Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I just threw this together today, please point out any OCG errors and do it kindly please and thank-you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 well i couldn't find an OCG error wich makes this card awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Wow well I guess there is a first time for everything.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 0 OCG errors, impressive effect, pic is awesome 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Aiku: *look at the Zase's avatar* Hello, little robot. OCG: The OCG is... ALMOST PERFECT! I could see only one error and it's a minor one.two = 2 ^^UEffect: It's okay, I guess. A very good one for a Level 1 member that is! You got a lot of potentianal! ^^(Do we spell it like that?)Image: lol! The girl on the pic is the chick from Heavenly Sword, but the signature down the pic is ruining a bit the beauty. TTmTT Booo... Overall: 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 this is awesome for a 1 star!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 [align=center]There actually is an ocg error...by sending two Spell Cards from your hand to the Graveyard = by discarding 2 Spell Cards from your hand.9/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Thanks I will Have to change that right away! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 Spell Cards. When this card is selected as an attack target, this card gains 500 ATK until the end of the Battle Phase. Errors: -"may" = "can" -You're missing a space between the second period and "When". -"When a monster declares an attack target on this card" = "When this card is selected as an attack target." -Increase is outdated. "increase the ATK of this card by 500 untill the end of the Battle Phase" = "this card gains 500 ATK until the end of the Battle Phase". -"untill" = "until". Only one "l". Also, don't use "1st Edition" as your circulation, as the Card Maker messes it up by changing it to block capitals. If you must use circulation, use "Limited Edition". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Ok thank-you will also change all of these errors! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 For 1 star perfect 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zase45 Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingsleyduel Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 umm 9.5 out of ten still try to use can and not may Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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