Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 These are my very first cards. Once per turn, by paying 700 Life Points, you can discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. If the discarded card is a Spell, add a Trap card to your hand. If the discarded card is a Trap card, add a monster card to your hand. If the discarded card is a monster card, add a Spell card to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Wow, seriously? These are your first cards? I'm impressed. I see a great Card Making future in you my friend ^_^ Keep the good work up For some help, do not use images that have black/blank backgrounds and its not necessary to make 3 threads with the same cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Wow' date=' seriously? These are your first cards? I'm impressed. I see a great Card Making future in you my friend ^_^ Keep the good work up For some help, do not use images that have black/blank backgrounds and its not necessary to make 3 threads with the same cards...[/quote'] Thank you ^^ and I'll take that advice. I did not mean to post it 3 times my laptop was acting up. And I got confused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Only 1 mistake. On Circle of Dark Enchantment, the correct ocg is As long as this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all Spellcaster-type monsters on your side of the field by 500 during your Battle Phase.Apart from that, 9.7/10 Your gonna be a good card maker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Only 1 mistake. On Circle of Dark Enchantment' date=' the correct ocg is [b']As long as this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all Spellcaster-type monsters on your side of the field by 500 during your Battle Phase.[/b]Apart from that, 9.7/10 Your gonna be a good card maker! Thank you ^^ and I think I'll fix that nowIt's been fixed ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperMidget #1 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 that was your first time no way but they are cool cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 that was your first time no way but they are cool cards Haha those are really my first cards. Thank you though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Omg that is your first card? Mine is horrid. (lol) See. You will probably become a great YC Maker. Keep up the great work! I could say that those cards are exellent, but the last isn't really balanced, it's a little underpowered. But it's great in general!With newby bonus, 11/10 (it's because I give +2 to newbies...lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Omg that is your first card? Mine is horrid. (lol) See. You will probably become a great YC Maker. Keep up the great work! I could say that those cards are exellent' date=' but the last isn't really balanced, it's a little underpowered. But it's great in general!With newby bonus, 11/10 (it's because I give +2 to newbies...lol)[/quote'] Haha Thank you ^^. Is this better? I fixed it a litte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 pics are absolutely beautiful. 10/10 on that Effects are great, and I see no OCG error 9.9/10 overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 pics are absolutely beautiful. 10/10 on that Effects are great' date=' and I see no OCG error 9.9/10 overall[/quote'] Why thank you ^^. I do try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Not bad for your first cards, but I will give some balance advice. Alchemist Wizard is broken. Way too easy to add any card to your hand.Cheerful Witch is broken, for a level 8 synchro you draw 8 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Not bad for your first cards' date=' but I will give some balance advice. Alchemist Wizard is broken. Way too easy to add any card to your hand.Cheerful Witch is broken, for a level 8 synchro you draw 8 cards.[/quote'] Oh. Well I never looked at it that way. Thank you ^^ I will re-do them. There! I fixed Cheerful Witch, but I am lost on how to change Alchemist Wizard since I like his effect and I do not want to make any large changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I must say, these are impressive for your first. Fit the realistic criteria. =P Though, "result of battle" should be "by battle". I hope to see more from you. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I must say' date=' these are impressive for your first. Fit the realistic criteria. =P Though, "result of battle" should be "by battle". I hope to see more from you. =D[/quote'] Haha thank you ^^ will make the changes by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 but I am lost on how to change Alchemist Wizard since I like his effect and I do not want to make any large changes. why not just put in after once per turnby paying ___ lifepoints (fill in the gap coz i dont know what to put there.. soz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 but I am lost on how to change Alchemist Wizard since I like his effect and I do not want to make any large changes. why not just put in after once per turnby paying ___ lifepoints (fill in the gap coz i dont know what to put there.. soz) Haha well I should have thought about that, it seems so obvious now ^^ thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 very good. i like the pictures you have and the effects while Alchemist Wizard has a broken effect still great cards for a beginner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]... These are your first cards?[spoiler=Intornetz Hi 5!!] They're very nice cards ;) I'd point out the few mistakes you made, but it seems they've already been pointed out. It's an interesting idea for the alchemist, but I'd add a drawback to each draw. Maybe to balance it out or something :/9.3/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
froggiewyatt Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 good cards are you sure these are your first cards? reply 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]... These are your first cards?[spoiler=Intornetz Hi 5!!] They're very nice cards ;) I'd point out the few mistakes you made' date=' but it seems they've already been pointed out. It's an interesting idea for the alchemist, but I'd add a drawback to each draw. Maybe to balance it out or something :/9.3/10[/color'][/align] Haha what a great card ^^. Thank you I'll think of a draw back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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