Aerokinetic Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 For reasons i will not explain, I no longer wish for my cards to be displayed on the internet. Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Well the first i dont know,i mean divine ???? its a cool card but its so overpowerd,But though nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cell0097 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Divine cards are "illegal" in gameplay, so any card that is Divine shouldnt be in the realistic section. Your cards are a bit overpowered, tone them down a bit. The effects are pretty simple, you should give the fusion card an effect as well. Fix up some of your OCG (official card grammar) like capitalizing certain words. Not bad for a beginner though, keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I dont see the other card for fusion. ;)Also, the Dragon God is owerpowered. ;)Dragon trainer is like any ordinary card, so.. Overall rating : 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerokinetic Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I dont see the other card for fusion. ;)Also' date=' the Dragon God is owerpowered. ;)Dragon trainer is like any ordinary card, so.. Overall rating : 6/10[/quote'] Like I said, I did 2 of the same card. One was supposed to be the other fusion material card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Then, im waiting for that material card. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 I think you need more level 4 or less monster card. That's because you'll need sacrifice for summoning the level 5 or more cards. But I see you have pretty cool cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 there are some errors, but nothing too serious to make a mention, if you reword some effects, they should be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 pic for first card is way to overused.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 There's a couple OCG errors. Don't make a card 2 types it doesn't look good. Same thing as everyone else said don't make Divine cards. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSkull Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 All your cards are cool but your first one needs fixing up.if I was to rate you it be 9.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
power ranger man Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 pic for first card is overused.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 Soul Stealer seems to be a weird name for affecting machines since they have no souls 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerokinetic Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Soul Stealer seems to be a weird name for affecting machines since they have no souls 9/10 I'm not insulting you or anything but I said EXCEPT Machine type monsters for this reason.Thank you for your tips and such, I will remebr them when I make another realistic sort a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 no divine beast! read the rules, please change it to dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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