Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 This is my first Synchro monster so it may be overpowered or underpowered. [spoiler=Lore]1 DARK tuner + 1 or more DARK non-tuner monstersIf this card is Synchro Summoned using a DARK Spellcaster-Type monster, this card gains ATK equal to the monster's ATK. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Trap Card, you can activate a Trap Card from your hand. Please enjoy and comment. Suggestions welcome! Picture is from http://www.crunchyroll.com/group/Runes ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 OCG seems good. (I'm not the best at it though.) Good pic. Original effect. Overall 9/10. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 OCG seems good. (I'm not the best at it though.) Good pic. Original effect. Overall 9/10. Good job. Thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Dark non-Tuner monsters - I think thasts how the top is meant to read. Seems like the last part of the effect was just glued on at the end. I think you should just drop it mate!! Good card but depending on the DARK Spellcaster-Type you used to Synchro with it could become overpowered, there are Level 4 spellcasters with 1900 atk points making yours 4000!! Maybe half there ATK maybe better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Dark non-Tuner monsters - I think thasts how the top is meant to read. Seems like the last part of the effect was just glued on at the end. I think you should just drop it mate!! Good card but depending on the DARK Spellcaster-Type you used to Synchro with it could become overpowered' date=' there are Level 4 spellcasters with 1900 atk points making yours 4000!! Maybe half there ATK maybe better.[/quote'] Thank you ^^ yes I thought about the Dark Spellcaster issue as well otherwise I would have made it's Attack higher but I could lower it. I did just add the last part on without reason. I'll fix the top as well thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 thats ok. Well even with half say a 1600 ATK point monster still gives you 800 point boost taking yours to almost the magic 3000 ATK point mark. Didnt wanna sound harsh about the last bit seems like you was desperate to put a negative on the card. Happy to help!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 thats ok. Well even with half say a 1600 ATK point monster still gives you 800 point boost taking yours to almost the magic 3000 ATK point mark. Didnt wanna sound harsh about the last bit seems like you was desperate to put a negative on the card. Happy to help!! Haha actually you didn't sound harsh at all, that is actually true. I wanted to put a negative on it so i just forced one in there. ^^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 card is good, didn't see any OCG errors, and it's balanced, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 card is good' date=' didn't see any OCG errors, and it's balanced, 8/10[/quote'] Thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound Ojamortal! Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner DARK Monster(s) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner DARK Monster(s) Thank you ^^ I'll change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Here is what I think the OCG is, but I'm not the greatest. "1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more DARK non-Tuner monstersWhen this monster is Synchro Summoned using a Dark Spellcaster-Type monster, that monsters ATK is added to this monster's ATK. If this monster is targeted by a Trap card, you can activate a Trap Card from your hand." There was minor OCG errors I could see, but, like I said, I'm not great at it. The image is good awesome, but you need image credit. I really like this card, but the ATK could get very high on this card. I'll rate it 8.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Here is what I think the OCG is' date=' but I'm not the greatest. "1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more DARK non-Tuner monstersWhen this monster is Synchro Summoned using a Dark Spellcaster-Type monster, that monsters ATK is added to this monster's ATK. If this monster is targeted by a Trap card, you can activate a Trap Card from your hand." There was minor OCG errors I could see, but, like I said, I'm not great at it. The image is [s']good[/s] awesome, but you need image credit. I really like this card, but the ATK could get very high on this card. I'll rate it 8.6/10. Thank you very much ^^' and Ill have to find the site again. I got it from a website,so that might take a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 there are no brackets on the s in monsters...its like i wrote it I promise Im not lying to you lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 there are no brackets on the s in monsters...its like i wrote it I promise Im not lying to you lol Haha alright I wasn't quite sure I'll fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Great Pic OCG: 1 DARK tuner + 1 or more DARK non-tuner monster(s)When this monster is Synchro Summoned using a Dark Spellcaster, this monster gains ATK equal to that monster's original ATK. If this monster is targeted by the effect of a Trap card, you can activate a Trap Card from your hand. Good for a first: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 where has this thing about putting brackets round S's come from??? I have looked at quite a few now and not seen any!! Also Tuner is capital Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 " If this card is Synchro Summoned using a DARK Spellcaster-Type monster, this card gains ATK equal to the monster's ATK. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Trap Card, you can activate a Trap Card from your hand. " I thikn that's what you ment. Not bad. =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 The brackets mean it could be one or more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I know what it means mate but its not written on any of the Offical cards I have looked at. Isnt that the point of OCG to be correct almost to a fault!!?? Can you show me which cards have them writen on and I will apologise fully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 The brackets mean it could be one or more. No. Look at real Synchros (like Stardust Dragon or Dark Strike Fighter). They have no brackets' date=' and I think you can tell you can use as many non-Tuner with what it says on the card ("1 or [i']more[/i] non-Tuner monsters"). Come back when you have real sense of the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Alright you guys ^^' lets all just cool down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Meh for your level your high in your class keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Meh for your level your high in your class keep up the good work Thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I bet you wish you hadn't made the card now you got half the YCM forum using your thread as a pissing ground lol...TROUBLE MAKER!!! LOL ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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