2 Beast Synchro Monsters

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Constructive feedback is hoped for. Holo by legendarylightning and :.:ZeGunMaster:.:

[spoiler=Card 1's Effect]1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more FIRE non-tuner monsters

If this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap Card, remove the monsters used to Synchro Summon this card from play to negate the effect and destroy the card. If this card if targeted by a Monster Effect, pay 700 Life Points to negate the effect. If this card is destroyed, Special Summon one FIRE monster and one WATER monster whose ATK equal 2000 or less.

 

[spoiler=Card 2's Effect]"Thunderblast Synchron" + 1 or more Beast-Type non-Tuner monsters

If this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove 1 card on your opponent's field from play until your next Standby Phase. Each time this card attacks, you can choose 1 monster. That monster's ATK is lowered by 100. If this card is destroyed, you can pay 900 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Thunderblast Synchron" from the Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.

 

[Phanax Leminer]

Phanax: ZZZZZzzzz....

Aiku: Hey, Phanax wake up! Cards to rate here!

Phanax: .... Okay.

 

OCG: I got nothing really to say about your OCG, except that "one" is "1" for your first card, please keep that in mind.

Effect: It's a Synchro Monster, so the effects are sure cheap and powerful, but at least the cause of summoning is demanding.

Image: I like your choose for the first, but average feeling for the second one.

 

Overall: Both: 7.2/10

[ragnarok1945]

first one is definately better, though I don't see why you'd want to special summon a FIRE monster upon this card's destruction since it's a water attribute

 

8/10

[DragonLord577]

One is definately better good Effect, two is ok

 

One 8/10

Two 7/10

[Max Darkness]

Hmmm, I quite like both, although the first is better than the second:

 

Icseil

i) I would change the name to "Icseil - Elemental Cougar" or "Icseil - Frozen Beast"

ii) OCG:

1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters

When this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap Card, remove from play the Synchro Material Monsters to negate the effect and destroy the card. If this card is targeted by a Monster Effect, you can pay 700 Life Points. If you do, negate the effect. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 FIRE monster and 1 WATER monster whose total ATK equal 2100 or less. (Thought it would be better to have their total ATK add up to the ATK of this card)

 

(You could also have)

 

When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 FIRE monster and 1 WATER monster whose total Level Stars equal 5 or less.

 

Electrical Doom Whipper

i) No offense, but that is such a silly name

ii) Try something along the lines of the above card, such as "(Name) - Thunder Beast"

iii) OCG:

"Thunderblast Synchron" + 1 or more non-Tuner Beast-Type monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play 1 face-up card on your opponent's side of the field until your next Standby Phase. When this card battles, during the Damage Step you can pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 500) to have the monster it's battling lose that much ATK, until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 900 Life Points. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Thunderblast Synchron" from the Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.

 

 

7.5/10

[kingsleyduel]

nice 8/10

[hero2die]

Nice Idea!

 

9.7/10

[.:JBM:.]

Not awful. Pretty good pics. Okay OCG and effects were aight. Overall, 7/10. That's good coming from me.