Jake Harper Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Here it is my second set with worked OCG Grammar, Rate/hate/comment Set: Cards: Credit for the pics goes to Nightmarian,Google and DeviantArt.Next set will be Rumble DestructionTech Circle= Guy on Photobucket5ds logo= same guy on Photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 bump isnt the set nice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I guessing not to many people want to read all these cards but I've skimmed through and liked what I saw. You've been hard at work :) I could spot OCG errors here and there, I also noticed some monster types don't match the pic (Example: Insect being a Machine). Theres creativity as well. My final grade for this set is a 7/10 for all the work you put into these cards. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 thanks if you want check soon my Rumble Destruction set,i'm still working on it. How many bad does my OCG Grammar is?,just asking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Not terribly bad but I couldn't point all the errors out. In the future, show you cards to more skilled card makers for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 6/10 good pics and names ocg could be better and try not to make your own types ex spirit / effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 ok,more comments hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 6/10 good pics and names ocg could be better and try not to make your own types ex spirit / effect Actually Spirit is a Card Type just like Toon monsters. Jake did however forget to include the monster type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 cool cards dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 no he had a spirit/effect not a (insert type here)/spirit look at the Nature Root-Firespawn Gaurd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 bump. more comments if you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevermore Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Great work.. 9/10 I <3 the mitochondrion, because PE was one of my favourite Games ;) Keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Ugh these cards are tooo frekin crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaidesgen5 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Too many to read all at once, so i skimmed and liked the ideas and OCG. Can't rate all of this though. Very good i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
go249323 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 what does OCG meanhow old are you guys because i am 15 and alot of my friends dont like yugioh and they think its not cool.these cards are realy cool i give it a 8/10 because of all the hard work you put into it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 official card game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 These are Cool, I say 9/10 because you forgot to credit Father Wolf's pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlucardTheOld Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 no ocg is official card grammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 depends on what your talkin about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 They're alright, although the pics could be better. And Inferno Guard's pic is inappropriate for several reasons. Change it, plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omenhiikoyashi Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Okay I just finished reading over every card and there are a lot of mistakesyou got OCG errors, lots are Oped, pics don't match types or attributes, Inferno Guard's pic needs to change, Battle Scarred is a real card, and a couple of cards just made my brain itch cause it made no sense whatsoever, there were no periods at the end of the texts, also a couple of pics are from Magic the Gathering cards so my rating for this set 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolution A Minute Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 yeah change infernal guards picture kids are on this forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDExcelion311 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 hmm 10/10overall a nice set of cardsa few errors but overall very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexkaal Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 I love this set^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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