ben 10 tennyson Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 please post and sorry about my last post it my cards were posted incorrectly but please post and please rate my OCG if you like it i will post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeyman13 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 the cards are good but the effects are a little fuzzy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 To save space, you could call these "Apocalypse Dragons" Don't make elemental dragons! They are so overdone! Darki) Capitalise nameii) Overused piciii) 'dragon' = 'Dragon'iv) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 DARK monsters on your side of the field. During the second Standby Phase that this card was summoned, Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard.v) The effect is overdone too... Lighti) Capitalise words!ii) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 LIGHT monsters on your side of the field. When this card is successfully summoned, remove from play 1 DARK monster on your opponent's side of the field.iii) Try a different ATK/DEF value. Wateri) Again with the Capitalisation!!ii) Come up with a different effect!iii) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, gain 500 Life Points.iv) Different ATK/DEF needed Wind(I am now simply copy and pasting what I said above and changing minor details)i) Again with the Capitalisation!!ii) Come up with a different effect!iii) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 WIND monsters on your side of the field. When this card is successfully summoned, add 1 card to your hand from your Graveyard.iv) Different ATK/DEF needed Earthi) Again with the Capitalisation!!ii) Come up with a different effect!iii) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 EARTH monsters on your side of the field. When this card is successfully summoned, all face-up EARTH monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF until your End Phase.iv) Different ATK/DEF needed Firei) Again with the Capitalisation!!ii) Come up with a different effect!iii) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters on your side of the field. This card is not affected by Continuous Spell Cards.iv) Different ATK/DEF needed Come up with different effects, work on your general grammar and spelling, work on your OCG and be more creative with these. They're just the same card with different pictures and a tweaked effect! 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I think Max Darkness just nailed it right there. 3/10. Sorry but they aren't that good. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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