark Sage

White Magician Pikeru

Ebon Magician Curran

Princess Pikeru

Princess Ebon

Dark Magician of Chaos

Magician Girl's Appreintice

Apprentice Magician

 

Ritual Monsters:

Magician of Black Chaos

 

Spell Cards:

Contract with Exodia

Dedication Through Light and Darkness

Sage's Stone

Black Magic Ritual

Magic Formula

Book of Secret Arts

Black Pendant

Yami

Mystic Plasma Zone

Umiiruka

Premature Murial

 

Trap cards:

DNA Transplant

Bad reaction to Simochi

Call of the Haunted

Level Conversion Lab

Shadow Spell

Dice Re-roll

Enchanted Javelin x3

Draining Shield x3

Energy Drain

 

That's it.

 

A/N: That's it for introductions. Next Chapter we'll be in Domino City, and the one after will be Surrey and London. Now, I know that Ron's deck is exactly like Zane's deck. I planned it that way. That means that there will be many cards that premiered in GX appearing in this story. Anyway, R&R please.

 

[RyanAtlus]

Spoiler tags:

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Put everything in the first post.

The decks are extremely weak because they've got oo many strategies. For Yugi, Joey and Kaiba, focus them on Summoning the Key Cards.

As for the HP characters: I suggest the following:

Harry: Warrior / Rat Toolbox. No SS

Ron: Just mosh the Cyber Dragon Cards.

Hermione: I recommand choosing for either Exodia, or the DM family. Both seem good, but only one of them.

 

I assume the story takes place between HBP and DH?

[barryc100588]

That works better than my idea of between OOTP and HBP. So, yeah. I can just rearrange ideas a bit, since everyone plays DM in this story. This also takes place during the Doma/Orichalcos arc of YGO. Thanks for the ideas. I'm giving Hermione an Exodia Deck. What do you mean mosh? I was actually thinking of having Harry's deck being one of recklessness, which he made in Year 1, and kept since, so it has his heart and soul in it. He'll modify it a bit, make it less reckless, but it'll still be his deck. His key monster will always be Gilford the Lightning, even if he completely remakes his deck, it will have that monster in it. I'd like some help on making a Sacred beast deck though for Draco. That will be the deck that he's given from his father.

[ExKirby]

I could help make up some parts of the story?

[barryc100588]

Only if you want to. I won't force you into anything. But first, what does it mean to mosh something?

[RyanAtlus]

Only if you want to. I won't force you into anything. But first' date=' what does it mean to mosh something?

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I meant he could just go for the lolbeatsticks of the archetype.

 

Actually, I think it'd be even cooler if Harry played Blackwing, Ron Glads and Hermione Lightsworn.

Maybe give Yugi and Kaiba a Deck that could actually stand a chance in reali life.

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Yes, well, no cards from 5D's will appear in this fic. Only cards from YGO/YGO GX will appear. So, if the deck theme appears in YGO/YGO GX, then I'm all ears. Also, I have the edited Deck list for the Golden trio. I'm still working on the first one, but once it's completed, I'll post it, then we can get on with the story.

 

[spoiler=Updated Decklist and intros 2]A/N: Here's the layout for decks. I know I said I needed deck Ideas, but that's changed now. If you want to give me card ideas now or later, feel free to, but I'm not pressuring you to. Harry will have an Elemental Hero Theme. Ron will have Cyber Dragons. Hermione will have Spellcasters.

 

Chapter 2: introductions, Part 2:

 

Harry James Potter: Harry Potter is the Boy Who Lived, the only person alive to survive the Killing Curse. He took up dueling as a pastime before his first year of Hogwarts was set to begin. His very first card was Gilford the Lightning, but he set his sights on the Elemental Hero Deck Theme.

 

Harry Potter's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Elemental Hero Avian

Elemental Hero burstinatrix

Elemental Hero Clayman

Elemental Hero Sparkman

 

Effect Monsters:

Dark Catapulter

Elemental Hero Bladedge

Elemental Hero Bubbleman

Elemental Hero Clay Guardian

Elemental Hero Necroshade

Elemental Hero Neo Bubbleman

Elemental Hero Wildheart

Elemental Hero Ocean

Elemental Hero Stratos

Elemental Hero Woodsman

Hero Kid x3

Winged Kuriboh

Winged Kuriboh LV10

Wroughtweiler

 

Fusion Monsters:

Elemental Hero Electrum

Elemental Hero Flame Wingman

Elemental Hero Mariner

Elemental Hero Mudballman

Elemental Hero Necroid Shaman

Elemental Hero Rampart Blaster

Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman

Elemental Hero Steam Healer

Elemental Hero Tempest

Elemental Hero Thunder Giant

Elemental Hero Wildedge

Elemental Hero Wild Wingman

Elemental Hero Terra Firma

Elemental Hero Absolute Zero

 

Spell Cards:

Bubble Blaster

Bubble Illusion

Bubble Shuffle

Burial from a Different Dimension

Burst Impact

Burst Return

Clay Wrap

Courageous Charge!

Cyclone Boomerang

Dark Factory of Mass Production

De-Fusion

Double Spell

E - Emergency Call

Emergency Provisions

Fairy of the Spring

Feather Shot

Fusion Gate

Fusion Recovery

Fusion Sage

H - Heated Heart

HERO Flash!!

Hero Heart

Kishido Spirit

Light Laser

Metamorphosis

Miracle Fusion

Mirage of Nightmare

Monster Reborn

Monster Reincarnation

Mud Max

O - Oversoul

Polymerization x2

Pot of Greed

R - Righteous Justice

Silent Doom

Skyscraper

Spark Blaster

Special Hurricane

Spy Hero

Terraforming

The Flute of Summoning Kuriboh

The Warrior Returning Alive

Transcendent Wings

Warrior's Bond

Wild Half

 

Trap Cards:

A Hero Emerges

Clay Charge

Cross Heart

Draining Shield x3

Edge Hammer

Elemental Burst

Enchanted Javelin x3

Feather Wind

Fuh-Rin-Ka-Zan

Hero Barrier

Hero Ring

Hero Signal

Hero Spirit

Hero's Rule 1: Five Freedoms

Hero's Rule 2

Insurance

Invincible Hero

Miracle Kids

Mirror Force

Mirror Gate

Mispolymerization

Negate Attack

Solemn Judgment

Soul Union

Staunch Defender

Super Junior Confrontation

 

Ronald Bilius Weasley: Ron Weasley is the friend of Harry Potter, and a fellow Duelist. He's the sixth of seven kids belonging to Arthur and Molly Weasley His deck is based off the Cyber Dragon Theme.

 

Ron Weasley's Deck:

 

Effect monsters:

Cyber Dragon x3

Barrier Dragon

Laser Dragon

Cyber Pheonix

Heavy Mech Support Platform

Proto-Cyber Dragon x3

The light - Hex Sealed Fusion

Shining Angel x3

 

Fusion Monsters:

Chimeratech Overdragon

Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

Cyber End Dragon x2

Cyber Twin Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

Double Summon

Gold Sarcophagus x2

Future Fusion

Heavy Storm

Giant Trunade

Limiter Removal

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Overload Fusion

Photon Generator Unit

Power Bond

Swords of Revealing Light

 

Trap Cards:

Magic Cylinder

Torrential Tribute

Sakuretsu Armor

Attack Reflector Unit

Ultimate Offering

Mirror Force

Draining Shield x3

Enchanted Javelin x3

DNA Surgery

Pole Position

 

Hermione Jean Granger: Hermione Granger is another of Harry's Friends and fellow duelist. She uses an Exodia theme, packing all three incarnations Using a loop hole in the forbidden and limited lists, she's packing three of two incarnations.

 

Hermione's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Aqua Madoor

Neo Aqua Madoor

Neo the Magic Swordsman

Mystical Elf

Gemini Elf

Lady of Faith

Left Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

 

Effect Monsters:

Old Vindictive Magician

Exodia the Forbidden One

Exodia Necross x3

Exodius the Ultimate Forbidden lord x3

Witch of the Black Forest

Sangan

Marshmallon

Destiny Hero - Defender

The Bistro Butcher

Chainsaw Insect

Morphing Jar

A cat of Ill Omen

Thunder Dragon x3

Jinzo

 

Spell Cards:

Contract with Exodia x3

Black Pendant

Premature Burial

Pot of Greed

Swords of revealing Light

Level Limit - Area B

Cup of Ace

Second Coin Toss

Infinite Cards

Graceful Charity

Amplifier

Monster Reincarnation

Dark factory of Mass Production

Pot of Avarice

Gold Sarcophagus x2

Monster Reborn

 

Trap cards:

Call of the Haunted

Shadow Spell

Enchanted Javelin x3

Draining Shield x3

Energy Drain

Magic Drain

Jar of Greed

Wall of Revealing light

Waboku

Appropriate

Gravity Bind

Solemn Wishes

Back-up Soldier

 

Other characters of Harry Potter

 

Ginevra "Ginny" Molly Weasley: Ginny is the last born and only girl of the Weasley kids. She bases her deck off of Mai Valentine's Harpies. Her favorite card is the elusive Harpie Queen.

 

Neville Longbottom: Neville is the son of Auror Frank Longbottom and his wife Alice Longbottom ne Prewitt. He doesn't duel.

 

Albus Dumbledore: Headmaster of Hogwarts School, he has great wisdom. His deck is made entirely of custom cards based on instant resurrection.

 

Draco Malfoy: Heir to the Malfoy family, he has been given the task of bringing Harry Potter's soul to Lord Voldemort. His deck is based on bringing out the most powerful of the Sacred Beasts: Armitael.

 

Severus Snape: Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor and Spy for Dumbledore, his deck is based on alchemy

 

Lord Voldemort: The instigator in the whole deal, He wants nothing more than to see Harry potter, either soulless, or dead. His deck is the ultimate Orichalcos Deck.

 

That's it.

 

A/N: That's it for introductions. Next Chapter we'll be in Domino City, and the one after will be Surrey and London. Now, I know that Ron's deck is exactly like Zane's deck. I planned it that way. That means that there will be many cards that premiered in GX appearing in this story. Anyway, R&R please.

 

 

[spoiler=Pole Position]Pole Position is a real card and the effect is as follows:

 

The face-up monster(s) with the highest ATK on the field is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When "Pole Position" is removed from the field, destroy the face-up monster(s) with the highest ATK on the field. I figured it would be best in Ron's deck.

 

 

I'm thinking of the Golden Trio having a second deck each, what do you guys think?

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[spoiler=Chapter 1]A/N:This is Chapter 3. This will be the first Orichalcos duel.

 

Chapter 3:

 

Yugi, Jonouchi, and Kaiba were standing in a triangle with Honda, Anzu, Ryou, and Mokuba watching. They were getting ready to duel by the looks of it.

 

"Yugi, I will defeat you and earn my title of best in Japan back. To make things a little harder, I propose a three-way free-for-all, winner gets the title of best in Japan--"

 

"I have a better idea, you three against me! Winner(s) get to keep their soul, losers fall prey to this!" The Mysterious man held up a card, and in the picture was a wiers sort of pentagram.

 

"The Seal of orichalcos!"

 

"Fine! To make it fair, you get three times as many life points as us."

 

"Fine! Now Let's Duel!"

 

(Yugi: 8000 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Mystery Duelist: 24000 LP)

 

"I'll go first." The Mystery Duelist said. "I'll Summon Obnoxious Celtic Guard in Attack mode." A warrior that looked like Celtic Guardian emerged, but it looked more determined, as though nothing would keep this monster down. (1400/1200) "Then I'll play a card face down and call it a turn." A face-down card appeared behind the guardian. It looked at it and shrugged.

 

"It's my turn now. I'll Summon Gazelle the King of Mythical Beasts in Attack Mode." A four-legged beast with a single horn on it's head appeared, and it growled at Obnoxious Celtic Guard. (1500/1200) Yugi was wondering why this was going on, but shrugged it off for later. "I'll set two cards, and end my turn." Two face down cards emerged, and Gazelle settled down into a ready stance.

 

'It's my turn, you freak." Kaiba drew a card and looked at it, before smirking. "I'll Summon my X-Head Cannon in Attack Mode." A machine with a two barrel turret appeared on the field, it's head first aiming at Gazelle, then Obnoxious Celtic Guard. (1800/1500) "I'll play a card face down, and end my turn." A card appeared behind X-Head Cannon. it seemed to know of the face down card, so it didn't move.

 

"Now It's my turn." Jonouchi drew a card, before smiling. "I summon Gearfried the Iron Knight in Attack Mode." A warrior covered completely in metal appeared, his right arm was a spear, on the back of his left fore-arm was a shield. (1800/1600) "I play a face down as well, and end my turn."

 

"Good. Now it's my turn." he drew a card, and smiled evilly. "I play a field card. The Seal of Orichalcos!" The card was accepted, and the seal was drawn on the ground, a barrier pushing the rest of the group back. A smaller seal was also drawn on the duelist's head, the light illuminating his head as he drew his hood down. He had platinum blond hair, and a british accent. His eyes were a cold gray, and he looked the spitting image of Draco Malfoy. It was Lucius Malfoy. (What? Even Death Eaters had to get into the game, since the entire Ministry accepted it as a fun way to pass the time. Lucius is a guinea pig for a new card created by Voldemort. The card won't kill the loser. it'll just take the soul if it works.) "Now, all my monsters are turned DARK, and gain 500 more Attack Points, meaning that my Obnoxious Celtic Guard's Attack goes up to 1900, so his special effect will be active all the time. Now, Obnoxious Celtic Guard, attack Gazelle with Celtic Slash!" The warrior dashed at Gazelle, who drew back in fear, until Atem smiled. He pushed a button on his disk, and one of his face down cards shot up. "I activate my trap: Magic Cylinder. This card negates your attack and deals effect damage equal to your monsters ATK to your Life Points."

 

Lucius smiled as well, and activated his trap. "I activate this: Barrel Behind the Door. This card negates my attack, and sends the damage I would have received from Magic Cylinder back to you." The energy surge vanished and the gun cocked, before shooting one bullet at Atem, who grunted in pain, his life points taking a hit. "I end my turn on that note."

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius Malfoy: 24000 LP.)

 

Yugi drew to start his turn. "I play a face-down card, and summon my Obnioxious Celtic Guard. I end my turn."

 

Kaibe drew at the start of his turn. "I play Polymerization, and fuse my three Blue Eyes White Dragons in my hand together." He discarded the three dragons, which appeared. They each looked the same, a glistening white body with blue eyes, sharp claws and equally sharp teeth. They vanished into the swirling vortex behind them, a three-headed version coming out. "This creates my Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon." This dragon looked like a three-headed version of Blus Eyes White Dragon, but it also had something that looked like the majin symbol from Dragonball Z. (4500/3800) "Unfortunately for you, we can attack the turn we summon Fusions. Bkue Eyes Ultimate dragon, attack Obnoxious Celtic Guard with Ultimate Burst!"

 

The dragon released a burst of energy from all three mouths, wich twisted together and struck the warrior, but instead of destroying it, a smaller blast shot around the warrior and struck Lucius, dealing 2900 points of damage to his LP.

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 21100 LP)

 

"What happened? His Blue eyes was obviously stronger. It should have been destroyed." Jonouchi complained.

 

"His effect! Obnoxious Celtic Guard can't be destroyed by any monster who has an attack score equal to or greater than 1900!" Yugi stated.

 

"Correct. And since Obnoxious Celtic Guard gained a 500 point boost to his attack score, he can't be destroyed at all." Lucius said.

 

"By Battle. He's still affected like most other monsters by spells, traps and monster effects." The Pharaoh said.

 

Lucius shrugged. "true, though the chance of you drawing a monster like that is pretty low."

 

Joey drew to start his turn. He smiled. "I Summon Time Wizard!" Lucius was shocked. "How'd you get a card that rare?" A clock with arms and legs holding a staff appeared. "And I activate his effect. See, he has a potent ability, but to determine who gets it, I have to flip a coin and call it. If I call it correctly, all your monsters are destroyed. If i call it wrong, all our monsters are destroyed. So, I flip a coin and Call heads!" It came up heads. "Alright! That means all your monsters are destroyed."

 

As Lucius stared in shock, his Obnoxious Celtic Guard was destroyed.

 

'Now I'll Play Polymerization, and fuse Time Wizard with Baby Dragon to create, Thousand dragon." a young dragon with yellow scales and a pale underbelly appeared before a vortex appeared and sucked up the clock and dragon. It spat out an old dragon, with orange sclaes, pale underbelly and mustache. "Now, Thousand Dragon, Direct Attack!" It inhaled, and blew out some smoke, that choked Lucius and dealt 2400 points of damage to his LP.

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 18700 LP)

 

Lucius growled, and drew his card. "I Summon Orichalcos Gigas, in Attack mode." An ogre-like beast emerged to the field. (400/1500) "Let's see you take this guy down! I end my turn."

 

Yugi drew. he smiled. "I activate Polymerization, and I fuse Berfomet and Gazelle together, to create Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast." A four armed beast appeared as well as a swirling vortex, which swallowed the two monsters, created a two headed, three horned four legged beast with wings. (2100/1800) "Attack Gigas with Flying pounce!" The beast soared at Giygas and pounced on it, destroying it, and dealing 1600 points of damage to Lucius. "I end my turn."

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 17100 LP)

 

Joey drew a card and Gigas returned to the field. (400-900/1500) "What?"

 

"Hmph, so Gigas returns to the field even stronger than he last left it."

 

"Hm, Thousand Dragon, destroy his Gigas again. Thousand Breath!" Thousand Dragon's noxious fumes were blown on Gigas, destroying it and dealing 1500 points of damage to Gigas.

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 15600 LP)

 

Kaiba drew and Gigas returned again. (900-1400/1500) Kaibe smiled. "Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon, destroy his Gigas yet again. Ultimate Burst!" BEUD blasted Gigas to oblivion, and dealt 3100 points of damage to Lucius.

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 12500 LP)

 

Lucius drew and Gigas returned yet again. (1400-1900/1500) "I place a card face down and end my turn."

 

Yugi drew a card. "I play De-Fusion! This separates Chimera into the two monsters that make him up, so return to the field, Gazelle and Berfomet! Now I play Black luster Ritual! I sacrifice Gazelle and Berfomet to Summon Black Luster Soldier.I end my turn there.

 

Joey drew, and his eyes lit up. "I summon Fusion Wizard! Now I choose to activate his effect. I have to flip a coin and call it. If I call it correctly, I can sacrifice Fusion Warrior and 1 or more Fusion Material monsters written on a Fusion Monster Card, and Fusion Summon the Fusion Monster to my side of the field. If i call it wrong, you gain control of Fusion Wizard, and can use his effect on your next main phase. So, I call Tails!" He flipped the coin. It landed on Tails. "I called it correctly, so I sacrifice Fusion Wizard and fuse Yugi's Black Luster Soldier, and Kaiba's Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon, to create on Kaiba's field, Dragon Master Knight!"

 

A monster appeared that had Black Luster Soldier riding atop Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon. (5000-5500/5000)

 

"Dragon Master Knight gains 500 extra Attack for every Dragon on the field besides himself." Kaiba proudly declared.

 

"I end my turn." Jonouchi said.

 

Kaiba drew a card, and smiled. I Summon Spear Dragon!" A Pterasaur with a long spear-like bill appeared. (1900/0) Dragon Master Knight's attack score went up again. (5500-6000/5000) "Now, Dragon master Knight, Attack Gigas with Dragon Saber Blast!" The Dragon master shot out the twisting beam of Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon and combined it with a beam from BLS' sword, making a rainbow beam that slammed into Gigas. It was destroyed and Lucius took 4100 points of damage. "Spear Dragon, Direct Attack!" Spear Dragon swooped in and impaled Lucius, dealing another 1900 points of damage. After the attack, it went into a defensive stance.

 

(Yugi: 6600 LP, Kaiba: 8000 LP, Jonouchi: 8000 LP, Lucius: 6500 LP)

 

Lucius grunted as he drew, and his Gigas returned, even stronger. (1900-2400/1500). "Gigas, attack Spear Dragon." Gigas moved to attack the defensive Spear Dragon, his punch destroying it., and sending Dragon Master Knight down a few attack points. (6000-5500/5000).

 

Yugi drew and smiled. "I activate Dark magic Curtain, and pay half my Life Points to Special Summon Dark Magician!" A Spellcaster dressed in mostly purple, with an odd hat, and purple armor-like robes appeared from the curtain. (Yugi: 6600-3300LP) Yugi was starting to pant, as his Life Points were drained. My leige, don't spend any more energy right now. As it is, your energy is almost 1/4 full, and that's not good. Yugi simply nodded his head as he got back into the game. "The cost is that I can't Normal Summon, Flip Summon or Special Summon this turn aside from the Summoning of Dark Magician. Next I activate Card of dactity, letting each of us draw until we have six cards in our hands." The four of them drew until they had six cards in their hands. "Now, I'll activate magic Formula. This gives my Dark Magician an extra 700 Attack points. Now, attack Gigas. Black Magic Blast!" Dark magician let forth a beam of Black Magic, which struck Gigas, turning it into pixels and dealing 800 points of damage to Lucius. "I end my turn."

 

(Yugi: 3300, Kaiba: 8000, Jonouchi: 8000, Lucius: 5700)

 

Joey drew, frowned as Gigas came back even stronger. (2900/1500) "I switch Thousand Dragon to Defense Mode and end my turn."

 

Kaiba drew, and smiled. I activate Monster Reborn, and bring back Spear Dragon in attack mode." Dragon master Knight gained attack strength. (5500-6000/5000) "Next I play a card face down, and will have Dragon master Knight attack Gigas. Dragon Saber Blast!" The Rainbow blast struck Gigas and destroyed it, dealing 3100 points of damage. (Lucius: 5700-2600) Spear Dragon, Direct Attack! Spear dragon impaled Lucius again, dealing 1900 points of damage. (Lucius: 2600-700). I end my turn." Spear Dragon shifted into Defense mode.

 

Lucius drew, panting as Gigas returned, even stronger. (2900-3400/1500) Gigas, attack Dark Magician!" Gigas raged toward Dark Magician, but Kaiba pressed a button. I activate Ring of destruction! I select Orichalcos Gigas." Gigas' gained a collat that had grenades lining it. "Now it'll be destroyed, and all of us'll take damage equal to Orichalcos Gigas' original Attack strength, and if that card works the way I think it does, we'll all take 3400 points of damage." The bomb collar exploded, taking Gigas with it, and dealing 3400 points of damage to everyone.

 

(Yugi: 0, kaiba: 4600, Jonouchi: 4600, Lucius: 0)

 

Since there were two losers, it spat out jonouchi and Kaiba, and Yugi and Lucius were surrounded by a double seal, which shattered, taking no soul. Lucius apparated away, and Atem walked to the group. he switched with Yugi, a smile on his face, before fainting.

 

Meanwhile, in an undisclosed location:

 

"YOU FAILED TO GET ANY SOUL?!? CRUCIO!! You're lucky I still need your service or I'd kill you. You are to give your son your dueling deck, and have him challenge Harry Potter during the School year. You better hope that he succeeds, or your soul will be lost next. Am I clear?"

 

"crystal, my leige."

 

"Good, now get out of here!"

 

To be continued...

 

A/N: And that's Chapter 3. The first Orichalcos Duel. I know it's not very good. I couldn't get Atem's duelist skill in it. What did you think?

 

 

[spoiler=card info]Obnoxious Celtic Guard: EARTH

Warrior/effect: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle when it does battle with a monster with an ATK of 1900 or more. (Damage calculation still applies.)

ATK/DEF:1400/1200

 

Gearfried the Iron Knight: EARTH

Warrior/Effect: When an Equip card is equipped to this card, destroy the equip card.

ATK/DEF: 1800/1600

 

Time Wizard: LIGHT

Spellcaster/Effect: Toss a coin and call Heads or Tails. If you call it right, your opponent's monsters on the field are destroyed. If you call it wrong, your own monsters on the field are destroyed and you lose Life Points equal to half the total ATK of the destroyed monsters. This card can be used only during your turn, once per turn.

ATK/DEF: 500/400

 

Spear Dragon: WIND

Dragon/Effect: When this card attacks a monster in defense position, if it's DEF are lower than this card's ATK, the difference is dealt to your opponent as damage. This card is switched to Defense position after it attacks.

 

Ring of Destruction: Trap

Effect: Destroy one monster on the field, and inflict damage equal to its ATK to both players. (Treated as all players in this story.) (Banned in the real game in the Advanced format.)

 

Barrel Behind the Door: Trap

Effect: When an effect that inflicts damage to Life Points is activated (except Battle Damage), switch the damage you receive to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Fusion Wizard: LIGHT

Spellcaster/Effect: Flip a coin and call it.`If you call it correctly, Send 2 monsters to the graveyard. Special Summon 1 Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. If in a tag duel, you can use your Partner's Extra Deck. If you call it wrong, you opponent sends two monsters on their side of the field and Special Summons 1 Fusion Monster from their Extra Deck.

 

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I forgot to mention, but all cards are their Japanese designs, so if a card had a nude image in the Japanese version, it will be recreated here.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2]A/N: Sorry for being away. I had writer's block. Now for Chapter four. As promised this one will take place in England, but it will be during Harry's trip to Diagon. This will be the first chapter that features my own cards. Anyone who wants to use them may do so, as long as they give me credit. Enjoy!

 

Chapter 4: Harry's soul duel

 

Harry, hermione and the Weasleys were visiting Weasley's Wizarding Wheezes after buying their things. They were fascinated by the stuff inside, until a cloaked fellow grabbed Ginny, using a contaminated cloth to knock her out, and ran out, with Harry, Hermione, and the Weasleys in hot pursuit. They chased him to the edge of Knockturn Alley, and saw that he was waiting with a set of what looked like arm and leg braces and a collar.

 

The cloaked person spoke up. "If you want the little miss back, you'll need to defeat me in a game of Duel Monsters! Loser loses their soul"

 

"Hermione scoffed. "Only the dementors can steal souls, and you aren't one, obviously."

 

He laughed. "Are you sure about that? Why don't you duel me and find out?"

 

Harry looked at the cold eyes of the cloaked figure, and frowned. he pulled his wand.

 

The cloaked figure laughed. "You really want to try using magic on me? I placed a special vial of Basilisk venom on the little girl. If you so much as fire a tickling charm at me, I'll simply have the vial which is designed to inject the venom into her body when the simplest spell is cast. You'll lose her a minute after that happens.

 

Harry frowned and stowed his wand and pulled out his Duel Disk, slipping it on and putting his E-Hero deck in the Deck Slot. He moved into the make-shift arena as a crowd gathered. He noticed the design on the places they were standing but paid it no heed.

 

(Harry's LP: 8000; ?'s LP: 8000)

 

Harry smiled. "You can go first." In this duel, I want the first attack, and with this hand, I'll do major damage.

 

The man shrugged. "Fine. I draw." he did that. "I play Polymerization, I fuse these five warriors: Queen's Knight, King's Knight Jack's Knight, Ace Knight, and Knight of Tens together."

 

They appeared on the field. They looked the same except there were two females, but they had the same style armor, all with card emblems on them and the shield. They were then sucked into a vortex behind them, and a figure was formed.

 

"This let's me Fusion Summon: Royal Flush King!"

 

The figure looked like anything you'd expect of a king, also with a card theme. He was wearing a tunic with a robe that had the images of the five card images that made a royal flush. (ATK/DEF: ?/?)

 

"His ATK and DEF is equal to the Combined ATK and DEF of the fused Warriors." (?/?-9400/7900) "he has a potent effect. For five turns, his ATK and DEF are halved." (9400/7900-4700/3950) "because my hand is empty I end my turn."

 

Harry smiled. " draw." he did. It was Gaceful Charty. "I play Graceful Charity. This card let's me Draw three cards, as long as I discard two." He did, and smirked. "I pay 500 LP to play Double Fusion! This let's me perform two fusions in one turn. So first I'll fuse Avion and Burstinatrix to form Flame Wingman!" The fusion occured. "Next I fuse Sparkman and Wingman to create Shining Flare Wingman!" The second fusion occured. This one was mostly white with a yellow face. (2500/2100) "His effect gives him 300 extra ATK for every Elemental Hero in my Graveyard. And there are six!" (2500/2100-4100/2100) "I also play the Field Spell: Skyscraper! This gives my Elemental Heroes 1000 extra ATK when they attack a monster stronger then themselves."

 

The mystery man cringed.

 

"Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman, attack Royal Flush King! Supernova Blast!" The white machine-like hero flew into the air, and unleashed a green energy blast at Royal Flush King, blowing him up, and dealing 400 points of damage to the Mystery man and blowing down his hood, revealing him to be Bellatrix's husband, who sneered, as his outfit sparked, sending four hundred volts of lightning through his system. "That wasn't much."

 

"You forgot about Shining Flare Wingman's Other effect. When he destorys a monster on your side of the field, you take damage equal to that monster's ATK."

 

Shining Flare Wingman's body lit up, and the rays inflicted 4700 points of damage to LeStrange's LP. At that time, his sneer fell, and he felt pain worse than the Cruciatus Curse, as 4700 more volts of lightning coursed through him from the devices. He fell to one knee after, panting, but got back up.

 

"It's my turn." he drew, and smiled.

 

"It's time I turned this around. I play the Seal of Orichalcos." The circle appeared, and surrounded the two as the sacred hexagram appeared, and a barrier was thrown up to keep the two duelists in and the others out. "Now, you will lose your soul if you lose! I play Card of Sanctity!"

 

He and harry drew until their hands held six cards. "Now I play Spirit of the Royal Flush! This can only be played when Royal Flush King is in the graveyard. I Summon from my Deck, Royal Flush Lord!" The King reappeared, but looked more like Voldemort. He was nothing like a Lord. (5000/5000) "This guy may have 5000 ATK and DEF, but your Warrior will top that, so I play De-Fusion on your Flare Wingman." Shining Flare Wingman separated into Flame Wingman and Sparkman." (2100/1200) (1600/1400) "Now, Royal Flush Lord, destroy Flame Wingman. Royal Slash!"

 

Royal Flush Lord drew his sword, and charged at Flame Wingman, slicing him in half, which resulted in an explosion, and Harry losing 2900 Life Points, and having 2900 volts of lightning being pumped through him.

 

(Harry's LP: 4600; LeStrange's LP: 2900)

 

"I end my turn."

 

Harry drew. And smiled. "I play A Warrior Returning Alive and Monster Reborn. I add Avion to the field and Special Summon Burstinatrix!" The two warriors appeared. One was an anthro bird with chest armor. (1000/1000). The other was a gray skinned lady with an outfit which the chest part covered the left breast but curved around the right breast. (1200/800) Next I play, Warrior's Bond!" The card appeared, whose image was of two warriors gripping each others wrists with the Polymerization background. "This is the Warrior version of Power Bond, letting me send Monsters to the Graveyard who are part of a Warrior Fusion Monster, and Summon that monster. So I send Avion and Burstinatrix from the field, and Blayman and Bubbleman from my hand, to Special Summon, Elemental hero Electrum." It was a mamn in a yellow and white bodysuit. (2900/2600) First, Warrior's Bond double's the Fusion monster's ATK." 2900/2600-5800/2600) "Next, Electrum will attack Royal Flush Lord! Spectrum Punch!" Electrum dashed forward, and punched through Royal Flush lord, destroying him, and dealing 800 points of damage to LeStrange, and sending another 800 volts of Lightning through his already tired body, causing him to scream again. "Now, Sparkman, attack! Spark Storm!" Sparkman sent a lughtning bolt through LeStrange's body, taking another 1600 LP from LeStrange, and sending another 1600 volts through the villain's body, making him scream. "I have to end my turn. Warrior's bond shown, and Harry's devices sparked, he screamed as he lost 2900 LP and was filled with 2900 more volts.

 

(Harry's LP: 1700; LeStrange's LP: 500)

 

Both harry and LeStrange were panting, though the latter coughed up a bit of blood. LeStrange drew, and looked at the card. "I can do nothing! I end my turn."

 

Harry drew. "I play de-Fusion, separating my Electrum into the four warriors that made it up." Electrum looked like he was hit with a cross-shaped attack, before he vanished and was replaced with four warriors. The anthro, Avion. (1000/1000) The Woman with one breast exposed, Burstinatrix. (1200/800) The man made entirely of clay, Clayman. (800/2000) And the warrior with a fascination with bubbles, Bubbleman. (800/1200) "Since you'll lose no matter who I attack with, I'll be a sport and let you choose the attacker. Their attacks are Feather Storm, Flare Storm, Clay Rush, Bubble Stream, and Spark Storm."

 

LeStrange looked nervously at the monsters, and then spoke. "Avion, Feather Storm." Avion looked at Harry, and he nodded. Avion smiled at harry's sportmanship, and flew into the air, unleashing a strom of feathers on LeStrange, who yelled as 1000 more volts coursed through his system. Since Harry won, the seal slowly closed around LeStrange, who took it like a man, and as his soul was stolen, he crumpled. The seal then vanished, and harry collapsed from overexposure to lightning. Since he had taken in over 5000 volts, it was a surprise he could still stand. Ginny was freed, and harry was carted off to St. Mungos.

 

To be Continued.

 

A/N: This was Chapter 4, and I hope I didn't disappoint. Yes, the devices were from when Zane dueled Syrus in Duel Acadamy after he went dark. And I'm using the Japanese cards. Please R&R I suck at Chapter naming.

 

 

[spoiler=card list]Elemental Hero Bubbleman: WATER

Warrior/effect: If this is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 2 cards if there are no other cards on your side of the field and in your hand.

ATK/DEF: 800/1200

 

Ace Knight: LIGHT

Warrior/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when Queen's Knight, King's Knight, and Jack's Knight are face-up on your side of the field the field.

ATK/DEF: 2000/1900

 

Knight of Tens: LIGHT

Warrior/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when Queen's Knight, King's Knight, Jack's Knight and Ace Knight are face up on the field. Increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters with "Knight" in their name by 200 points.

ATK/DEF: 2400/2000

 

Royal Flush King: LIGHT

Warrior/Fusion/Effect: Any 5 Warrior-Type Monsters

 

This card can only be Fusion Summoned by a fusion of the above monsters. The Original ATK of this card is the original ATK of the Monsters used to Fusion Summon this card. For five turns after it was Summoned, the Original ATK of this card is halved. Summon 3 "Royal Flush Tokens" with an ATK equal to half this card's current ATK when this card is Summoned. Every time a monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, Summon 1 "Royal Flush Token" with half this card's Current ATK.

ATK/DEF: ?/?

 

Royal Flush Lord: LIGHT

Warrior/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of Spirit of the Royal Flush. During each player's turn, Special Summon one monster with Knight in their name from your hand or deck to the field. This monster gains 500 ATK for every monster with Knight in its name on the field.

ATK/DEF: 3800/3000

 

Spirit of the Royal Flush: Spell

Effect: This can only be activated while Royal Flush King is in the graveyard. Special Summon 1 Royal Flush Lord from your Hand or Deck, then send all monsters with Knight in their name back to each player's deck, and shuffle your decks.

 

Warrior's Bond: Spell

Effect: Send from your side of the field or your hand, Monsters on a Warrior-Type Fusion Monster card, and Special Summon that monster to your side of the field and double the Original ATK of the Summoned Monster. During the End phase of the turn this card is played, you lose Life Points equal to the original ATK of the Summoned Monster.

 

Elemental Hero Flame Wingman: WIND

Warrior/Fusion/Effect: "Elemental Hero Avian" + "Elemental Hero Burstinatrix"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

ATK/DEF: 2100/1200

 

Elemental Hero Shining Flare Wingman: LIGHT

Warrior/Fusion/Effect: "Elemental Hero Flame Wingman" + "Elemental Hero Sparkman"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Elemental Hero" card in your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

ATK/DEF: 2500/2100

 

Elemental Hero Electrum: LIGHT

Warrior/Fusion/Effect: "Elemental Hero Avian" + "Elemental Hero Burstinatrix" + "Elemental Hero Clayman" + "Elemental Hero Bubbleman"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE, and EARTH. When this card is Fusion Summoned, return all removed from play cards to the owners' Deck(s), then shuffle the Deck(s). Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each monster on your opponent's side of the field that shares an Attribute with this card.

ATK/DEF: 2900/2600

 

[ExKirby]

Nice so far. I'd use my 5D game deck, but I can't use 5D cards...

[.:Incognito:.]

why do u say chapter 3 and not post the chapter but post the decklist?

[barryc100588]

I did post the chapter. btw, here's the updated decklist for the Domino Trio.

 

[spoiler=Domino Trio decks and intros]A/N: This is a Harry Potter/Yu-Gi-Oh Crossover. This chapter will just be an introduction. In the Yu-Gi-Oh timeline, this takes place during the Waking the Dragons arc. In Harry Potter, it takes place before, during, and after Harry's sixth year of Hogwarts. This chapter will just contain the different decks for or planned for each character.

 

Chapter 1: Introductions Part 1

 

Yugi Muto: Yugi is a kind boy who possesses the Millennium Puzzle. He's an expert dueler.

 

Yami Yugi: Yami Yugi, otherwise known only as Yami is the spirit that haunts the Millennium Puzzle. He's also known as the King of Games or Pharaoh. He helps get Yugi out of the jams he gets into.

 

Yugi's Deck:

 

Effect monsters:

Dark magician Girl

Kuriboh

Berfomet

Valkyrion the Magna Warrior

Beast of Gilfer

Catapult Turtle

Watapon

Big Shield Gardna

Breaker the Magical Warrior

Buster Blader

Electromagnetic Turtle

King's Knight

Obnoxious Celtic Guard

Sangan

 

 

Normal Monsters:

Gazelle the King of Mythical Beasts

Dark Magician

Alpha the Magnet Warrior

Beta the magnet Warrior

Gaia the Fierce Knight

Gamma the Magnet Warrior

Giant Soldier of Stone

Curse of Dragon

Jack's Knight

Queen's Knight

Summoned Skull

 

Ritual Monsters:

Black Luster Soldier

 

Fusion Monsters:

Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast (Fusion of Gazelle and Berfomet)

Dragon Master Knight (Fusion of Black Luster Soldier and Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon)

Dark Paladin (Fusion of Dark Magician and Buster Blader.)

 

Spell Cards:

Amazoness Spellcaster

Black Luster Ritual

Card Destruction

Card of Sanctity

Dark Magic Curtain

De-Fusion

Diffusion Wave Motion

Fissure

Fusion Sage x3

Graceful Charity

Hand Control

Magic Formula

Magical Acadamy

Magical Hats

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Polymerization x3

Pot of Greed

Swords of Revealing Light

The Shallow Grave

Multiply

Dark magic Attack

 

Trap Cards:

Collected Power

Dust Tornado

Meteorain

Mirror Force

Rope of Life

Soul Rope

Zero Gravity

Magician's Circle

Magic Cylinder

 

Jonouchi "Joey" Katsuya: Jonouchi is a friend of Yugi and is always by Yugi's side, even during the toughest of times. His deck features mainly warriors and has a Luck theme to it as well.

 

Jonouchi's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Battle Steer

Cyber-Tech Alligator

Garoozis

Red Eyes B. Dragon

Rude Kaiser

Alligator's Sword

Armored Lizard

Axe Raider

Battle Warrior

Baby Dragon

Rock Ogre Grotto #1

Skull Stalker

Swordsman of Landstar

The Furious Sea King

Tiger Axe

Claw Reacher

Glass Man

Hero of the East

Kagemusha of the Blue Flame

Kageningen

Knight of Landstar

Kojikocy

Leogun

Masaki the Legendary Swordsman

M-Warrior #1

M-Warrior #2

 

Effect Monsters:

Gearfried the Swordsmaster

Gilford the Lightning

Jinzo

Maximum Six

Swamp Battleguard

Sword Hunter

The Fiend Megacyber

The legendary Fisherman

Blue Flame Swordsman

Red Eyes B. Chick

Red Eyes B. Dragon

Red Eyes Darkness Dragon

Red Eyes Black Metal Dragon

Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon

Brigadier of Landstar

Gearfried the Iron Knight

Grappler of Landstar

Hayabusa Knight

Little-Winguard

Mad Sword Beast

Marauding Captain

Meko Mane King

Panther Warrior

Parasite Paracide

Rocket Warrior

Sasuke Samurai

Time Wizard

 

Ritual Monsters:

Fortress Whale

 

Fusion Monsters:

Alligator's Sword Dragon (Alligator's Sword + Baby Dragon)

Giltia the Dark Knight

B. Skull Dragon (Red Eyes B. Dragon + Summoned Skull; Can only use when Tag-teaming with Yugi

Dark Flare Knight (Dark Magician + Flame Swordsman; can only use when tag-teaming with Yugi)

Flame Swordsman (Flame Manipulator + Masaki the Legendary Swordsman)

Thousand Dragon (Baby Dragon + Time Wizard)

 

Spell Cards:

Arduous Risk

Attrition

Block Attack

Burning Soul Sword

Dangerous Machine Type-6

Dark Dragon Ritual

Dragon Nails

Energy Drain

Foolish Burial

Fusion Sage x3

Giant Trunade

Graceful Dice

Gust Fan

Harpie's Feather Duster

Hinotama

Hyper Refresh

Knight's Title (Can only use when Tag-teaming with Yugi)

Landstar Forces

Landstar Shot

Legendary Sword

Lightning Blade

Meteor of Destruction

Monster Reborn

Polymerization x3

Pot of Greed

Premature Burial

Question

Raigeki

Release restraint

Roll of Fate

Roulette Spider

Salamandra

Scapegoat

Shield and Sword

Star Blaster

The Warrior Returning Alive

Inferno Fire Blast

Non-Spellcasting Area

 

Trap Cards:

Bottomless Trap Hole

Celebration of Creation

Chasm of Spikes

Compensation Mediation

Double Magical Arm Bind

Drop Off

Fairy Box

Gamble

Graverobber

Kunai With Chain

Magical Arm Shield

Metalmorph

Nutrient Z

Rare Metalmorph

Silver Dollar

Skull Dice

Take One Chance

Trap Hole

Vow of Tribe

 

Seto Kaiba: Seto Kaiba is Yugi's rival and has been since the day they first met. His deck is based around his three Blue Eyes White dragons, as well as his X, Y, Z combo. he recently added to it, making it the well sought after V-Z combo. He only ever lost to Yugi. and Pegasus.

 

Seto Kaiba's Deck:

 

Normal Monsters:

Blue Eyes White Dragon x3

Gadget Soldier

Judge Man

Vorse Raider

X-Head Cannon

V-Tiger Jet

 

Effect Monsters:

Blade Knight

Different Dimension Dragon

Kaiser Glider

Kaiser Sea Horse

Pitch-Dark Dragon

Spear Dragon

Versago the Destroyer

Y-Dragon Head

Z-Metal Tank

W-Wing Catapult

 

Fusion Monsters:

Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon (Blue Eyes White Dragon + Blue Eyes White Dragon + Blue Eyes White Dragon)

Dragon Master Knight (Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon + Black Luster Soldier)

XYZ-Dragon Cannon (X-Head Cannon + Y-Dragon Head + Z-Metal Tank. Without Polymerization.)

VW-Tiger Catapult (V-Tiger Jet + W-Wing Catapult)

VWXYZ Dragon Catapult Cannon (VW-Tiger Catapult + XYZ-Dragon Cannon)

 

Ritual Monsters:

Paladin of White Dragon

 

Spell Cards:

A Wingbeat of Giant Dragon

Card of Demise

Charm of Lamentation

Cost Down

Fusion Sage x3

Monster Reborn

Polymerization x3

Pot of Greed

Reflect Energy

Shrink

Silent Doom

Soul Exchange

White Dragon Ritual

Burst Stream of Destruction

Non-Spellcasting Area

 

Trap Cards:

Attack Guidance Barrier

Cloning

Crush Card

Magical Trick Mirror

Negate Attack

Ring of Destruction

Tyrant Wing

Wish of Final Effort

 

Other characters you know from Yu-Gi-Oh:

 

Honda Taylor: One of Yugi's friends. he used to be a street thug, but Yugi sorted him out. He's fallen for Serenity Katsuya, Jonouchi's sister. His deck is based on machines.

 

Anzu Gardner: Another of Yugi's friends. She stood by Yugi since the beginning. Her deck is based on fairies.

 

Duke Devlin: The Creator and owner of Dungeon Dice monsters. He is Honda's rival concerning Serenity. His deck is modeled after his game Dungeon Dice Monsters.

 

That's it.

 

A/N: barryc100588, signing out.

 

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Pfeh. Typical fail. Your Decks and duelists suck, your grammar is terrible, your plot barely holds together, your description of events is nonexistent, and your characters are flat as paper. First of all:

 

"It's not like any of you have a monster who can destroy my monsters." ~Lucius, Chapter I

 

I'm going by real chapters, as Deck listings don't count. Everyone has a monster with a destructive effect — by making this statement, Lucius establishes himself as a royal n00b. Joey's subsequent usage of Time Wizard is vaguely supported by the anime, but did you really intend an Orichalcos wielder to be such a horrendous n00b? He'd be perfect for my n00b army — as a revenant.

 

Oh, and worse:

"Normal Monsters:"~Harry Potter's Decklist

 

A prodigy who only loses his youthful charm at sixteen is using worthless vanillas. I can vaguely get that; he doesn't Duel. But the best duelist in Japan also uses vanillas. What. The. Hell.

 

So, your duelists are all awful. We can dig that — it leaves room for good duelists to come along and pwn them. But horrible grammar is also a problem. Remember that quote from above?

 

"It's not like any of you have a monster who can destroy my monsters." ~Lucius, Chapter I

 

You forgot a quotation mark. It's glaringly obvious if you'd just go through and revise your work. One typo would have been acceptable, but then you come along with this line:

 

"I activate a trap. Magic Cylinder. This card takles your monster's attackl, and sends it back at you."~Lucius the n00b, Chapter I

 

If that were spoken, it would read, "This card tackles your monster's a-tackle and sends it back at you." Not great. You also screwed up the punctuation — "Magic Cylinder" is not a complete sentence; nor is "sends it back at you" an independent clause — and used some incredibly boring spacing. In one sentence.

 

The weakest part of this is the plot, though. When the Orichalcos imbecile offers Harry a duel, the real Harry would pull his wand and throw an introductory impedimenta, not whip out a Duel Disk — in case you forgot, Wizards have duels too. It's fully possible to establish an alternate universe in a few paragraphs, and it would have been even easier — not to mention downright hilarious — to have the Orichalcos slave try and explain the game to Harry. It would even excuse his bullcrap excuse for a Deck. But instead, you simply have a wizard instantly know that his opponent wants a duel of cards, and not a duel of sorcery. Why.

[Kendo Fish]

DECKS ARE NOT CHAPTERS.

 

All I see are deck lists, which do not a story make. TELL US THEY'RE DECK LISTS, NOT THE CHAPTERS THEMSELVES!!

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

DECKS ARE NOT CHAPTERS.

 

All I see are deck lists' date=' which do not a story make. TELL US THEY'RE DECK LISTS, NOT THE CHAPTERS THEMSELVES!!

[/quote']

Chapters three and four are beneath them. They're very suckish, but w/e.

[barryc100588]

You know, I'm glad you point out my flaws. But what I need is help. I offered anyone who is willing to help the chance to do so. The chapters are no where near completion. I know that. And its explained that Harry, Ron and Hermione have been dueling with Duel Monsters for 6 years now. I know Harry has two ways to duel. Yes, he could have taken out his wand and sent off a spell, but Harry is someone who reacts best. I could have made Ron draw his wand, but I was feeling lazy. I could have made one of the adults do it, but maybe he would have put something on her that would go off if something would happen to him that didn't involve cards. Like all authors I like to add a sense of suspense. "What would happen if character a sent a spell at villain a? Did villain a set something on character b in case that happens?" I'll edit the story to include that tidbit, so Harry is forced into a card duel.

 

Also, Elemental heroes are not sucky cards. They're difficult cards to use, because only four of them are Normal monsters, and they're based on fusion. They're the only deck theme based entirely on fusion. I plan on having an E-Hero deck myself.

 

So, I'm not a good fanfiction writer yet. it takes time to become one. Perfection is impossible, but we get better as we write. I thank you for your comments on my story. It tells me what I need to do. Flesh it out a bit. I mean, a Yu-Gi-Oh duel happens in the middle of Diagon Alley, and no crowd? The Chosen One duels and no crowd? I see what you mean. They're dull. I'll work on them and re post them. I'll also edit the first two "chapters" and give them proper titles as decklists.

 

I edited the second chapter, adding in him drawing his wand, and the reason why he switched to his duel disk.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

I'm afraid the E-Heroes are, in fact, quite terrible. The best Deck I've ever seen made with the E-Heroes had a very powerful first turn monster-wise but almost no protection, allowing quick-acting, destructive decks to rip them apart. With Synchros as viable options, it didn't make it anywhere. (For the record, that Deck only used two vanillas, both Sparkmen.)

 

On that note... you do actually play, right? Knowing what the likes of Dark Armed Dragon and Chaos Sorcerer are capable of might make you place your mid-duel words more carefully.

 

 

For the record, I can't help but notice that Yugi's Deck has thirty-nine monsters. Actually, it has so many cards, it'd be illegal in most tournaments. How can it realistically draw anything? No one likes the anime's inconsistency, though I suppose in a world based on the anime, there can be a bit of slack cut.

[barryc100588]

I agree, could you please draw up a deck around Dark Magician for Yugi, the Blue Eyes/V-Z combo for Kaiba, and Warriors with a bit of luck mixed in for Joey? I'm not that good at making decks. I'll give credit where credit is due.

 

Cards I want in each deck:

 

Yugi:

Dark Magician

Kuriboh or any of its incarnations

Dark Magician Girl.

maybe Dark Sage

 

Kaiba:

Blue eyes White Dragon x3

Blue eyes Ultimate Dragon

Or the V-Z combo.

 

Both if you can manage it.

 

Joey:

Gilford the Lightning

Time Wizard

 

Can you do that? Could you also make up a new deck for Harry. It must follow the guidelines stated, in other words no synchros. I won't be using synchros in my story at all. There will be a sequel, so they will appear then.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

WHOA, a DM Deck? That could be tricky. I'll see what I can do, though. Is DMoC banned in your world?

[Kaisu]

I wondered how many people caught on...

I always played Abnoxious Celtic Guard only if I could equip it with a spell that boosts it's attack, ie. Melovent Nuzzler.

[.:Incognito:.]

post decklists there and the chapters somewhere eles okay???