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[Nigomsa]

 

 

 

 

 

[Angel of Silence]

Terrible OCG. Bad pics. Overall 3/10

[Nigomsa]

I didnt think the last pic was to bad I can see whats wrong with the pics but what about the effects etc...

[Max Darkness]

Right

 

Nigomsa

i) Alright picture

ii) Too powerful for a Lv.10, make it a Lv.11

iii) It's a Ritual Monster, make it so

iv) Magic cards are called Spell Cards

iv) The effect is awfully worded, you don't give an effect and a description.

OCG: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Release The Curse". This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap Cards.

 

Relive The Curse

i) Change name to Release The Curse

ii) Awful picture

iii) It's a Ritual Spell Card, not a Normal Spell Card

iv) The effect is all wrong

v) OCG: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Nigomsa". You must offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 11 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

 

Vampiric Bite

i) Quick-Play Trap Cards don't exist, this is a Counter Trap Card

ii) OCG: Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster and gain an amount of Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

iii) The effect is too powerful, tone it done

 

The Warriors Armor

i) Change name to "The Warrior's Armor"

ii) Bad picture, no background

iii) OCG: Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 800 DEF.

iv) Very boring effect, come up with a new effect

 

The Warriors Blade

i) Change name to "The Warrior's Blade"

ii) Boring picture

iii) OCG: Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK.

iv) VERY dull effect

 

The Attacher

i) Its ATK and DEF are too high for a Lv.5, make it a Lv.6

ii) The effect is stupidly powerful, you've just copied the God's effect, and made it even more overpowered.

iii) Re-work this card completely

 

Not good.

 

1/10 (for trying)

[al9090]

Bad OCG Bad PICS 1 over used and rong type 1/10

[ehrp61]

Over used pic.. no background pick

bad OCG

eh your first try ?

6/10 overall