gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 1 fiend type monster + 1 fiend type monsterthis card can be summoned with out ploymeration.this card gains 1000 atk and def points for each monster in both you and your oppoenents graveyard1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monstersincrease this cards atk by 100 for every card in your opponent's graveyard. if this card is destroyed in battle special summon it back to the field in upright deffense mode you cannot change the battle position of this card until your 3rd after you used the effect. increase this cards atk by 100 for every card in your opponent's graveyard I know that there are errors so dont tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Good! but the 1st card is overpowering make it harder to summon and lower his attack increase amount to 700. your second card has a weird sounding effect so patch that up a bit and you have loads of ocg (PM me about it if you need help) other than those i give you.......6.9/10 (its low because of the OCG) but keep it up and fix up the cards its a great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 i changed the effects up a bit1 fiend type monster + 1 fiend type monsterthis card can be summoned with out ploymeration if this card is summoned through this effect this card is destroyed at your end phase.this card gains 700 atk and def points for each monster in both you and your oppoenents graveyard1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monstersif this card is destroyed in battle special summon it back to the field in upright deffense mode you cannot change the battle position of this card until your 3rd after you used the effect. increase this cards atk by 100 for every card in your opponent's graveyard this card can only be summoned by the effect of woman in despair this card gains 200 deffense points for each spell card in your graveyardwhen this monster is summoned to the field all monsters on your opponent's side of the field cannot change battle positions.when this monster battles a monster in deffense mode if this monster's atk is higher than your opponents monster's deffense points your opponent takes damage to the difference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Some OCG Errors But Nice Pic. 7/10 I am ~Out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I thnik your first card should sound more like this mate.... 1 Fiend-Type Monster + 1 Fiend-Type MonsterThis card can be Special Summoned without the effect of "Polymerization" if you activate this effect this card is sent to the Graveyard during your End Phase. This card gains 700 ATK and DEF points for each monster in both players Graveyards. If I can edit to what I think you may do.... A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card can be Special Summoned without the effect of "Polymerization" if you activate this effect you must discard your entire hand to the Graveyard, this card is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase this effect is activated. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF points for every monster in both players Graveyards. If I can help anymore PM mate...keep working on it and keep the cards coming!!! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I edited the card a little moreand i also changed the attributtesrry the effect is!.......A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card can be Special Summoned without the effect of "Polymerization" if you activate this effect you must discard your entire hand to the Graveyard, this card is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase this effect is activated. This card gains 700 ATK and DEF points for every monster in both players Graveyards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 You have some OCG errors 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 the 8th sinedited 8th demonoh yay im making a fanfic so pm me if you have an idea foa character it is based on the time between yu gi oh gx and 5ds , the evil guys will be using the inner demons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 ill be coming out with more inner demons laterokay this next one is the good guys strongest monster in my fan fichere are the newest inner demonsat the end phase of your turn you can choose not to send this card back to your hand by discarding one card from your deck to the graveyard. this card gains 100 atk points for every trap card in your opponent's graveyard.this monster also counts as a normal type monster. this card cannot be destroyed in battle. when ever this card attacks the controler of this card must discard 1 card from their hand to the graveyard if not the controler of this card takes 1000 points of damageyou can attach this card to any type monster on the field then activate 1 of the following effects*if you equiped this card to one of yur own monster you add half the atk points of that monsterto your life points every stand by phase.when the monster you sected is destroyed in battle this card is also*if you selected one of your opponent's monsters you can take control of it.if the selected card is destroyed you can unequip this cardfrom that monster. then it gains half the atk points of that monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 8/10 for new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Well good effects and still loads of OCG. Good pics and some misspelled words. sitll goode 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I like the pics Minor spelling errors First card's effect is too powerful though. I'd drop the gain to only 500 points 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 4/10Don't like the pics, sry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Envy,Wrath? OCG and grammar errors. GluttonyEnvySlothGreedEnvyWrathGreed ^Seven deadly sins^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 another edidted version of pride1 fiend type monster + 1 fiend type monsterA Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card can be Special Summoned without the effect of "Polymerization" if you activate this effect you must discard your entire hand to the Graveyard, this card is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase this effect is activated. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF points for every monster in both players Graveyards.edited despair but now its called envygluttonysrry this is envy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lord Creator Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I love the inner demon idea. But yeah you should make them harder to summon. It would be total ponage with them so make it harder to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Aiku: *look at the cards with a discusted face.* I hate them.OCG: I felt sick when I first saw your cards at the begining of this threat, and I still fell sick just looking at their OCG. There's so many errors, that could pulled me into a depression. I know that I make a whole deal over it, but it's not fun to read your cards with so many errors. Plus, your Gemini Gluttony, read the Gemini effect to understand how it works and so does the union with the Spirit one, too. The only one I could say that's alright is the Pride, but that's it, the rest is just beated to death.fiend type = Fiend-typedeffence = DEFgraveyard = Graveyard spell = Spellone = 1With much more...And avoid creating divine monsters, it's the realistic section, you should read the rules.Effect: The effect doesn't even match with the original Seven Deadly Sins. I did once 7 cards on this theme and the effects are liked with the Sin itself. I say that we're too lazy to try to find an original effect for your cards and, maybe, to do some research on them.Image and Name: Some names and images are well macthed, but the Greed, Anger (Wrath) and Sloth's image are completely random. Try harder next time. MUCH more harder. Overall: 0.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 k well ill post up more monsters but thats all for the inner demons ill be editing those also Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 OCG is off, pics are meh, effects are meh. Meh/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 8/10 on the first, the bonus is too high. 10/10 on the second one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesboy100 Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 OCG errors but its still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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