Glow_handed Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 hi this is the demonic hell set ,its unfinished but its enough. Heres the Booster Pack: Death demon If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, this card can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the filed. Demon Tiger If this card is destroyed as result of battle, your opponent losses 300 lifepoints for each monster on his/her side of the field. Demonsaurus If this card destroyes a monster it is removed from play , For each monster removed from play your opponent discards the number of them. Demon prince the owner of this card card can change the battle position of 1 monster each turn. Demon prince-Last stand This card cannot be normally summoned,set.only special summoned if a "Demon prince" is sent to the graveyard,summon this card from your hand or graveyard.This card isn't efffected by any Spell Trap cards. Demon knight When this card is used to Synchro summon "Avenging demon knight" it is not sent to the Graveyard. Avenging demon knight "Demon knight" + " 1 or more Non-tuner monsters". this cards ATK and DEF points are equal to the number of the monsters levels used to summon this monster x400.Aslong as this card is Face-up on the field you can draw an extra card each turn. Battle zone When this card is activated, both you and the opponent cannot set monsters, aslong as this card remains face-up your monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF . Super demon This card gains 200 ATK and DEF points for each monster in your hand. I hope you liked them,im gonna make the full set soon .:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Great set! The only problem was a couple of grammar errors. But other than that, it was awesome! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thanx and if u could tell me the errors your talking about it would be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Don't make fake types, they look stupid. Death Demoni) Overused nameii) Change to Fiend-Typeii) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Spellcaster-Type, in addition to its regular Type. If this is the only card on your side of the field, this card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. Demon Tigeri) Change name to "Demonic Tiger"ii) Change to Beast-Typeiii) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Fiend-Type, in addition to its regular Type. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of monsters on their side of the field x 300.iv) Reduce the ATK/DEF slightly as that is a strong effect. Demonsaurusi) Change to Dinosaur-Typeii) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Fiend-Type, in addition to its regular Type. Monsters this card destroys by battle are removed from play instead of going to the Graveyard. (Then the effect makes no sense whatsoever)iii) Lower the DEF to 800-1000 to justify the effect and high ATK. Demon Princei) Change to Fiend-Typeii) Increase to Lv.5/6iii) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Warrior-Type, in addition to its regular Type. During each of your Standby Phases, you can change the battle position of 1 monster your opponent controls.iv) Dull effect Demon Prince-Last Standi) Change to Fiend-Typeii) Increase to Lv.7/8iii) OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when a "Demon Prince" on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. This card's Type is treated as Warrior-Type, in addition to its regular Type. You can negate the effect of Spell and Trap Cards that designate this card. Demon Knighti) Change to Warrior-Typeii) Reduce the ATK slightlyiii) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Fiend-Type, in addition to its regular Type. When this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase of the turn. Avenging Demon Knighti) Synchro monsters can only be Synchro Summoned if the levels of the monsters used equal its level exactly, no more no less. Therefore this card will always have 2800 ATK/DEF, so you might as well just have that in the ATK/DEF field and remove that part of the effect.ii) Pic's not very goodiii) Change to Warrior-Typeiv) OCG: "Demon Knight" 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card's Type is treated as Fiend-Type, in addition to its regular Type. As long as this card remains face-up on the field. You may draw 1 extra card from your Deck during your Draw Phase. Battle Zonei)OCG: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can Set monsters and monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK and DEF.ii) You might need to add a cost to keep this card on the field. Super Demoni) Not great picii) Bland effectiii) Increase to Lv.7/8iv) Make it a Fiend-Typev) OCG: This card's Type is treated as Warrior-Type, in addition to its regular Type. This card gains 200 ATK for each Monster Card in your hand. Not brilliant at the moment. Work on these before continuing with the set. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Demonosaurus is great name pics are perfect effects ok 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thanx all for the tips guyz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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