Veneficus, The Shapeshifting Mage

[740kt]

I recently made this card for the Multi-Monster Contest and I lost...

Can anyone tell me where its OCG errors are and any way to improve it?

 

 

Card Lore:

When this card is face-up on the field, it can also be treated as a Winged Beast-Type monster. Once per turn, put 1 counter on this card. During your Main Phase, you can remove 2 counters to destroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn, if this card is treated as Winged Beast-Type, you can remove 1 counter to activate 1 of the following effects:

●Change the Battle Position of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field from Attack Position to Defense Position.

●Tribute 1 monster or pay 500 Life Points. Look at your opponent's hand.

●Send 1 monster on the field back to the original owner's hand.

[ragnarok1945]

The name of the card doesn't appear to suit the picture (I see no shapeshifting at all), but everything else is excellent

 

9.5/10

[~Riku~]

Why specifically Winged Beast? You should make it any Type and then do 1 effect for every Type, get my meaning? 7/10

[740kt]

I was kind of thinking he would shapeshift to the owl in his hand.

[Mercer]

First off, I think it's pretty good, but no offense, I think you have more potential. No OCG errors I could find, so 9/10. Good.

[Grayall]

Well, whats the point of can be treated part? Place is treated and all.. :D

Overpowered.

Other way, its pretty nice.

8.7/10

[Cypress]

While this card is face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Winged Beast-Type monster. Once per turn, put 1 counter on this card(max. *). Once per turn, you can remove a number of counter to activate 1 of the following effects:

●1:Change the Battle Position of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field OR

reveal your opponent's hand until the end of the turn.

●2:Return 1 monster on the field back to to the top of its owner's Deck.

*3:Destroy 1 card on the field.

 

 

fixed, insert max counters possible. effects are now read more clearly. put speciaic costs for everything and had them organized under the effect that says "remove....."