Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Hope you enjoy Dark Ruin Beast- Telekinetic Witch[spoiler=Lore]When this monster is Tribute Summoned by the effect of a 'Dark Ruin Beast' monster's effect, your opponent must reveal their hand. If your opponent has at least 3 monsters in their hand, those monsters cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this monster is sent to the Graveyard directly from your hand, switch the control of 1 of your opponent's monsters to your control until the end of the turn this effect was activated. Dark Ruin Beast- Terror Fiend[spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, as long as 'Dark Ruin- Shattered Valley' is face-up on the field, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. The selected monster is returned to your opponent's hand. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If not, remove this monster from play. When this monster is removed from play by this effect, Special Summon 3 'Horror Fiend Tokens' (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 1000/DEF 100) to your side of the field in face-down Defense Position. By Tributing 3 face-up 'Horror Fiend Tokens' you can return this card to your hand. When a 'Horror Fiend Token' is destroyed, inflict 900 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is returned to your hand by this cards effect, Special Summon it on your next turn. Dark Ruin Beast- Vanquisher[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be used to Synchro Summon a 'Dark Ruin Beast'. When this monster attacks an opponent's monster, that monster is destroyed. Any battle damage taken involving this card is reduced to 0. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, it is returned to the bottom of your Deck. Shuffle your Deck and draw 2 cards. Again I am looking for a decent picture for 'Dark Ruin- Shattered Valley' (I hope to find a picture of a city that is in ruins) If you have any suggestive sites or pictures please pm me. Enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkHazard Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Fantastic! I love these pictures and effects! My favorite card would have to be the Terror Fiend!10/10 Fantastic and no OCGs either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Fantastic! I love these pictures and effects! My favorite card would have to be the Terror Fiend!10/10 Fantastic and no OCGs either Thank you ^^' it is nice to get comments ^^' (Hint hint) Anyways my favorite is Vanquisher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Effects are great, but almost look a little too simple. Maybe add more effects to them? 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Effects are great' date=' but almost look a little too simple. Maybe add more effects to them? 9.5/10[/quote'] Hmmm..Excellent idea! I have one for Terror Fiend! Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 these are a very good, but personally I think your terror fiend is overpowered, anyways, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 these are a very good' date=' but personally I think your terror fiend is overpowered, anyways, 9/10[/quote'] Hmm...I suppose it is. Maybe I'll drop the last effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 it's not so much as the card is overpowered, it's those "Horror Fiend Tokens" that are overpowered, I mean, one of them could be a 8 star monster, being able to destroy a card and inflict damage?? anyways, thats my rant, no harm intended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 it's not so much as the card is overpowered' date=' it's those "Horror Fiend Tokens" that are overpowered, I mean, one of them could be a 8 star monster, being able to destroy a card and inflict damage?? anyways, thats my rant, no harm intended[/quote'] Hahaha it's fine ^^ I'm always open for suggestions. Then I'll keep the last part and toss the Man-Eater Bug effect out of the 'Horror Fiend Token' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Good cards but I agree with everlasting, terror fiend is OP'd. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fay D. Flourite Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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