darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macsmack Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 bad pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 OCG check ^^: "This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase if this is the only monster on your side of the field." Relic isnt a type and bad pic sorry but 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 thats why its my 1st card im not used to the system yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Simple effective, effect!! But the pic is blurry maybe try getting a bigger sized version of the pic you have. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Well If you work on it it'll probably turn out great! keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 k thx ^^ i edit pic and etc maybe i can get it before today ends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 The picture is blurry. Relic isn't a type unless you are trying to make a new one which is fine. The OCG is okay, but somewhat broken. Effect: This card may attack twice in one Battle Phase if it is the only monster card on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 If this card is the only monster your field, it can attack twice during the Battle Phase. Pic:Black barsblurry=bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 yeah :3 just keep trying and it'll work out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 i made a second one dif monster but i fixed most of the blur of that 1 and fixed the grammer for the new monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 cool well you should post it (do it in this thread) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 srry if it still has issues Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Oh its fine ill just help you out. If you ever have any OCG questions pm me ^^ Ok when you want to put a _______ phase in your effect capitalize the first letters (Ex: Standby Phase) Your ocg is a little better but dont forget your punctuations OCG check: "Discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. You may use this effect once per turn during your Standby Phase."But thats great for a 2nd try! pic is still blurry but its still easy to see what it is and I think you should state that your making Relic a new type otherwise you'll get hate comments for it ^^ my rating: 5/10 (im giving you an honest one not to be harsh but to help you get better) keep going^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 i will put more up here for 2 reasons 1 for you to look at 2 2 see if there improving it did from last time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 oh sorry if im being mean or doing something that you dont like ^^' really yes your second card is an improvement a big one too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 your not being mean and here this is not a relic monster this was made for a insect pack the relic will be continued and srry if its a little OP for its lvl (effect wise)srry for random adding just trying to make a mix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 hey i could give you an advice the pics in deviantART are cool and thier not blurry i totally recommend that site anyway nice tries 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 o ty for that ive been having prob with the imagesi found this there it looks pretty goodstill going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 effect far too simple, but a good effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 imma keep these coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nice Card.Effect Is Kinda Boring. And Isnt that pic Sasori? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 i think so and i just started so there r some stale cardsHiaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Bad pic effect is ok name to 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkgamerEX Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 yea 2 hard things ine not to mess up grammer and 2 finding some non blurrry or good pic is hard on my comp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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