Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 [align=center]Org. My Card:Image CreditThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Panther Warrior" you control. This card gains 400 DEF for every non-EARTH monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to toss a coin: Heads: Destroy all other EARTH monsters on the field. Tails: Destroy this card. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Rate, Fix[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K3fka Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Nice. You need to change "This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 monster with: "Panther Warrior" on your side of the field." to "This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 "Panther Warrior" on your side of the field."Still, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 No. It is correct. Any else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Aiku, OCG correction!Aiku: Oh yeah! Fixe:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 "Panther Warrior" monster on your side of the field. This card gains 400 DEF for every non-EARTH monsters on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, you can toss a coin. ●Heads: Destroy all EARTH monsters on the field, except this card. ●Tails: Destroy this card. I think that's how it goes, but for the dots I just add it for this correction. Effect: The effect is kinda strange. Usually you play a monster, because it's effect can tribuate to make the Deck stronger. But this toss coin is almost like it's killing your own deck. BUt my little finger is telling me that this card is somekind of anti-Rock and Beast-type. That's your call.Image: Honestly, I didn't even know what was the image. It's not a panther, it look like a monkey with an armor, but the art is good. Overall: 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 I think "sacrificing" should be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Fixed. No it should not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 OCG FIX:This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 monster with "Panther Warrior" in its name you control. This card gains 400 DEF for every non-EARTH monster on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to activate the following effect: Toss a coin, if HEADS: Destroy all EARTH monsters on the field except this card. If TAILS: Destroy this card. Nice Card, but I still don't really really like it. I just like it.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 To me the card looks better suited to a monkey than panther for some reason Effect looks a little weird too 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I like them, good job, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Gosh, I'll finally fix it for realz. In line 2, change it back to "with 'Panther Warrior' in it's name" if you make more Panther Warrior cards.FIX:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Panther Warrior" you control. This card gains 400 DEF for every non-EARTH monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to toss a coin: • Heads: Destroy all other EARTH monsters on the field. • Tails: Destroy this card. The end was a little guess, but I'm 98% positive I'm correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Fixed, for about the 1,000,000,000th time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Not close to 1 Million. Maybe 5. I gave the best, if not perfect, fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 well the card and the OCG are both great but the pic remindes me of a monkey more than a panther Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Looks like a panther too me. NEXT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 This card's optional effect is really underpowered. Why would you want to Tribute a monster for an effect in which both possibilities are bad for the controller? Change "can" to "must". That would make much more sense. ^^ The Set ID's also unrealistic. 4 character prefix, then for the suffix use "EN" and 3 additional characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 pretty underpowered, i cant think of a real use for it honestly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 It's so you don't allways have to just get rid of monsters on your field. NNENEXNEXT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Panther Warrior" you control. This card gains 400 DEF for every each non-EARTH monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to toss a coin. If the result is Heads destroy all other EARTH monsters on the field. If the result is Heads, destroy this card. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Kinda interesting. If you can lower the ATK gaining to 300 or 250, it would be better.I like the idea though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Get rid of the last sentence... But other than that, good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Well, it could be that J.... freak's in Yu-Gi-Oh new card. :DIts not really playable.. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Much better than original version 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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