Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 The Seven Sacred Guardians of the Milenium Items. I based their Effects on thier Milenium Items. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Meh... Concept isn't really original... Pics are bad... OCG is off...5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Oh and i thought this was supposed to be fun not Depressing....THANKS!):| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Also Would Somebody mind pointing out which cards have OCG erros and What it is? That would be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 not bad cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Oh and i thought this was supposed to be fun not Depressing....THANKS!):| Sorry if I'm too harsh, but that's life.I'm only telling you what I think about these cards.It is MY opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokusho87 Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Well I'm not an OCG expert but here is what I would change it to:Atem - you can change "your side of the field" to "your field"Ceto - "one monster" to "1 monster", missing a space after "with", and you didn't specified where you can special summoned it fromAknadin - "discarding one card" to "discarding 1 card", "opponent's side of field" to "opponent's field"Isis - the "his/her" are old OCG, nobody use them anymore. Though it is still correct, I would suggest your change it to "you may look at the top card of your opponent's Deck."Mahad - rewrite the effect as "When this summoned in face-up Attack Position, pick up 5 cards from your Deck. Add all the Spell Cards to your Hand and discard the rest to your Graveyard. *note* "draw" means added to hand while "pick up" only means looking at itShada - "select one card" to "select 1 card", writing "Stars" is old OCG, change it to "Level 4" and "Level 3"Karim - rewrite the effect as "Once per turn, flip a coin and calls it. If you calls right, select 1 card on the field and destroys it. If not, your opponent select 1 card on the field and destroys it. Again, I'm not an OCG expert, but I hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Thanks! I will fix these errors! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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