A Deal With the Devil <RP><PG-16>(Under the control of Grim The Wanderer for now)

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

[align=center]It was a dark night where you live, it wasn't stormy or rainy so you decide to go for a walk. Your life pretty much sucks at this point and you need something, anything to get you through. As you walk you realize that you walked so far that you haven't the faintest idea where you are. You stumble upon a dirt road that leads to a crossroad of four other dirt paths. You look around and see a man, wearing a black suite and a hat to hide his face from your view, standing in the center of the crossroad. He says his name is Scratch and that you can have one wish that will automatically come true the next day. You, not being a fool, questions the man about what does he get in return and why would he give this opportunity to him of all people. Scratch says that he saw that you really needed it and that you'd "catch up with you in ten years". You shake his hand to agree on the deal and the next morning you awake to find the wish to have come true.

 

Nine years later life is going good since that day. But now a man comes to your door and asks if you made a deal with a man in a crossroads nine years ago. You say how do you know about that. He responds by telling you that you have made a deal with the devil, and when the clock strikes ten years, he's coming to get your soul as payment. Now, knowing this new information, you must team up with the others who have made deals with devil and try to stop him from getting his end of the deal...[/align]

 

App:

 

Name:

Age:

What Did You Deal For?:

Personality(At least three lines):

Biography(At least five lines):

Appearance:

 

[spoiler=Accepted Forms]

Name: Jax Muzack

Age: 28

What Did You Deal For?: Weapon Making Skills, to be updated as time went on.

Personality(At least three lines): Jax is outgoing and very rash about things. He likes to start plans right when their made and not wait for anyone to follow. Jax has never been a "team player" so he doesn't value the mediocre group that he is trying to assemble. He is a selfish and maniacal brute that wont hesitate to kill a man if he is going to survive as the exchange...

Biography(At least five lines): Jax was born in kind of a crappy family. His mother and father were both drunks and druggies that didn't give a damn about him. His father killed his mother when he was the age of four and he then skipped out on him like he never had a care in the world. Jax was of course thrown into an orphanage to live and grow until the age of thirteen, it was hell trying to get adopted so he didn't even try. He waited until he was eighteen and was released from the orphanage and onto the streets of Brooklyn. Jax was working at a restaurant when he turned nineteen and decided that was indeed time for a change. Rather then it being a surprise Jax actually looked up the crossroads himself to try to find this "wish maker". When he did he went to him and made his wish, getting a job in the military afterward. Jax was looking on the internet one day, after these events, and came across the same source he used to find "Scratch". He read it more to find the secret of this deal and that's when he decided to assemble a team.

Appearance:

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Name: Liang Syun

Age: 20

What Did You Deal For: Wealth

Personality: Usually kind and caring about others feelings, he puts that aside if his friends are in danger. If you ever come across his bad side, you will cower in fear from it for most of your life. Though he can come across a rich and arrogant snob, he really isn't.

Biography: Liang's life was always a wreck. When he was born, his mother died a few minutes after. At the age of 2, his father died in a brutal murder for just his money. At the age of 5, his sister was hit by a car and put into a coma. At the age of 6, they had to turn off his sister's life support machines. At the age of 7, Liang was put into foster care and a few months later, was adopted by strict foster parents that would abuse him for no reason. At the age of 10, he was kidnapped by people who did government experiments on him. Through these experiments, Liang was stronger than a normal man, but would occasionally hallucinate.

Appearance:

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Name: Zeke Tranis

Age: 13

What Did You Deal For?: For a nicer aunt and friends. So bacicly a better life (He woke up and saw his parents :D)

Personality(At least three lines):

Zeke is very shy but helpful. He wouldn't hesitate to help his friends out of trouble. Even if he gets himself into trouble. Zeke gets good grades but has very little friends. Zeke never makes fun of anyone because he knows how it feels Zeke isnt athletic and mainly reads. He is also very solitary.

Biography(At least five lines):

Zeke's parents died in a car crash when he was only 3. He was fun and friendly but now is shy. Zeke's aunt takes car of him and by that I mean she treats him like a slave. He cleans the entire house daily. He only has one friend but he uses him to blame him for things. He cries himself to sleep every night. Zeke's aunt tortures him by hitting him and burning him. Zeke tryed to run away that dark night but then met the man on the crosswalk.

Appearance:

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Name: Hayate Masaru

 

Age: 21

 

What Did You Deal For?: Telekinesis

Personality(At least three lines): Hayate is a smart and intelligent person. He is rather confident at what ever he does which make for a better outcome in what he does. He has the ability to use strategies to his advantage and likes to be ten moves further then his opponent.

 

Biography(At least five lines): When Hayate was 12 he went for a walk while it was snowing. He had gone for quite some time as it started to snow harder. He was unable to see anything until he got to a 4 way intersection where it wasn't snowing. The man offered him a wish, in which Hayate replied, "Give me the power of Telekinesis," A day later when the wish came true Hayate began testing the limits of his abilities. He was still unsure how to use them and in a dasterous usage of his power he caused his house to cave in killing his parents. From that day on Hayate has lived on his own where ever he can and learns to take care of his needs by using his new found power. 9 years later he lives in a two bedroom apartment with his fiance. Three months into his Fiance's pregnency Hayate heard from a strange man telling him about the conditions of his deal. Hayate was extremly Devastated when he heard that this would happen, as he was about to get married and become a father.

 

Appearance: Unknown as of now, will post later.

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Name: Kurokawa Kaito

Age: 30

What Did You Deal For?: His Parents back.

Personality(At least three lines): Kurokawa is rather shy and quiet. But, he is quite intelligent and brave. He is always calm in any situation, which is why he wasn't scared at the notice of the deal and the new information.

Biography(At least five lines):

 

Kurokawa's parents died when he was 10, and he couldn'y bare it. For 10 years he's stayed quiet and anti-social. He lived in an orphanage, and went out of the orphanage when he was 19, renting an apartment and going to college. At 20, he found 'Scratch' and when he was asked for what he wished for, he wished for his parents to come back. The next day...it became true. He was shocked and happy but suspicious when his parents suddenly greeted him from his awake. He was expecting something in 10 years time.

Appearance:

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Name: Marxale Lafiet

Age: 24

What Did You Deal For?: Eternal Life.

Personality(At least three lines): Marxale is solitary and quiet, he rarely talks to anyone. He is polite when talking to someone, however. He is suprisingly intelligent, even with lack of schooling. He loves being on his own, and will often break out in rage if someone is close to him alot. He loves history.

Biography(At least five lines): Marxale started out as a street orphan in New York, doing whatever it could take to survive and find food. He had been told by his mother when she was still alive that his father was 'at sea', and he never really believed her. His mother took care of him up til age 6, when she died. He lived on the streets until age 8, when his uncle took him away into the woods of the state of Maine to live, here Marxale is somewhat happy, but at age 16 he runs away, after his uncle had died in a car crash, living in Maine, doing random jobs for money, he knows his life would be a unhappy one, so he meets a stranger, and he receives eternal life, because his life has been unhappy, and if he lives forever, he could have a happy life.

Appearance:

 

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Name: Meti Crystale

Age: 27

What Did You Deal For?: For advanced soundwave controle.

Personality(At least three lines): Meti is a rather smart individual. His thinks rather quickly for a human being. However, this leads him a bit of schitzophrenia, having many voices within his head telling him what do. He makes up for this mentality by being rather calm and descisive while in conflict with himself.

Biography(At least five lines): When Meti made his deal with Scratch, he only had one thing that he desired, since he couldn't live with anything else. His sound-waves controle ability has grown so exponatially that he can now use the soundwaves around him to become visable illusions.

Appearance:

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Name: David Evans

Age: 31

What Did You Deal For?: Sight

Personality(At least three lines): He usually has a smile on his face and seems easy to get along with but deep down is nothing like that. He tends to see the flaws in people and hate them for it. He also has a bit of experience with firearms from hunting with his father but doesn't like violence at all.

Biography(At least five lines): David grew up as a spoilt child in a rich family but was born blind. Through his entire life he was always taken care of by servants but slowly he began to hate his life. He hated the constant care, not being able to see the faces of his parents and friends and eventually tried to take his own life because of this. After his failed suicide his friends began to keep their distance and he started to hate them as well. One day he got his guide dog and ran from home and came across Scratch on the crossroads. He wished for his sight and was granted it. Now he has done all the things he has wanted to, hanging out with new friends and seeing the faces of his parents. Those were the happiest years of his life but now has turned 31 and Scratch is back.

Appearance:

 

 

[Zenrais]

Do you mean sentences or lines?

Name: Zack

Age: 21

What Did You Deal For?: a Girlfriend

Personality(At least three lines): Smart clever Strong Awesine beastley.

Biography(At least five lines):He was born on a lone appalaichian trail. He hates Scratch now that he knows. He likes pie and pizza. He was always an outsider. His girlfriend is really hot.

Appearance: a man in ripped but otherwise nice clothes with blond hair and bright blu eyes

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

Do you mean sentences or lines?

Name: Zack

Age: 21

What Did You Deal For?: a Girlfriend

Personality(At least three lines): Smart clever Strong Awesine beastley.

Biography(At least five lines):He was born on a lone appalaichian trail. He hates Scratch now that he knows. He likes pie and pizza. He was always an outsider. His girlfriend is really hot.

Appearance: a man in ripped but otherwise nice clothes with blond hair and bright blu eyes

 

I'd like lines rather then sentences. Also, be more descriptive with your Biography and Personality. Remember, a biography is a story of a persons life and who they are.

[Zenrais]

So am I accepted or...But dude....5 lines? That is like 2 Harry potter chapters...

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

Not really there's a lot of information that you can pack into your characters biography to make it long enough. Five lines on this site really isn't that many considering that you really should be writing fifteen lines to put into your whole characters back story. For instance, your character is twenty one. That's twenty one years that you can be talking about him. Explain how he grew up, what his parents were like, why his life was so shi*y that he had to make a deal, where he lives, what his hobbies are, or anything else you can think of. And as for personality, expand upon his feelings. Does he feel happy, why? Does he feel sad, why? It's really easy once you start to get the hang of it.

 

 

 

^See, five lines isn't that hard.^

=)

[Guest Lily]

Name: Liang Syun

Age: 20

What Did You Deal For: Wealth

Personality: Usually kind and caring about others feelings, he puts that aside if his friends are in danger. If you ever come across his bad side, you will cower in fear from it for most of your life. Though he can come across a rich and arrogant snob, he really isn't.

Biography: Liang's life was always a wreck. When he was born, his mother died a few minutes after. At the age of 2, his father died in a brutal murder for just his money. At the age of 5, his sister was hit by a car and put into a coma. At the age of 6, they had to turn off his sister's life support machines. At the age of 7, Liang was put into foster care and a few months later, was adopted by strict foster parents that would abuse him for no reason. At the age of 10, he was kidnapped by people who did government experiments on him. Through these experiments, Liang was stronger than a normal man, but would occasionally hallucinate.

Appearance:

[Dad]

FFR, you know better. Ghost Rider rip off much? >.>

 

*is creating a sign-up*

[PrimalFear]

I'm in making app now

[.Legend]

Name: Zeke Tranis

Age: 13

What Did You Deal For?: For a nicer aunt and friends. So bacicly a better life (He woke up and saw his parents :D)

Personality(At least three lines):

Zeke is very shy but helpful. He wouldn't hesitate to help his friends out of trouble. Even if he gets himself into trouble. Zeke gets good grades but has very little friends. Zeke never makes fun of anyone because he knows how it feels Zeke isnt athletic and mainly reads. He is also very solitary.

Biography(At least five lines):

Zeke's parents died in a car crash when he was only 3. He was fun and friendly but now is shy. Zeke's aunt takes car of him and by that I mean she treats him like a slave. He cleans the entire house daily. He only has one friend but he uses him to blame him for things. He cries himself to sleep every night. Zeke's aunt tortures him by hitting him and burning him. Zeke tryed to run away that dark night but then met the man on the crosswalk.

Appearance:

[PrimalFear]

App:

 

Name: Hayate Masaru

 

Age: 21

 

What Did You Deal For?: Telekinesis

Personality(At least three lines): Hayate is a smart and intelligent person. He is rather confident at what ever he does which make for a better outcome in what he does. He has the ability to use strategies to his advantage and likes to be ten moves further then his opponent.

 

Biography(At least five lines): When Hayate was 12 he went for a walk while it was snowing. He had gone for quite some time as it started to snow harder. He was unable to see anything until he got to a 4 way intersection where it wasn't snowing. The man offered him a wish, in which Hayate replied, "Give me the power of Telekinesis," A day later when the wish came true Hayate began testing the limits of his abilities. He was still unsure how to use them and in a dasterous usage of his power he caused his house to cave in killing his parents. From that day on Hayate has lived on his own where ever he can and learns to take care of his needs by using his new found power. 9 years later he lives in a two bedroom apartment with his fiance. Three months into his Fiance's pregnency Hayate heard from a strange man telling him about the conditions of his deal. Hayate was extremly Devastated when he heard that this would happen, as he was about to get married and become a father.

 

Appearance: Unknown as of now, will post later.

[Silent Omega]

Name: Kurokawa Kaito

Age: 30

What Did You Deal For?: His Parents back.

Personality(At least three lines): Kurokawa is rather shy and quiet. But, he is quite intelligent and brave. He is always calm in any situation, which is why he wasn't scared at the notice of the deal and the new information.

Biography(At least five lines):

 

Kurokawa's parents died when he was 10, and he couldn'y bare it. For 10 years he's stayed quiet and anti-social. He lived in an orphanage, and went out of the orphanage when he was 19, renting an apartment and going to college. At 20, he found 'Scratch' and when he was asked for what he wished for, he wished for his parents to come back. The next day...it became true. He was shocked and happy but suspicious when his parents suddenly greeted him from his awake. He was expecting something in 10 years time.

Appearance:

 

OoC: Pragboy and KWL, not to be much rude, but you guys can't be accepted. Why? Because your age is too low.

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

never saw the movie so it's not really a rip off if I didn't know I was doing it lol =)

 

All are accepted, accept for Zenrais until he fixes what I told him to fix

 

@The Omega: The Devil doesn't segregate, it's unusual but there ages are fine. Don't know how useful they'll be though...

[Guest Lily]

When will we start?

[Azmodius]

Name: Marxale Lafiet

Age: 24

What Did You Deal For?: Eternal Life.

Personality(At least three lines): Marxale is solitary and quiet, he rarely talks to anyone. He is polite when talking to someone, however. He is suprisingly intelligent, even with lack of schooling. He loves being on his own, and will often break out in rage if someone is close to him alot. He loves history.

Biography(At least five lines): Marxale started out as a street orphan in New York, doing whatever it could take to survive and find food. He had been told by his mother when she was still alive that his father was 'at sea', and he never really believed her. His mother took care of him up til age 6, when she died. He lived on the streets until age 8, when his uncle took him away into the woods of the state of Maine to live, here Marxale is somewhat happy, but at age 16 he runs away, after his uncle had died in a car crash, living in Maine, doing random jobs for money, he knows his life would be a unhappy one, so he meets a stranger, and he receives eternal life, because his life has been unhappy, and if he lives forever, he could have a happy life.

Appearance:

 

[Silent Omega]

*Shrugs* It's your RP...

 

I mean seeing as it was 10 years after the deal, that man came, and some of them, like KWLegend has the current age of 13 in the RP. (Wouldn't that mean a 3 or 6 year old made a deal with a devil?)

[Careless Whisper]

Name: Meti Crystale

Age: 27

What Did You Deal For?: For advanced soundwave controle.

Personality(At least three lines): Meti is a rather smart individual. His thinks rather quickly for a human being. However, this leads him a bit of schitzophrenia, having many voices within his head telling him what do. He makes up for this mentality by being rather calm and descisive while in conflict with himself.

Biography(At least five lines): When Meti made his deal with Scratch, he only had one thing that he desired, since he couldn't live with anything else. His sound-waves controle ability has grown so exponantially that he can now use the soundwaves around him to become visable illusions.

Appearance:

[Lil Jevans]

Name: David Evans

Age: 31

What Did You Deal For?: Sight

Personality(At least three lines): He usually has a smile on his face and seems easy to get along with but deep down is nothing like that. He tends to see the flaws in people and hate them for it. He also has a bit of experience with firearms from hunting with his father but doesn't like violence at all.

Biography(At least five lines): David grew up as a spoilt child in a rich family but was born blind. Through his entire life he was always taken care of by servants but slowly he began to hate his life. He hated the constant care, not being able to see the faces of his parents and friends and eventually tried to take his own life because of this. After his failed suicide his friends began to keep their distance and he started to hate them as well. One day he got his guide dog and ran from home and came across Scratch on the crossroads. He wished for his sight and was granted it. Now he has done all the things he has wanted to, hanging out with new friends and seeing the faces of his parents. Those were the happiest years of his life but now has turned 31 and Scratch is back.

Appearance:

 

This okay?

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

ooc: that's a good point, KWLegend will have to change his age but everybody else is fine.

[Careless Whisper]

OoC: So, old buddy, when will this start?

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

ooc: right now!

 

A loud and moderate paced knock is heard at the door Meti Crystal's home. The man was tall, had light blue eyes and black hair, was wearing a black cloak, and was smoking a cigarette at the time. He waited a few moments for an answer to the knock and then rang the door bell to see if he could get anyone's attention then. There are some many other people to get for this team, this person better be home... The man said as he rang the door bell again and knocked on the door in the same fashion as before, he waited for an answer again.

[Careless Whisper]

"OH SHUT UP!" erupted behind the door. Instantly after, the door bursted open along with sparks the clear pushed the door open rather violently. A man with ragged, ash-black hair stepped out. He seemed more calm than the shout earlier had suggested. Meti Crystale looked down at the man who had knocked on his now blasted door.

"Oh, I'm sorry. Thought it was a raven." He excused as he helped the man up.

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

The man didn't take his help and got up all his own and then helped himself inside Meti Crystale's home. "You are Meti Crystale correct?" The man asked and then waited for a reply from the man who had just pretty much thrown a door in his face. He took a look around the apartment to see how he lived and then looked back at Meti Crystale to wait for his answer...

[Careless Whisper]

"Ugh. Yeah. I am. Why?" Meti responded rather hastily. He didn't really understand why this man had suddenly came into his own apartment, even after Meti had blasted his own door off its hinges. "Who are you?" He added.

[Shadowwolf17]

Name:Jake Green

Age:22

What Did You Deal For?:To see his cat again(Childhood friend, but died year after deal)

Personality(At least three lines):Jake is very cockey. A bit of a flirt, and wishes to see his cat again(Again).

Biography(At least five lines):Jake was born in Iceland. Would walk into the woods each morning and feed the wolves. One day, the wolves gave him a cat, which he loved. The cat dies one day, and Jake was very depressed. His parents didn't care for him, and the cat was his only friend.

Appearance:Avi

[Lil Jevans]

At his family's estate, David was pacing back and forth trying to figure out what to do. Damn it! What do I do?! At this rate I'll... David suddenly decided that there was no other choice. He broke into his father's gun closet and grabbed a handgun. I have to kill him. I have to kill him before he can kill me! David walks towards his dog and takes him outside. "Okay boy, time for us to get out of here. " David said while walking outside the estate. Sorry father. I must do this.