TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 funk This no one wants to read this go get some mods to lock this bull... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 is that the whole story????spoilers???chapters??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 What he said! That's it? Also, you need to fix your grammar and make sure the whole thing makes sense. What's a "holo orb"? And what does Shade even look like? The grammar is odd. Look at the sentences and compare them to those in a real book. Don't they look...DIFFERENT? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nope im not finished and im not writting a book i got bored yesterday and here i am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 What he said! That's it? Also' date=' you need to fix your grammar and make sure the whole thing makes sense. What's a "holo orb"? And what does Shade even look like? The grammar is odd. Look at the sentences and compare them to those in a real book. Don't they look...DIFFERENT?[/quote'] Shade is described in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 So,... that's it?I was allready pissed of to see someone stole my title.I didn't even bother to read the entire thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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